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Click hereThey sat staring into one another's eyes. As exciting as it was to learn they had both won, in that moment it hardly mattered. They smiled, seeing in one another something that hadn't been there until now.
"So what are the two of you going to do now?" came their host's question as he walked up beside them.
"We're going to Disney Land!" Kay said giggling.
"The hell we are!" Jack said drawing her back into his arms. "We're going home...and fuck!"
- COMMENTS
If the need to criticise spelling and grammar is more important than content then it is such a pity. I doubt that arousal or erotic enjoyment has benefited from distraction. If you need purity of written language maybe Shakespeare is more appropriate for you.
"Wide birth"? Really? I stopped reading there. This author's stories are always suspiciously highly rated given the numerous basic spelling and grammar problems and other issues.
If they are posessive. The mark goes AFTER the S at the end of the word.
It's a "prostate", not a "prostrate" (which means to lie face down on the floor.
Also, plurals are not apostrophized.
Very vivid imagination, I must say!!!
Great story. I can just imagine Phil giving out the instructions, and waiting for them at the finish line, lol.
Loved it, kept me wet throughout... Makes me want to ride the bumpercars!
Like I said...We need more great stories like this in the masterbation story section