All Comments on 'M is for Masturbate'
by Many Feathers
- 14 Comments
Mr. Many Feathers,
Probably the best story I've read hear to date. Great plot, with enough fill to keep it going. Also very erotic, this is one I will share with the wife. Thank you.
Respectfully,
Tom (alas,no feathers)
need i say more? by far my fav so far in this amazing alphabet series.... think we can syndicate this one on cable tv?? I'm game...
Like I said...We need more great stories like this in the masterbation story section
Loved it, kept me wet throughout... Makes me want to ride the bumpercars!
Great story. I can just imagine Phil giving out the instructions, and waiting for them at the finish line, lol.
It's a "prostate", not a "prostrate" (which means to lie face down on the floor.
Also, plurals are not apostrophized.
Very vivid imagination, I must say!!!
If they are posessive. The mark goes AFTER the S at the end of the word.
"Wide birth"? Really? I stopped reading there. This author's stories are always suspiciously highly rated given the numerous basic spelling and grammar problems and other issues.
If the need to criticise spelling and grammar is more important than content then it is such a pity. I doubt that arousal or erotic enjoyment has benefited from distraction. If you need purity of written language maybe Shakespeare is more appropriate for you.