All Comments on 'Love Thy Family Ch. 01'
by touchmate
- 9 Comments
is this ur first story? its a gud beginning. i guess u need to tune up more wen it comes to the narrative so that u can sustain the level of interest. also include more descriptions of the female characters than the usual description. after all an indian story how abt dressing them up in sarees? expecting the second part
As usual a very literate story which could have been expanded with much longer descriptions. I find touchmate improving over time. I expect more and better from him.
wonderful build up...carry on..so mnay possibilities ere... dominating lesbians for example..would love to see this continue.. waiting eagerly
Very well written story and looking forward to Ch 3. Would love to read more about Shekhar and Smita. Keep the good work going.
good story -- believable twist-- looking forward for next part :)
In a truly loving family stupid social conventions are cast aside. Boys and their moms, dads and their baby girls, big brothers and their kid sisters approach each other with deep love and also with rampant lust. The sexual tensions that exist in every family come to the surface and burst open. No need to hide any longer. The son slides his fat young penis up the warm welcoming vagina he came out of. The father introduces his big veiny daddy-dick to his darling girl's darling little coochie. Big bro gives it to his little sis, good and hard! and blows his brotherly balls up her tight little twat. It's family cocks up family cunts, and family balls splattering family semen up family twats. Family bonding in the best sense of the term.