by TheTalkMan
As always, your work is near flawless. Very hot and will no doubt merit many more reads in the future!
i agree with the other comment it was a hot story but it was just too long. thank for writing it anyway
This stands toe-to-toe with the likes of house of crow and Old ladies and hot tubs my dude. These are the kinda stories that I look forward from ya. Doubting there can be one better in this collection but looking forward to finding out. Good job Talkman as always.
I personally disagree that it was to long because it enables the story to build up tension and look into what the characters are feeling in detail I.e denial lust anger etc but agree that it was hot and that I cannot wait for the next one these stories are so amazing . I also love the fact that it has impregnation as it is the ultimate betrayal to give someone else a baby and not your partner can't wait to see the epilogue with Sylvia pregnant and no one is any the wise while Deb hasn't got a baby making her feel inferior and Sylvia keeps getting pregnant and people can't figure out why (due to all the time her and her son in law spend together ?) .But yea can't wait for the next one whenever that come out
Because it's as close to a mom/son story as it gets plus Sylvia is smoking hot.
Please some doggy vaginal scenes too. Good job TTM!
Nothing is HOTTER than a husband who cheats on his wife with someone she trusts the most! Thanks for making me cum, TheTalkMan!
I wonder if the spirit of Christmas had been turned a bimbo has will that be a next side story we're in the pervious ch there was a pic of a lady in sexy santa clothen what if that was the spirit of Christmas new job to adversties the new ways.
This is in reality chapter 5 of Sorrounded which you never wrote.
I liked the tensions built up, but WHY the lengthen explanation?! anybody can understand the action and the fallings, so why explanation again and again and again, this story could be made in 5 pages, and nothing got lost. the sex scene& the dirty talk were not your best works, I didn`t felt that evil slut mother in law was in control as she claimed, maybe if she rode him in the beginning would be best but I think it would a repetition from your previous stories. I think the writer will not see my comment, but anyway thanks 4 stars