All Comments on 'Love Can Conquer All, Even A Dragon!'
by Parker92
- 13 Comments
it was sad his first mate died but the rest of the story was so romantic
I think you're off to a good start. This was a nice little story. The way you portrayed the relationship between humans and dragons, while not unique, is one that can play out in different ways.
I really enjoyed your story, but feel it is a bit childish / immature in its references to sexual acts / parts which leave it a bit lacking. Also, more Fantasy than Erotic Horror. Other than that, a good read and hope you'll write some more.
A sweet romantic story. I think it would be interesting if there was a similar story with a man chasing a female dragon.
I was captivated by this well written work.
I enjoyed reading your 1st story in Lit. Thankyou for sharing it with us. I look forward to reading many more of your stories.
You spend a lot of time describing the characters and their activities, and that part is well-done. The foreplay is also very descriptive. But the actual sex is a let-down; It's oddly lacking in detail and could use some revising.
Otherwise a very good idea! I look forward to reading more from you!
Wonderfully tender and was paced very well. I hope to read more stories for you!
The sex was a bit strange, but the tale was well told.
HP
PS. An arrow is "nocked" (where the string is engaged in the 'nock' of the arrow".
It is not KNOCKED.
I love romance both characters were very likable I hope you continue to write.