All Comments on 'Lustful Sunday'

Please continue

I love the story so far, please write some more chapters.

All depends the story was a good start but all depends on what you are thinking of doing me perhaps have them run away together get “married “ ( either by a Craigslist person or other ) get her pregnant with her son being the father and live there lives to the full but knowing what they are like on this section you would probably have them have sex then he goes away it’s just they are getting all the same lately mom and son do the deed then the writers just send them away from each other instead of doing a type of romance between the two and stay together

Yes, you need to follow up on this. You have the ground work laid for an erotic and romantic story. Can't wait to read of her taking his virginity and teaching him how to please. Don't quit now!

Great story, you have to continue it. Pick up right where you left off. And since thou left the door wide open, the storyline can go anywhere.

I like your writing style, but there was so little development in this one. A good story has a setup, transition, and a payoff. A really good taboo story includes many of the protagonists thoughts.

The setup was too short and when he asked her to see her again, you missed an opportunity to generate a lot of sexual tension - A realisation that her son found her attractive could have built nicely to make the transition somewhat believable.

The transition was totally unbelievable as you hadn't developed her character at all. The premise of the story did allow for her frustration to grow, but you went for the payoff to quickly.

I'd just use this story as an exercise in writing and examine it to see where you would have improved it. Then write a really good story.

Thanks for taking the time and good luck with your next story.

Please continue the story, it's a great start and I'd love to read more of what fun they have.

This is good. Please continue!

Not just this story, but maybe the last 9 or 10.

Have had great starts but they never finish I

hope this is not a new trend starting, PLEASE

finish your stories, don't keep us hanging.

PLEASE continue with the story

Great story. Nicely written.

Thank you all for taking the time to read this story. This was meant to just be a short one, I may continue the storyline in the future. I have a lot of projects in the works as well.

Thank you for the support.

Couldn’t have said it better Dom j69 kudos. Great advice

As Elaine got ready for bed, she had become even more angry at her husband for not coming home for his birthday. At the same time, she noticed how wet she was, knowing how Ricky's cock had made her hornier than she'd been in years....Five stars.

It was very good with a very bad ending. 3 stars

a chapter 2

I think you should write more where they left off.

What's with all the mommy crap? Is this a three yr old story?

Its sooo....spontaneous. So natural. It really feels like a real event and an experience. Pleease continue the storyline... Pleeease !

Please do a follow up xxx

Too much jacking off and blowing. Ricky should have had time to fuck his hot mom. He should have jumped Elaine when she had her robe open. All the cum and juices would drip down onto her robe.

If my mom had her perfect tits on display for me to jackoff, I'd have found a way to be squeezing them and sucking on her nipples before fucking her pussy hard.

I think there needs to be a part 3

Wow lets have more of this story mmm

Fuck!!! Was so close to cumming!! I need more of this story

Great story. You did a great job.

Would love to see a continuance of this, phenomenal job

Very exciting story. Thank you.

If I'm getting my cock sucked by any woman.... neighbor, girlfriend, sister, or my mother you can rest assure that I will be eating that pussy and sliding my fat brown cock deep in some wet pussy.

I don't want to fuck the pussy a month or a week later. I want that pussy right then and there.

I loved it. Had a rock hard boner throughout the story. Mom son incest is the best. Wish you'd write more. Would have liked to expand it to the son fucking his mom. Love that incest alot!!!

Another so so taboo story.

There's not much to get aroused over. Not much is new...

You have to do a part 2. I want to read about them fucking. which would be the next step that isn't far away.

That was fabulous!!! Especially since my name is Ricky, and I was always turned on by my mommies breast.

A little bit of wine and her panties are on the floor and her inhibitions are out the window. Too bad they couldn't have gone to bed for us. Not sure if Ricky was a virgin but that could have been taken care of if the story had continued. Too bad the author left us hanging in the wind.

Assuming story!!! I always wanted to make love with my mother but never got the chance.

Brilliantly written. Powerful cum.

Nice build up and overall story. Cannot wait for the next part.

I loved it.

I hope this continues. Loved the story

Next chapter

It's been 5 years, hoping to read about,

'Son, you have no idea how much fun we can have."

Truly looking forward to finding out if Elaine rents an apartment for Ricky while he goes to school.