by Quinn_McMullen
Can't read that MANY pages with that MANY mistakes.
I read an "...I we've" & a "too" (meaning "also") with ONLY 2 letters!
Story was ok, nothing more. One question though, how did Hannah's letter get to him if she didn't know his address?
Five stars here.And I'd really like to see more of these characters -- except Jeff.
-- DaveK7
Great to have you writing and posting again. Great story. I hope you follow up with the developing relationship between Jeff and Daniel, Belinda and Trish. As always, a great 5 star read!
Thanks for sharing.
G
Excellent story great character development, excellent erotic story telling, really enjoyed reading it.