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Click here"He took the babies, Laura! It was Henry. He took them!
"What are you saying, mom? Henry did this to you then took the girls?"
"Yes, him and some friends; Army guys I think. I don't know. They came in, tied us up, and Henry took the girls and left. He said he's leaving the country and we'd never see them again!"
My head was reeling with this information. Had I so completely underestimated him? I would never have thought he was capable of something like this. There must be another explanation. I finished untying her mom and told her to get dad out, then punched in Henry's cell phone number. I'll fix this, I thought. He'll get his ass back here with my kids or he'll be damn sorry.
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HENRY
The phone rang with the anticipated call from Laura. I had kept this phone and attached international service to it solely for this phone call. I let it ring 4 times before answering. "Hello?"
"You son of a bitch. Where the hell...?" I hung up the phone. It rang again moments later
"Don't you fucking hang up on me..." I hung up again. The phone rang yet again.
This time I spoke first. "Laura, this is your last chance to have a civil conversation. If I hang up again it will be the last time you hear my voice. Understood?"
I could almost hear her scowl through the phone. "Yes, I understand. Now what's going on? Why were my parents tied up and where are my children?"
"Well, let me answer those in reverse order. First, you no longer have children. Those that used to be your children are here with me where they will remain and you will not see them again."
"Bullshit, you bastard..."
"This is your last warning on language, Laura. Keep a civil tongue in your head or I'll just end this now. I only kept this phone number open as long as I did so we could talk one more time. After I hang up the next time this number will no longer work. So if you want answers you better watch how you talk. Clear?"
The tone of Laura's voice changed immediately. She likely thought she could still get to me but needed to seem chastened at this point. She was wrong, of course, but she didn't know that yet.
"Yes. I'm sorry, I'm just very upset. Imagine how I felt finding my parents tied up and my kids gone."
"And imagine how I felt being told I would be forced to support my slut of a wife while she screws anything that moves or face being denied my children. None of this would have happened if you had stayed home instead of going off and fucking 3 different guys? Yes, I had you followed. I know exactly what you did."
"Henry, baby, I didn't really mean it. I was just trying to get you to fight for me and show me how much you love me."
"We've been married for 7 years. I shouldn't need to fight for you anymore."
"A woman just likes to be reminded how desired she is, that's all."
"That's a crock of shit and you know it. Your mother explained it all to me: my role as 'provider and child rearer', my being rewarded with sex if I do a good job, and all the other men that will serve to satisfy your sexual needs since that was all they could manage. Well now you are free to try and pull this on someone else. You were a fool to think I would accept what you were trying to pull."
"Henry, please, I'm sorry. Just bring my kids back to me. I'll do anything."
"Sorry Laura. You've shown your true colors and that's the end of it. As I told your mother, you're welcome to try and find us, but we're living under different names and in another country. We have new birth certificates that don't even list you as their mother so there's no paper trail for you to hunt through. This is the first time I've ever been glad my parents died in that car crash. That would have made it harder to leave. Goodbye Laura."
I could hear her screaming my name as I disconnected the call and tossed the phone into the water.
I turned to my 4-year old companions. "Okay Lucy, Janie, what should we do today."
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- COMMENTS
I pity the fool! Had a whole A-Team vibe goin for it. Very silly. This is what happened to Murdock and why he's single. LOL
He marries outside his tribe, then gets owned, but instead of heading to the hills he doubles down on his mistake.
Ignore all the sissy cucks who have hurt feelings because MC took care of business.
How about this epilogue:
Gary and Margret sparred no expense and they finally found and confronted Henry in a small obscure town in the Italian Alps. They were sure they had him until, too late they discovered he'd become the local Don. Nobody ever saw those two pieces of shit again since parts of them had been scattered in several places. When the cheating skank slut Laura tried to show up she was intercepted. Henry met her in an abandoned warehouse. "Laura, you stupid whore bitch, let me share some final thoughts with you. Both your parents have been murdered in cold blood. Guess they should have stayed home. Their last sight was me laughing at them. Now for you, death is too good. Some pals of mine own whore houses in Moscow. Enjoy the rest of your short life until the STDs get you! BTW, the kids don't even remember what you look like. Chow trash!" Laura was never seen west of Moscow again. Dad and kids lived happily ever after.
Ridiculous....absolutely unbelievable. Its only saving grace is that it was so short.
It needs a follow up with one of your excellent romantic endings.
Pleeeease ??????
Could have been a great story, but boy did that get stupid at the end. Why go off and make it so unrealistic with all the superhero crap? Not even believable. Should have put it in the fantasy category.
One thing I love about this story is it's by Bigguy33 and it's NOT a cuck story!
Only in fiction. What about his army buddies? They all get off scott free? Kidnapping is a federal offense. No epilog. The wife and her mother were maniacal. The husband went nuclear. Not believable on both sides.
This can never happen in the cold real world, but a good BTB yarn nevertheless.
Good story, but it's missing the aftermath including their reactions/regrets.
: I presume that you didn’t intend to raise your son to abuse his future wife. There are legitimate reasons to remove children from a parent, and the vile, evil, demonic plan of the mother and grandmother in this story certainly warranted it!
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Frankly, to ensure that the witches don’t try again with another man, and more children, the MC should have used his resources to “disappear” the villainesses, instead of leaving.
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ZK
Our system is broken. It's good we don't have more people acting out. We see women using guys as ATMs. We support malicious behavior in women. This is one of many negative outcomes. The destruction of the family is a way to conquer a nation without firing a single shot.
Read this story a couple times. I'm sure my take won't sit with the BTB crowd, but I have issues with parents stealing kids away from the other parent and never letting them be seen again. But then having an Ex take my son away at 7 years old and me never having seen him since might be the reason for that!
This was a good story and I gave it five stars. The consequences of Laura’s actions were justified. She tried to threaten Henry with financial ruin if he did not go along with her fucking other men while he remained married to her and support her financially. This was a well-thought-out plan and a very good short story about the consequences of cheating on her husband. Great job!!!
With her love of cock and now insufficient funds to support herself and her parents, Laura will no doubt become a whore, selling her body to strange men. She already is comfortable fucking strange men, so that will be no problem. Avoiding unwanted pregnancy and STDs will require constant vigilance, and she may even come to embrace her new life. Drugs could of course intervene and she could end up as a junkie whore on the street sucking and fucking for her next fix. This was quite a fantasy story.
Fourth time through and it is just as much fun as the first time. She should feel lucky, if she really thinks about it and he could pull this off then imagine what he could have done to all three of the losers in that house. I would have taken a page from another story and had all 3 tied up and explained like he did except that they wouldn’t have time to look for him since their days and nights Luke be filled with working in the whorehouse that they were sold to down in Mexico. I would even have them surgically altered to really fuck with their minds. Still this is a great story that I love to read. Five ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️!
"brothers in arms" = "exmilitary gang"
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