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I Hate Him...

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So, I took my time, totally forgetting about Donna, and her potentially coming back. I was just immersed in this act. I noticed that he was inhaling and exhaling more deeply now, kind of calmer, in a more relaxed way.

"Can I?"

He slowly nodded. So, I pressed a bit more and... I finally bottomed out, his boipussy engulfing my whole length.

God, it was an exquisite feeling. I was now fully seated inside him. I glanced down. It looked so fucking sexy! My pubes pressed to his perfect, round ass, my dick hidden inside him. It was throbbing inside him like... all the time. Slight waves of blood pushing down, pulsing, one after another.

I felt the peculiar thrill of having him under me. In a normal everyday life, it was he - who usually had me under him, in our classes and during student debates. Not now - now he had to, submissively, take my hard tool.

Sadly, I was also feeling the exponential tension growing in my balls. They were also pressing over his balls. I knew it wouldn't be long, as soon as I started to move inside his heavenly passage. I have never been that tightly sheathed. The stimulus was just too powerful, the massage on my dick - truly intense and so fucking delightful.

I don't know how long I was gently rocking there, but as the time passed, I was slowly building my way to full on fuck of his ass, my pace more frantic, my thrusts deeper.

I was now growling like a wild boar, and rutting against his slim, beautiful body dressed in delicate blue dress, sliding my thighs over his thighs clad in thin white pantyhose. All my movements frantic, blasting forward, knowing I couldn't stay like this long, it was impossible. Simply impossible.

"I'm gonna fucking explode in your tightness...!" I muttered awkwardly into his ear, licking his neck and sucking on it, no doubt leaving him hickeys.

What I could hear from him were only little breathy moans, I could also vaguely feel him rocking his hips rhythmically, probably grounding his cock over the pillow under his crotch.

Was I interpreting it all correctly?

But I was too deep into my own lustful abandon to register anything clearly, so it could also be a dream.

And I had another vague feeling that it would be son-of-the-bitch-behavior if I just unload inside his body and left him like that, so I clumsily fumbled my arm, tugging it under his hips until I had his shaft in my grip.

I really didn't know what to do with his cock in this position, especially because I could not stop my own dicking, that was out of the question. So, I give him a short but firm command: "Hips higher."

And he... listened! Yep. Was he into taking commands?

I could feel his hips pushing toward my dick, more up, and it created a space beneath him, letting me wrap my fingers more firmly around him. Now, in the same rhythm I was pounding in him, I was also pumping his dick. Or - rather I was just pushing him from the top, so he kind of moved down by himself, in the process plunging his dick into my tight grip. My fist became like an artificial vagina for him, I was glad, it was still smeared with lube.

"I'm... not gonna... long..." I was trying to communicate this to him, but it sounded more like babbling under my breath. "Gonna... gonna... gonna...fill you full of my cum..."

I sped up even more intensely jamming it as deep as I could. I also heard sharp gasps of ecstasy from him, and then... I felt something unexpected.

It was like his rim pulsated with great force - his tight boipussy became even tighter, and he was spasming, clenching around my heated dick, milking it, sucking it...

I realized what it only could be, and it pushed me to my own climax. I roared and suddenly felt it - almost could trace its path! The way my cum was rising up in my dick and geysering, erupting my seed deep inside his quivering tunnel. A high-pressured jet of my jizz flooding him in such an amount, I had never ever shot before.

I could already feel rivulets of creamy cum dribbling from his pulsing pucker, still stretched with my shaft. I wouldn't be surprised if his belly became more round from this insane deposit of semen, I spurted inside him. My dick seemed to throb endlessly, spitting my load, pouring it... Orgasmic tremors rocked my body...

Suddenly, I noticed something weird.

The fingers of my left hand... were actually entwined with his fingers! My hand was covering his small hand, and we were holding each other!

Wow, and when did this happen?!

Weirdly intimate gesture as for such a wild fuck with my enemy.

Was he still my enemy?

I finally stopped - feeling boneless and dizzy. I was floating in post-orgasmic pink bliss for a moment, before I kind of started to remember why we started this at all.

Donna didn't come back, which was weird. Or maybe she did, but we were too busy to notice? I had no idea.

I very slowly backed out from his hot boipussy and sat on his thighs. I let out a deep exhale. He laid without moving, only panting rather intensely.

After some consideration, I decided to gave his hole an inspection, so I parted his ass cheeks and... wow, it was such a fucking erotic sight!

His stretched pucker was yawned open, properly fucked, a bit prolapsed, pink tissue to be seen inside, unprotected by glistening skin furled around, covered with pearly strings of cum. A masterpiece!

I literally moaned seeing it, feeling another wave of throbbing in my still semi-hard dick.

"Fuck, you look so fucking sexy down there..." I exclaimed, fascinated by such an erotic view.

And I could not stop myself. I leaned down and took his swollen pucker into my mouth, sucking on it, latching on it, tasting myself there, not caring about it, just wanting to enjoy his still so very fuckable opening.

Alex moaned...

And at that exact moment, the door opened, and I flinched a bit. I was so much into fucking Alex - the whole world seemed to cease to exist for a while.

Donna marched inside with her power walk.

She tilted her head and gaped.

"Wow, boys! I can see this challenge was more a pleasure than a disgusting dare!"

I was so fucking grateful, that I had managed to somehow zip my pants before starting to suck on his pucker, as me flashing my dick would be very weird to explain.

"You are done, challenge well executed! Bravo!"

Donna started to clap for a while, giggling stupidly. She seemed to be more drunk than before, maybe she was after some other dare?

"Soooo..." She put her hands on her hips. "Are you into Alex, Finn? Be honest with me."

I felt a weird rush of panic in me. How could I be?

So, I freaked out.

"No, are you crazy!?"

And then I caught his gaze - in that exact moment.

He seemed frozen. Weirdly pale.

So, I quickly turned my head aside, not to look him in the eyes. Because I knew, there was hurt there.

Donna burst into loud laughter and waved her finger in the air, and... she turned around, leaving again... we were left alone.

Alex slowly rolled on his side, and I moved away, so he could sit straight. I managed to see his spent dick and a white patch on the front of his dress, which was folded under him.

I kind of stared at that. "You... came also." I said the obvious in amazement, yes, a stupid comment - as I already knew that.

He reddened, but said nothing. As he pulled his dress down, and his stockings up, I observed him, biting my lip.

I felt like an idiot, but what could I say? He just gave me his ass virginity and I... denied that I had any kind of attraction to him. A bitchy move on my part. But to my defense - I was always... his enemy. My mind just did not catch up with my body. It was still anchored to the idea that we hate each other. That we held each other in contempt.

The sex... was meaningless. Right?

Right???

As he moved to pull his leg over my thighs, and put them on the floor, I caught one of his feet in the midair.

I wanted to say something. I even opened my mouth, but I couldn't formulate any coherent thought. I was hanging in a limbo, all words, all excuses, all... apologies... seemed impossible. Just... not destined to be spoken.

So, we both froze.

For a weirdly long moment we stared at each other.

Then he slowly put his bare foot on my chest.

I looked at it almost in slow motion. It was a small foot, pretty shapely, actually. And he had painted toenails, I could see through the thin fabric of his stockings. Each nail was in a different color.

And...

... he pushed me.

I fell from the mattress to the floor.

"What the fuck?" I raised my gaze at him.

He had narrowed eyes and winced. In contempt? In anger? In hostility?

"Now we're even, Finn. Get out."

I was like paralyzed. Our gazes were locked the whole time. I could feel the great tension in his body. He pursed his lips, it looked like he was fighting with something. Some... emotions?

"Get out!" He almost screamed, his lips trembling.

I flinched and moved away, dragging my ass on the floor. Just to be further away from him.

"We're... even? It was... a paying-off-debt for that parking lot situation for you?!"

"Sure it was. How could it be anything more?! Remember, we're not into each other. Right?"

I had a problem breathing for a moment. A weird cold feeling in my chest was making it difficult for me. But what could I do?

"Does it mean you're going to behave like a jerk toward me again?"

"Pretty much. Yes."

I tightened my lips feeling terrible, but I did not understand exactly why. Most likely because I screwed it up, didn't I? It was too late to back out on that. So, I slowly nodded.

"I understand."

His cheeks could not be more red, if that had been the case the blood probably would explode from his skin pores.

I stood up, adjusting my pants. I could feel my jaw clenched tight like I was in freezing water. I kind of quivered also; I seemed to have little control over my body now, experiencing unexpected pain in my chest.

I marched toward the door and glanced toward him one last time.

He was sitting without the slightest move, his eyes fixed on me. Even from that distance I could see, he swallowed hard. And he was not that red anymore, but rather pale.

I pressed the handle and left the room.

In the main room most people were sleeping, some still playing. I walked between them and toward the exit. There was a song in the background. "Never Enough" from The Greatest Showman. I stopped for a second, as I heard this verse:

You set off a dream in me, getting louder now.

Can you hear it echoing? Take my hand.

Will you share this with me? 'Cause darling, without you,

all the shine of a thousand spotlights,

all the stars we steal from the night sky...

Will never be enough, never be enough...

I could no longer listen to it. I felt a powerful jolt of anger and grief.

As soon as I was outside, and I could catch some deep breaths... I vomited.

I didn't know why.

Never be enough... Something was playing, repeating these words in my head.

Were we really even now? I should be grateful, should I?

But why did I feel so bad? Scared that I just lost something.

And why now...

...I hated him even a bit more than before?

The end

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Thank you for reading this!

Please leave me a comment below: Should I leave the story as it is, or should I publish a follow-up with a conclusion for Alex and Finn? Should they be together, or are they just... too different?

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LaceyboiLaceyboi12 days ago

I am pleased to have discovered your work and am eager to continue reading your story. Your writing is excellent, and I am enjoying every sentence. Thank you for sharing it with us.🥰

EdeyEdeyabout 2 months agoAuthor

, I appreciate your 5 star :)

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I always come back to your stories and this 5-star one never fails to get me (Im a horny hopeless romantic)

EdeyEdey5 months agoAuthor

but it has a good ending in the second part :D

pho3niliapho3nilia6 months ago

I cried so hard at the end

SissyditzySissyditzy6 months ago

Love this story! 💕

EdeyEdey8 months agoAuthor

, Thank you for your kind words!

Well, to answer your question - men like me ;) I like the blurred lines, the androgynous people, gender nonconformity. :) But in general, for some people who are closeted or have some ingrained lack of acceptance of the fact, that they experience same-sex attraction. The people who are "in the middle" between genders, are a way to ease them in - into the realm of non-straight sex.

BecketsleighrideBecketsleighride8 months ago

Conceptually beautiful. I love the idea of unexpected male attraction to a twink or femboy. It explores what drives male desire. Is it sex organs or visual stimuli? How many straight men would have sex with a person who looks devastatingly feminine but has a penis?

EdeyEdey9 months agoAuthor

The story for sure need to be more thoroughly edited, and I plan to do it soon.

I already edited the second part, but it awaits the moderation... two weeks now, haha :D.

The story becomes more of a pure romance in the second part, so it's not for everyone, as I mentioned in one of my other comments to you, I am a romance writer, and I do not specialize myself in sex-centered stories, which probably are the majority on Lit :) I'm more of a... niche writer here :)

VerbalAbuseVerbalAbuse9 months ago

Plenty of nice ideas. There's room for improvement.

I have found the story enjoyable.

EdeyEdey9 months agoAuthor

, thank you, I hope you will like the second part too :)

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

That was super hot! Unexpectedly great!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I am torn on this story. The writing is ok, some small errors. The beginning and end are great but the frat party challenges make little sense for the story. And as soon as he comes out of the room the party seems mostly over. People sleeping? Needs a bit of work but overall decent.

smoothed273smoothed273about 1 year ago

💖💖💖💖💋💋💋💋✌

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This has to be one of the best stories i have ever read.......It was more than sex, it was love ,it was passion, it was desire they hold for eachother in their heart.

I never comment on any story before. Thanks for writing this <3

EdeyEdeyover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you, I hope the next chapter won't disappoint you!

ShortyMacShortyMacover 1 year ago

Interesting story, well written and also erotic. Look forward to the next chapter. Thank you.

SissiAniSissiAnialmost 2 years ago

That was the sweetest story I ever read here...

Alex sounds so cheeky and cute, while Finn sounds exactly like my type of guy ;p

I'm sure part 2 is going to be even better.

Thank you for this cute story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story. I was going to request a sequel. Look forward to reading it.

sealandssdsealandssdalmost 2 years ago

You story is the savior of my he'll week.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hi,

Just such a tantalizing situation to be in…..or not in…but it sure looks like “in. “He. Was certainly enthralled with him….looks like more to come!

Beejay

EdeyEdeyalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Second part already published as "I hate him...No more"!

Please, check it out ;)

Laura1234Laura1234almost 2 years ago

Yes write more! It’s great. I’d like to see them together but I think you could do a good job however you write it

EdeyEdeyalmost 2 years agoAuthor

,

I have the conclusion sent to LE already it awaits for 4 days, since Friday. There is not much more I can only wait, maybe they'll decide to publish it ;)

I wrote a follow-up but it awaits for publication, the second chapter got rejected two times already, I hope they will finally decide to publish it... Keep your fingers crossed, guys 😍

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Easily one of the best stories on this website, and considering the lack of cis male pov stories in this genre, this was like a breath of fresh air.

Bluepoohstar08Bluepoohstar08almost 2 years ago

please continue and let them be together

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good start to a series, or as a stand alone story. Excellent writing & editing by the way. Whichever way you decide to go, please continue writing.

play7399play7399almost 2 years ago

Oh I loved this! Please continue. I am as interested in Alex’s perspective. Maybe you can give us some insight in your next chapter. I do hope they end up together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I loved it. I would like more of Finn and Alex. Finn needs to make it right with alex

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very Very hot! I'd love to see a part 2,perhaps with a bit more pantyhose play !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Controversial, yes, but as a romance idea - very interesting. Nicely written.

EdeyEdeyalmost 2 years agoAuthor

And there is a part two already written and waiting to be published ;)

Symphony

I always write HEA, I'm that predictable - so I hope you will be happy with the ending ;)

Yes, it's a bit of cliffhanger, but trust in me ;) It will be resolved 😍

It's finished and waiting to be published ;)

Yes, some parts are a bit annoying, I was stressing about that, but I hope the part 2 will be a reward ;)

Yes it's exactly like that ;) I'm glad you read it as it's from T&C category ;) I wasn't sure if you read it.

Sunnydaze361Sunnydaze361almost 2 years ago

Great story! The simmering feelings that Finn has for Alex and Alex’s interest in Finn shows that you definitely needs a part 2!

TheSymphonyTheSymphonyalmost 2 years ago

It was great until the very end. A moment of panic is understandable, but Finn should have made it right before leaving... hoping they will end up together in part 2. Looking forward to it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Next chapter please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story, needs a part 2, maybe even more.

furluvrcafurluvrcaalmost 2 years ago

Finn's actions give his true, if unacknowledged, feelings away. "I hate him" is basically his way of denying that he actually likes Alex; that he's attracted to him. Alex' reaction is completely understandable given how Finn behaved when others were around.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The story was actually good. I was a little annoyed reading it, but surprise, surprise motherfucker, it came out excellent! This is one of the most interesting and lovely stories I read this week. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Good story, well written, you are one talented guy. I love the angst element!

EdeyEdeyalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Dear people!

Thank you so much for all comments! In the morning I was pretty down as I received couple 1-stars and was convinced the story was total failure, too controversial - and angered people from both side of the aisle. :( To be honest - I didn’t care that much about the political viewpoints per se, as I am not an American - I just wanted to create the couple like Romeo and Juliette, that are so much different, yet… they can find some common ground. In the morning I started thinking I probably overdid it :D Thank you so much for bringing my hope back again! I promise the second chapter will NOT have any disgusting dares :D And it will have satisfying ending! Please, give me a chance and stay with me! :)

Your wish is my command! Wait for the next chap. :)

<“The angst!! They need to be together :( I love your writing but this ending hurt me.”>

Don’t worry. It will be better, I promise!

I hoped you liked these dynamics! :)

<”It doesn't matter if they are to different. It only matters if they want to be together enough to admit it and make it work.”>

Yes, I believe the same. During my uni years I was with people from both sides of political spectrum and I made it work somehow :) So everything is possible. :)

Thank you, and it will happen :)

You see, I planned it exactly as you said, they are both geeks! So they can find a way to be together :)

<”They should be together, political views it's one thing but they clearly have other things in common. And it's all about love 😍”>

Thank you, I have the same opinion! :)

Well, thank you so much! It so nice to read such words, it helps me find motivation to work even harder! I hope I will not fail you with the second chapter!

<”Yes, they are different and it may be a bit provocative but why not?>”

Exactly! :)

Yes, they both just need to… find a path on which they can walk together :)

.

I won't cut it, I promise :) I will publish next week! :)

<”I like the emotional torment and angst but could have done without the disgusting nature of the dares. Seemed gratuitous. You should continue the story though.”>

Yep, dares are disgusting, true :) But I could not find any other way for them to be put into the situation of licking… you know what :D(Spoiler!) Only dares like that came to my mind :D Any…gentler dares would not let the story unfold in this way. :)

MarassoMarassoalmost 2 years ago

I enjoyed that one a lot. Very interesting dynamic between characters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

MORE MORE MORE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The angst!! They need to be together :( I love your writing but this ending hurt me.

Christy_the_CDChristy_the_CDalmost 2 years ago

Great story so far! And I can't wait for Alex to be taken over knee and Spanked ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I like the emotional torment and angst but could have done without the disgusting nature of the dares. Seemed gratuitous. You should continue the story though.

Firsttimeforeverything99Firsttimeforeverything99almost 2 years ago

Yeah, you definitely need to finish this. Don't pull some Sopranos bullshit, like cutting to black.

lorenqtlorenqtalmost 2 years ago

I can see the story going either way. Finn clearly has things (thoughts and desires) he's working through. I can totally see them being together in the long term.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

need contin

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Yes, they are different and it may be a bit provocative but why not?

Reptilian_2099Reptilian_2099almost 2 years ago

Great fucking story. The build up was perfectly executed and there was no rush to “get to the good part”. You are a really good writer. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

They should be together, political views it's one thing but they clearly have other things in common. And it's all about love 😍

PlutoburnsPlutoburnsalmost 2 years ago

THEY SHOULD BE BOYFRIENDS! THEY DESERVE TO BE HAPPY WITH EACH OTHER AND GEEK OUT ABOUT TOLKEIN AND PROGRAMMING TOGETHER

vickiebonnevickiebonnealmost 2 years ago

I want more! Its a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It doesnt matter if they are to different. It only matters if they want to be together enough to admit it and make it work.

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