by yellowjacket66
Pretty good story, but the euphemisms she used seemed a little out of character. ‘Trouser Snake’ and referring to her own anus as her ‘tailpipe’ just wasn’t quite right.
I always thought about men grabbing my wife, overpowering her and raping her. Taking their time and making her cum again and again before sending her back after proving how easy she was.
At first I thought "MAN! this is a stupid story", but then I got past the beginning and could feel her confusion. Was this set up by Ben? Are they really raping me to get even with Ben? Should I resist or just submit? The cabin scene is incredibly hot. The big reveal at the end made the story really neat. I wonder if women really have rape fantasies? I mean rape is not about sex, but about having power over someone. It is usually brutal and painful. I doubt there would be many orgasms under those circumstances.
I don't find rape erotic, so that was a negative for me. Your construction of the story with its twists was pretty good.
Nice twists. Very hot with the buildup and tension. I like that she wasn’t actually raped. Good story.