All Comments on 'Kidnapped into Sexual Slavery'
by oliver57
- 24 Comments
Did you write this? Because I've read this exact story somewhere else before a few years ago.
To reply to Author if I wrote this, yes. I have published it elsewhere, however, and with a different though similar user name.
Excellent! Well paced sex scenes, Perfect descriptions, I liked the characters. Write more like this - lots more!
Erotic as all Hell! Pay no attention to the writing criticism. You could stand improvement, but so can we all! The writing is good, the characters are interesting, and the story is well laid out. If you write more, I will read it.
Jesus Christ. That's some David Parker Ray Toybox Killer type shit. Sexual Sadism. Definitely erotic though.
Holy fuckin hell! This was something else! I never thought I'd be aroused by such hardcore femdom. I'm more of a gentle femdom laced with mild humiliation guy myself but this somehow pushed all the right buttons.
Yes, this is real hardcore FemDom but very exciting. I had a Mistress once that came close to that with me, but she could on;y keep me for an overnight. Great Story, thanks for writing.
Fabulous domination story! wish there was a further chapter or so, but I guess that the author has given up on ideas?
Ok, 5-Stars, for a male fantasy!
Hallo Oliver!
When I was working the nightclubs in Europe I knew several sadistic women like your Ellen, in fact I'm a very sadistic woman myself... with one glaring difference, I'm a lesbian with no love at all for men, and young brian would not be having these silly fucking male fantasies, not if I had gotten my hands on him, that I guarantee! ;-)
Danke.
WEIRD, DIFFERENT FROM THE NORM, BUT ENJOYABLE.
There is an earlier comment, by Mattenw, saying the story is implausible. He, and other readers with the same opinion about stories, don’t seem to realise this site is not about erotic autobiography’s but imaginative writing.
*****
I’ve written, using another name, entirely imaginative stories and also stories about my own experiences but I like to think they are all erotic and enjoyable. Those red thingies seem to say the people who’ve read them think so.
Only on page three but had to jump over hear and mention how impressed I am with this story! Thank you so much for posting, LOVE IT!
I was sure I would hate this, but it is a great fantasy, really well written. I don’t want to shoot anyone, but I enjoy John Wick and Jason Bourne movies, so I guess it’s not all that weird to find this erotic. Thanks for posting.