All Comments on 'Memoirs from a Bordello'
by Emersonchristie
- 17 Comments
Hello Emersonchristie,
I am really enjoying this story,thank you for writing and posting it here!
Regards,
Lindsay.
This was beautiful. Very erotic and written with women in mind. I smiled when I realized that this is probably going to be a series. (Please don't leave us hanging.) As much as I wonder what will happen with the beautiful Zara, I admit that I am thrilled that we were left wanting. You've definitely snagged this reader in for the long haul. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
Wow, just wow. I'm eager to read the next installment. Please, let there be a next installment!
A pity that there was no job for me like that, when I was 18. Just post the next instalment, so we can judge you if this fantasy has legs or not.
love Janice
Love your erotic mind and writing style that makes me beg for more
I don't want to be a tidal bore or bitch at the author, but "...A louder groan punctuated by a whelp...." Hilarious!
I get off on these bungles by the illiterate progroomers for speltczech. As much as by the clever sex scenes. Good quality writing style and well developed characters. What's not to love about this series?
Just as good as I remembered. I frickin' love love love, this story
That was so fucking erotic. I hope the next five chapters are just as hot as this one was.
I frickin' love love love this story and the entire series. Literotica family, this series is sooo well written and it defines erotic and sensual. Read it. I guarantee you'll love it!
Beautiful, erotic, exciting and one of my fantasies! If I was rich I'd spend all my money at that place. I'd immediately divorce my rather small endowed wham bam 60 second hubby! He believes that anything other than missionary Is dirty. I (once) only got my hot eager red lips around his firm small erection once before I got a lecture as to how could I do something so nasty and perverted as that. He very quickly yanked my horny red lips off of him.. He said that I was sexually perverted! I didn't even know there was a man alive that didn't enjoy, or love a blow job!
During my pledge week at my college sorority I was "loaned" to a Black sorority for week. I had to obey their every command. Trishia trained me to eat her and make her squirt. I was shocked but if she sent a bad report back to my sorority I would be dropped. The week first was awful, at first. I quickly learned to not only like it, I found out that I truly loved eating Black pussy! I was hers all week. I think I ended up eating every Black pussy in that sorority, and loved it! My 18 year old daughter is pledging now to my sorority. I've made arrangements, through Trishia, for her to be trained exactly as I was!
Fantastic series. Part 5 was the best and, like others here, I yearn for parts 6 and more.
Rereading part 1, I couldn’t help but notice similarities between your descriptions of characters and some real-life porn stars. The porn scene your protagonist described watching before coming to Avalon sounds a lot like a scene between Ariel X and Bree Olsen, complete with massage while seated and strapon conclusion.
The character Jaime, with the milky skin + bitchy demeanour, could be Jayme Langford. Leah, the short girl with large breasts could be Leah Livingstone. Kelly, your protagonist’s first girl, could be Kelly Kline (although I’d prefer her to be Dana Kelly).
As for Zara, with the fake boobs and green eyes, I haven’t figured who that might be. There is a gorgeous Czech actress going by Zara who starred in some Viv Thomas films, but her eyes look brown and her boobs are definitely natural. Also, in her scenes she’s usually submissive rather than dominant.
Of course, one can make the case that I watch and read too much lesbian porn. While I may be completely wrong about whether your characters are based on real porn stars, I certainly do watch too much lesbian porn. And I’d love to read more of your lesbian porn, too :)
This aounds like a jackpot ...... A perfect job blowing steam off and making good money ...... Hopefully there is some tome to study some law paragraphs 🙄 ...... But yeah there are women out there which hitting you like a train , so beautiful so sensual so extraordinary so innocent
Wonderful start first chapter
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