All Comments on 'Jess was a Bitch Ch. 13'
by Turbidus
- 10 Comments
I have read this since chapter one. Few mistakes in this one but easy to look over. I await patiently for the next chapter.
It should be fun to see Jess getting it on with the other two couples.
Wow!!! I have no words to express my many thoughts about this chapter. It will be a long wait for the next even if it arrived tomorrow. Thank you for your work.
jess meets someone in mexico and thinks she is in love and doesn't wear the necklace when she returns home -jon is crushed and throws himself into his art and becomes famous -can tell this b reading jess's mind when jon leaves
A happy ending would top this off nicely. I think Jess is more in love with Jon than she realises. More happy chapters please as they get together as a couple and make babies.
Im hoping for a good ending, not that I am hoping for an ending soon, where Jess does come home with the necklace on but I can see it taking a different route like the one anon mentions, but I hope they are wrong. She should stay isolated away from the other 2 couples except for meals, no need for them to get involved with each other even more. This is supposed to be a difficult time for her, so for her to just jump into sex with them without Jon would make her feelings for her brother seem disingenuous.
One: hairy pits - gross.
Two: you kept saying that Caitlin kissed Gloria while it's the contrary.
Have your editor do a better proof read some names where switch around for a first time reader makes your mind look harder at the writing instead of the story
Why do l have the feeling the story is going to degenerate again into group sex?
This is beginning to get worse with the latent cuckoldry.
Will all the players in Cancun now fuck each other?
Also we need a real drama to happen before the end, so that the joining of the kids can be contrasted with the pain suffered.
4/5