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by kazfow
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You've got misspelled words all over the place. Redo it and make it longer.
mind swapping stories like this never work
So he's obsessed with this woman, he finds his consciousness in her body, and he decides to have sex with another man??? In effect, he is having sex with a man. Unless the protagonist in this type of story is bisexual, this makes no sense.
He is obsessed but can't have her.. What he can have is her body and experience her most emotional / physical experiences.
I thought you did a nice job. There were some misspelled things throughout the story though which were a bit distracting. The premise about how the swap occurred was pretty inventive and fresh.
It was also a bit too brief for my taste but then again it appears it has multiple chapters.
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