All Comments on 'Hidden Haven Ch. 11: Being Tested'
by LittleFreakyJessa
- 8 Comments
What an entertaining adventure. 5 stars for the exciting and well thought out test chapter. Well done. Great characters and great story telling. Ready for you to rock out more fun for our little girl. Thanks for your time to write and publish. Cheers
Love all the test. Your imagination is well there is none better. I do have a question. I understand why they would want muffy smaller, but why Tinkle tank? and why do they want floppy and Bobo large,? Or did I miss the reasoning somewhere? not that it matters just wondering. another 5 stars from me. thank you for sharing this with us.
Well, now that she is at the point of acceptance, I would very much hope you will be continuing this story. Best of luck with your continued writing.
I admire her imagination, which so completely strikes a chord with me. This part/continuation of the story is pulling me down deeper and deeper and I am so longing for a continuation. Please keep writing!
Pretty sick
Where does imagination end and the need for psychiatric help begin
10 chapters of pure horror
On the other hand, i would like to know how the women found each other, i felt the story did not have enough back story, so how did they decide to do all this, and what are they actually trying to achieve
Wow. Never read anything like it before and hopefully never will again.
But each to their own, good luck with future stories.
Please please provide an update! Loving this story! Ignore all criticism, if they leave it anonymous then they’re just a teeny bit insecure.