All Comments on 'Master! Master! Pt. 16'

Sad to see this end, I hope that you one day will revisit the story verse that you created.

That you truly made this into a truly amazing story. From the beginning to the end you did almost everything right. The only thing that was wrong was there we're some places that you miss spelled a word or two or forgot a word. But other than that as I said you did amazing. The way that you ended the story was absolutely perfect. I'm saving this to my favorites folder. So I can come back to read it again and again. Thank you for all the hard work you did.

Your fan R.

I loved this from beginning to end. I look forward to reading another new story when you get the inspiration for it.

This is a master piece from start to end the emotion and I will never find anything as good as this story for the last 4 day reading it non stop to see how it ends and I’m so happy I cried with the deer girl and now I cry here great use of the title being called master master as it the final words of the story I can’t wait to see what u make next and how u make me cry in the next story god speed dude

I have followed your story from the first chapter to it's beautiful conclusion. Though I am sad to see it end I am hopeful that your next work will be as wondrous as this.

Have followed this story from the first, and have loved it since then. Aside from very minor spelling or grammatical errors, the story has been wonderful. Looking forward to whatever you write next.

NHW

I've been waiting such a long time for a truly good story to be made. I have been following since chapter one and it seems that they only got better and better as they went on. This was a beautiful conclusion to a story that I wish would go on forever. Also I think there might have been some onion-chopping ninjas in here as read the last two pages. Thank you for your generosity in sharing these creations with the world. I honestly loved it. <3

This was absolutely incredible. Other than a few grammatical errors and a couple misspellings it was perfect. All the characters are well developed, the story is amazing and the perfect blend of sex and story. I was hooked from the first paragraph from the first chapter. I will most definitely return many, many times

I really hope you create more stories because to be this is a masterpiece.

Thank you and please keep up the great work.

I forgot to mention that the humor was spot on. All the quotes and references. The jokes were all amazing and I laughed my ass off during this story. Again please make more amazing stories.

This has been my favorite series. I understood all the references and I even got emotional. Really sad to have this end, but you wrote this story very well. Thank You.

Thank you for this series. Just... thank you.

Read ur whole story n have to say was very good

Very enjoyable story well written plot seemed to lose it self slightly in the middle but it all pulled together nicely at the end.

Well woth reading.

Amazing series of stories, would love to read a continuation of the main characters life after or a life in the world after through another’s perspective

this is probably the best story i've read online. initially i started reading b/c i thought it'd be hot (as pretty much everyone on here) but i actually found myself coming back to it for the plot. it was funny, romantic, sad at times, and full of surprises. i'm looking forward to more stuff from you, maybe even a continuation of this series from Lola or Neija's POV.

cheers m8

This series is truly a heart warming gem and one of a kind. Thank you for sharing your work, your art and your heart.

- J

Simply amazing! Thank you!

I could gush repeatedly about all the things I love about this story but I think I'd just be repeating what all the other comments were saying. This was a really fun read. But the thing I respect so much is that when the story shifted gears that you stayed the course despite all the negativity you got for it. As I writer, I know how irritating and deflating it can be and I'm really glad you stuck it out and wrote the story that you wanted to write. Full props. Keep up the good work.

Amazing, loved it

Sweat, Erotic, Moving, Tear jerker at times, and more. Loved it!

Holy fucking shit that was too freaking adorable. Like...all of the cute. All of the warm cuddly feels.

This story was excellent, and definitely left me looking for more!

What a wild ride, and I very much enjoyed it all.

I'm glad you got to the happy ending, and I was wondering if Momo and the others were going to end up with a litter of their own somehow.

Bravo!

I'm glad this got a happy ending.

This is a very good series, a great story, wonderfully developed. I had a few of those ninjas around when it came to Penelope. I could wish for an explanation on the information they were "born" with and the whole Master thing started to get a bit much so it was good to see the lions resistance even if she came around in the end this will definitely wind up as a favorite.

What an amazing story. The writing is excellent and the concept behind the story was really creative. You deserve all 5 stars.

I enjoyed the story. Made me remember the tales of spirit brothers and sisters that some of the American Indian tribes talked about.

Very well developed and actually plausible.

Those damn ninjas.

I enjoyed the tale of Animals becoming hot women.

I enjoyed the fact that there was a female counter part.

However I was disappointed that the woman he fucked

in the ass became a snake.

Why couldn't she become something cute?

I am also wondering " Did Master ever make porn with his cat girl? "

[22.09.22]

1st off the description of Lorraine after her gang bang was flipping funny A.F.!

But overall I really enjoyed the way you handled the intelligence levels of the 'turned' animals was unique to your version...I have read a handful of stories like these here on LitErotica and yours is excellent.

The humour throughout the series was spot-on and the emotional bits were handled brilliantly.

Your explanation regarding the 'changings' was pretty solid and very plausible.

S?:>}

11/10!!!!!

This was a helluva lot of fun to read. I haven't laughed this much in a while. "They realized that true pleasure would only come (from Master)". Or "I'll admit, I became a little arrogant". Glad you managed to hold back. Somewhat. What's that song? "The God of it, all of it"... Well, you're certainly doing your part to alleviate boredom. Good luck on your end. Thanks and 5 all the way!

[03.12.22]

I loved the story so much!

I came for the sex and stayed for the story. Great humor, deep feelings. I still cry for Penelope now. Thank you for this great story and for the happy ending!!!!

As a German reader with Google translator I had a hard time with the name 'Elise'. It's a typical cow name in Germany. But I'm probably not the target audience linguistically, so what the heck :-)

One of the best stories I have read here so far!

I agree. Damn ninjas...

It was good all until the ending, there was so much more that could have been explored. The abrupt ending made it seem like a pointless dream.

I enjoyed your story and sad that it’s over. I’d be happy to read more after ev1 is a teenager with raging hormones

Oh Wow, that was a really great story .Will definitely read again.