All Comments on 'Husband with Testing Device'
by Floydman1
- 10 Comments
Fantastic! We need more of this kind of imaginative writing and unique perspective.
This is such a great idea, I love the different things you and Razmagurk did. Maybe I'll have to write my own version ;) Hope you write more!!
Thanks for the feedback (with one exception)! As noted in the note at the beginning, both the title and the story itself were influenced very heavily by Razmagurk's "Girlfriend With Testing Device" stories. They're some of the most inventive stories I've ever come across, this is just my version of what would happen.
Poster who thinks it's stupid: why? If you don't want to leave constructive feedback, you should probably just leave.
Chapter 2 is mostly finished, it just needs some editing and I'm working on chapter 3. More to come! Lots of swaps and their consequences to follow! Stay tuned!
Best one I've read in a while, can't wait for the next chapters. Any eta on those?
I expected this would be more like Razmagurk story where more transformations happen, but was heavily dissapointed when the only thing that happened was groin swap, hope there would be more transformations as the story goes, and hopefully more get involved than the two protagonists
I also would like to find out the reactions of those office girls when they find a dick in their pants. Or one of the other guys when they find someone else's dick down there.