All Comments on 'Hugs Pt. 03'

This was building up nicely - I have a friend who would be only too happy to put himself in your situation (and I wouldn't be totally averse to being the female role). It built nicely, then kind of went off the rails and had a disappointing end where descriptive terms pretty much vanished.

Still a good premise.

Still too automatic. Too mechanical.

Still lacks details.

Still mentions sexual activities, but not sensually.

And you wrote: "...with one hand leaning high on the door jam and her hip thrust out towards the other side and her other hand on it. This is a very sexy pose. My mouth hung open looking at erotic picture she generated. She wore next to nothing, but it was something. It was like before not quite shear, but almost."

You mean "door JAMB". And SHEER.

Four stars.

To the anonymous commenter, thanks for pointing out the typos.

I’m so glad they went all the way! The tension of the buildup kept me reading. Hot descriptions