by EllenMelville
Thanks for a fun and original story! I'm assuming Kiraz is a real person in your life? The submissive element was fucking hot. I love the thought of my wife doing this for me, giving herself completely to me for my pleasure! It's a beautiful fantasy!
Five stars dear!
You are a golden fan! I do love stars. The first six ratings I got on this story were all fives. Two hours later five more people had checked in and the rating was way down.
Other than feeling that someone is sharing my favorite fetish (writing erotic), the point of stars is to more readers, especially to get a rating of "hot." But you know all that very, very well. Really talking to other readers. 1,400 readers (or at least "hits") and 11 who took time to rate. As though I don't have other things to do on Christmas Day... Hope your Christmas is fun.
Joel, you are the golden fan. Your insightful appreciation is one in...maybe a million... on Literotica. I hope you and your family are enjoying the holidays.
Fascinating tale!
The first person perspective with sarcastic commentary really makes this unique, especially since our narrator has her own sexual agenda to reconcile.
A fun read, but equally disturbing.....hence worthy of 5 stars!
Along with Joel Felton. Comments here on Literotica are pretty rare. Insightful, perceptive, and well expressed comment are pure gold. Thanks for commenting, I hope that you read my other stories. I view writing erotica as a true sexual fetish--that is, an activity or practice not inherently sexual that provides sexual stimulation. And the REAL stimulation comes from comments indicating appreciation of what I am trying to say.