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Heavenly Bodies in the Hot Springs

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A pair of lips found his, and left a gentle peck. Then another kiss, slightly long, teasing, tempting greater things to come. He tried to reciprocate, but she dodged, lifting her head out of the way with a giggle. His lips met only air. He mewled weakly, and was rewarded with a deep, passionate kiss. Her tongue penetrated his mouth. Their lips locked, embracing each other amorously. Multiple hands emerged from the water to caress his chest, his abdomen, his thighs. His entire body was being stimulated, from his lips to his cock; not an inch of his flesh was ignored.

The hand around his cock stopped. He sighed. They wouldn't stop now, would they? They couldn't! He'd end up with priapism at this rate if they didn't offer a cure. Girls shuffled. Bodies moved. The water splashed. He stayed quiet, not even breathing, trying to hear who was where.

A plump warmth enveloped his manhood, soft, yet firm. What was it? Suddenly, he realized: one of the women was using her breasts to masturbate him. The breasts were pushed together as the girl slid herself up and down along his shaft. They felt large. They rested heavily on his thighs. Who was it? Ayaka was too small...but it could be any of the other three. Would Desiree dare do something so audacious? Or was it Irene? Or Sisi?

A tongue flicked across the tip of his cock. He quivered. Her wet breasts massaged his cock. Long, hungry kisses began to be peppered across his chest, slowly working their way down to his crotch. Thin, deft fingers swirled circles around his nipples, bringing them to hardness. He began to breathe heavily. A pair of lips wrapped around his cock and began to gently suckle the tip, as though thirsty for cum.

He thought of reaching up, of tearing off the blindfold, to see whose mouth was embracing his hard, throbbing cock, but he thought better of it. He didn't dare end this paradise. The mystery was unbearable, but he'd rather anything than stop this too soon, not when he was so close to the end.

He groaned, unable to restrain his desire any longer. Someone kissed his lips, then moved down to his earlobe and neck. He twisted his head, offering himself to her. The heavy weight of breasts lifted off of his thighs, and again, he felt positions shuffling as his neck was gently nibbled and his chest caressed. Two pairs of lips found their way to his thighs. Wet hair played across his body. Their fingernails ran across his legs and crotch, always stopping just short of his trembling cock, teasing him mercilessly, approaching it and retreating, coming close with false promises. He thrust his hips upwards, trying to force them to touch him, to grant him relief, to end his suffering, but he received only laughter. Kisses rained down upon his body everywhere, everywhere but where he most deeply desired them.

He panted laboriously. He was so close... His cock throbbed sorely. He felt as though he were going to cum without his cock even being touched. He didn't want such a wonderful orgasm denied to him and turned into a weak, dribbling ejaculation. He wanted to cum inside one of them, badly. "Please..." he begged.

His prayers were answered. A strong, moist, hot tongue brushed up against his shaft, licking him from the base of his cock, slowly along the sensitive underside of his shaft, all the way to his swollen, thick head, where it swirled around his tip, relishing the pleasure it was bringing him. She flicked her tongue rapidly back and forth against his tip, teasing him with what he could soon expect. He raised his hips, wanting her to take him deeply into his mouth, but he wouldn't be allowed that, not yet. A second pair of lips kissed his balls lightly, slowly, before beginning to suck them rhythmically, taking one into her mouth at a time and gently sucking it before releasing it and doing the same to the other. She licked his balls, caressing them gently with her tongue, before making her way up to his shaft.

Two tongues, two pairs of lips, now pleasured his manhood, working together to stroke his shaft. His cock was trapped between their tongues, massaged and stroked, as they danced around him, slipping around his cock passionately and hungrily. They fought over the right to his cock, like girls competing over one popsicle, each trying to out-do the other and gain the entirety through sheer determination.

Finally, one conquered, and wrapped her lips around the head of his cock, taking his shaft deeply into her mouth. She bobbed her head vigorously, her tongue stroking his cock back and forth. Other hands stroked his chest and grazed their fingernails along his ass. Someone kissed him passionately, her hand against the back of his head, forcing him against her. He reciprocated, pulling her into him, sucking her lower lip, and all the while another woman was bringing him to orgasm with her mouth.

She licked and sucked and bobbed and soon she had nearly drawn his orgasm out of him. He felt himself approach the edge, and fall. He gasped loudly as his body reacted, his muscles quivering, his cock spasmed inside her tight, warm, wet mouth, releasing his cum inside of her mouth. She grasped his cock gently with one hand, guiding him. He felt her mouth contract as she swallowed once, twice, greedily taking every last drop inside of her, unwilling to waste even a single ounce of his essence. She moaned in pleasure, contentedly suckling his cock dry.

Kyle let out a slow, deep, exhausted breath. A hand reached to his eyes and removed the towel from his eyes. The world returned. Sisi took the warm, moist, soft towel and lightly dabbed his wilting penis, cleaning it tenderly. Her cheeks were flushed red. He was sure he was in the same condition, watching her affectionately manipulate his manhood, lifting it and moving it so that she could wipe it clean with the white cloth.

"Wow..." was all his brain could handle. There was no other way to describe what had just happened to him in words. The snowflakes continued to rain down upon them, finding their final destiny upon the steaming bodies of these beautiful women.

"Did you enjoy it?" asked Sisi, biting her lower lip.

"Incredibly so," he confessed. "I just wish I could return the favor."

"Well, the night's still young," Ayaka mentioned. "Would you mind keeping a few unattended maidens company tonight?"

He smiled. "Not at all. But you have to promise that you'll let me treat all of you as well as you've treated me."

"I promise."

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Thank you for reading!  Please vote and comment; I love to receive feedback from readers, and I'd greatly appreciate any comments or constructive criticism you may have.  I've been wanting to write a scene like this for a while, but I couldn't find a good place for it in any other story, so I decided to just make it a story all by itself.

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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Excellent. I want the same experience!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wow! Needs a part2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot!

Boy i can't wait for the sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
awesome...

awesome story, enjoyed it very much... - but when do we get the chance to read a sequel? The night is still long...

kiteareskitearesalmost 6 years ago
Never happened to me...

...in all the cold nights I have spent with telescope and camera. Must be more careful when selecting my observation places.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Needs a Sequel

A story this good need to be finished.As I see it this is a great beginning to a series of short stories or a novel.

MatthewVettMatthewVettover 8 years agoAuthor
Author Here

, I plan to write that sort of story someday, so keep an eye out!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

While you've got a nice story here, I would have liked to have seen it as instead of a male being the main lead it instead. Went to a female if you ever write another one it would be fun to see that.

Dark_StormDark_Stormover 9 years ago
A good start.

But it is just that... a start, and not what I'd consider to be a complete story.

One guy with four ladies and all we have so far is essentially an anonymous blow-job? Which woman was doing what?

All of that could (and should) be explained by continuing the story. He should get a shot at all of the ladies, including a chance to introduce Desiree to the joys of sex. After all, he agreed to spend the night with the ladies and repay their generosity.

If there's one thing that really bugs me, it is stories that end by insinuating there is more to come, but then never deliver on it. Especially when the first part is good enough to warrant more. It's like a TV series ending with a cliffhanger, then getting cancelled. It leaves the audience unsatisfied.

One thing that didn't make a lot of sense to me is Sisi getting a cloth to wipe him off afterwards. They are out in a free-flowing hot spring, not in an enclosed hot tub or pool, so why bother cleaning him off and not just have him slip back into the water to wash off? Wiping him off might fit if they were on a bed, or something like that, but they are not.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Amazing

I especially liked the blindfold aspect and the multiple contact!! Two or more on one member is quite exhilirating!! Thank you!!

FunnyboneRFunnyboneRalmost 11 years ago
fogged up my contacts

hot, wet story. Thank you

Wish it could be expanded and drawn out a little. I'd like to know how the women became so comfortable with a group act, especially since they're going to spent some intimate time together.

My only quibble is, that I was distracted occasionaly by the appearance of the Vocabulary Olympics. I like to learn a little something when I read, but this story could use a glossary. Unless it's your goal that 95% of the readers don't get/appreciate your meaning, Is there a general guideline like I heard once for writing business memos, write it so a 5th??, 8th?? grader can understand it. I lose a moment when a state of arousal like blu balls is described in doctor humor as something like grandorous azur syndrome. At first the line: " "Look at you, sifting after all," praised Irene." along with ...where babies come from led me to believe Desiree was fingering herself. After looking it up, I still waffled on wether you meant the the Sh** I'd F**k That definition or the taking only the gravy/best part Urban dictionary meaning. I assumed the latter. Again for emphasis, it is only a quible. ( side tangent, before he stood up naked, I wanted him to ask Desiree to turn around (or go to her room) so she wouldn't be offended.

thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
WHEW! SOUNDS LIKE A PLACE I'D LIKE TO BE

TO BE CONTINUED I HOPE SEXUALITY TO BE EXPERIENCED IN A NATURAL SETTING IS THE BEST

MatthewVettMatthewVettalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Author Here

, I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it female friendly. I was a bit worried about that part. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Loved it!

Very Erotic story. This story is very female friendly and is the type of fantasy that you would be able to share with your spouse when exchanging fantasies especially with a new lover while not knowing what her boundaries are. This story could warrant a chapter 2 for the rest of the night but on its own, it had the perfect ending. Well Done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
worship the cock

i enjoyed your piece and wish it had gone longer. I dont mind the more descriptive writing and def dont mind that it is generally focused on a guys pleasure, yummy lol. keep up the good work ;) second one ive voted on so far, read 10 entries so far

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
My thoughts.

It's all very good, you are miles ahead of me (but I'll get there).

What I notice is that, to me at least but I'm sure more people will say the same thing, the actual sex act is your weakest point.

Have you tried 'penis' instead of 'cock' and 'sperm' instead of 'cum'? To me those 'sexualized' words miss their effect.

The parts where they lick his penis seems to be too detailed, and too 'zoomed in'. I personally like to say 'she licked his penis', instead of 'her tongue went up and down, leaving a trail of saliva on the shaft of his cock'.

It has the feel of a movie where they mix 'wide' shots with incredibly zoomed in shots, so imagine: girl leaves home - her forehead itches so she scratches it three times with the edge of her pink fingernail belonging to her index finger - she gets in the car that's waiting in front of the house

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Very nicely done

I enjoyed your story especially the nice slow introduction of the character and the accuracy of the technical details.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great

Great writing. Please do continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hope to see a continuation!

Great read! Very erotic. Please do continue...

Jim44444Jim44444almost 11 years ago
Very good.

Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
awesome!

definitely can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
very hot

can't wait to read the next part...

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