All Comments on 'Jeff Thousandaire Ch. 01'
by bluedragonauthor
- 20 Comments
i just think that this side story of john billionaire made the romance about taylor and john insignificant...
I just loved the story line, I can't wait to read the next part!
Relax, their time (and their story) are coming up soon.
So hot, I gave you 100 even without gokkun with food and bestiality for you are really a super writer. When I started reading literotica this was my criteria for the highest rating, but you broke my parameters. From the Billionaire series, the Asian player, A different kind of family, now this, all are scorcher, write write.
I feel silly I missed this before billionaires life but it fills in holes where I had to guess before. I love the mutual attraction with Jeff and Kaitlyn and the hit and miss thing. cool
This is a great side story, but would really like to see where the story goes with both Ashlyn and Taylor's babies and when does Casandra get pregnant?
Yeah. No thanks. I could have done without the supposed open relationship with taylor and john. If it was set up better than just alluding to some type of swingers key party orgy it ruins what was set up beforehand in the previous series. I really dont need to read about taylors conquests unless johns a participant to some hetero extent.
Taylor has had no problems with Nicole (well a little), Cassandra, Kaitlyn, and Lindsey so it is a little hard to be critical of Taylor. Besides her explanation of her relationship with John was very clear. What have should have gone through Jeff's mind was that he was being used as a human dildo. I was a little uncomfortable about this thing at first, but it wasn't out of the line of Taylor's early use of John in John Billionaire. Taylor is no Nicole here so she has some flaws. Bluedragonauthor is an exceptional writer for this forum and one of his goals is to make all of his readers drift out their comfort zone. This is the method he uses to make them think about the larger ethical aspects of sexual activity and perhaps challenge them to think a bit more than most authors. While other authors press a particular philosophy, Blue wants you to think about the ramifications and impacts on other people of all types of sexual activity. I think his work is very well done.
Just finished John Billionaire . Loved it and wanted to continue the story so I found this one thanks to your opening remarks in the first "Billionares' Life" chapter. Sorry, blueD. Nobody but an albino would have VERMILION eyes. That's not something you would have forgotten to mention in your description of her teenage perfection. There you go. I'm headed back to page one, now.
I take full responsibility for thinking years ago that the word vermillion was an adjective for green. Maybe the Spanish color "verde" had me confused? Many, many readers have since pointed this out to me over the years. It was a mistake, but I can't go back and edit this on Literotica so it's stuck there. My apologies if that threw you and everyone else off.
Totally fucked up the series for me… won’t bother with the rest of the series since Taylor’s going to be fucking everyone that comes along now…
Just another pathetic cuck writer fucking up a story with his weak beta bullshit.
I actually have no problem with swapping. Because it's fair. But I don't like someone who plays behind their partner's back. Especially if their status is official, not like Johnny used to when he slept with other women because his status was only friends with Taylor.
I don't know if my reading order is wrong. Honestly, I'm disappointed. I've read all of Johnny's series, and I've loved them so much and I'm so happy with the ending. But when I read that, the feeling collapsed instantly. But other than that, it's a great piece of work.
Very disappointed with the swapping. It was different before Taylor and John were engaged, and yes i get he has a harem, but you could have just let this guy have kaitlyn and left it there. I will not read anymore of this. Sorry.