All Comments on 'Magic, Love, Family Pt. 04'

Boy this series if fucking awesome. I love the hell out of it. This chapter though was a rougher read. I would rec going back and editing. The other chapters weren't bad at all but again this one reads rougher. You need an editor hit me up boo.

I would love to talk more about the series too.;)

Love the fantasy element and the potentially epic story you're crafting. But Ray is such a whiny hero I'd rather root for almost anyone else.

just Found out that you were dropping this series with out finishing it please don't you have us hooked

I agree, Ray is really whiny. I love Ingrid but really wanted to see Ray with Suzanne, bad.

So why does he hate his mother??? It’s not like Miranda with the whole competition for Ray’s love. I’m genuinely curious to find out the back story as to why he hates his mom. It’s gotta be juicy. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I am so loving this story. Was very disappointed when the previous version was pulled down, but this version is even better. I eagerly await each new chapter! Please continue on.

Absolutely loving this story. So glad you rebooted it.

Make this series go faster man.......I can't wait❤️💯💯💯

Love this... Cant wait for more....

For me, it is one of the best story ! Waiting for the next episode.

Rooting for Miranda

I really am hoping the protagonist Ray starts growing his wisdom and not just his power soon. If he continues to seem like an impulsive idiot for too long it'd be difficult to care about how the story turns out.

Damm baited by the threesome lol

He should really stay away from his cousin Rose.

Need more Suzanne, need to see MC breed her