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Click here"So, is that what we're doing here?" I asked. She nodded as she took me back into her mouth. The prospects of what could be began to run through my mind, and I was nearly instantly hard again.
"So, what's next?"
"Well, we're going to learn to be adventurous together. Mom would be proud of us, and in our new home, I think she will remain close to you through our adventures!" She smiled.
That night, we fucked. We fucked all night. It was clean and dirty all at once. I remembered the time Mother told me not to be overzealous, as I would soon not be able to do all the things I wanted to do. I never knew what she meant until that night.
We were both raw and exhausted.
The next morning, I made her breakfast, and we pulled notes from the box one by one and talked about them.
After death, Mother truly managed to make me happy, as her light shined through the eyes of my wife.
- COMMENTS
First, I am so sorry for your loss.
I liked this and the way it flowed. The punctuation was fine. If grammar is the only complaint, then everything is okay. No two people are going to agree on how to quote a quote. I enjoy you and your late husband's work.
Great story. It was a nice chamge of pacevfrom the usual mother son trope in literotica.
Anonymous - if by improper use of quotation you're talking about the omission of the closing quotation mark until the last paragraph, that is actually a legitimate technique, and for some people the only correct one for quotations of more than one paragraph.
A very strange story in the way it is written, but still a very worthwhile read. Not a tug and cum type of story, but instead it's a story of love between a young man and his mother. The ending was nice as well because there wasn't the need for guilt and deception any longer.
Nice story but there were too many quotes and not enough about the sex!! There should have been more about their sex life after they left the hotel, you skipped to far ahead. Him loosing his mother brought him so much pain you should have written more about this!!!! Gave it 3 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Content can sometimes glaze over the bad grammar, punctuation and spelling. My only issue is the contractions and their tic (‘). It interrupts the glow. Good sriry with avaurprise ending. 4*
Please use quotation properly. If you don't know how to use then don't use.
The technique was a bit clumsy, and the prose far too wordy.
That said, somehow you managed to put what felt like real emotion into your story, so it worked despite its flaws. I really enjoyed it. The characters were likeable and the pacing was good - not rushed, but not boring either.
I'm going to check out your other pieces.
Revealing their love, feelings and desires for each other through their notes and phone conversations is so beautiful and exciting. It is much more beautiful than their physical union and consummation.
Kinda silly and hard to follow due to all the quotes (within a quote). Not sure how this story is rated so high.