All Comments on 'Miracle on Slutty 4th Street Ch. 08'
by TheTalkMan
- 11 Comments
This was, quite honestly, out of this world. Phenomenal, and it barely had any of the traditional elements I read your works for at the forefront. The fantastical elements really put it in a category all its own compared to your other works, which have had the supernatural on the fringes, but seldom this... explicitly inhuman. I was expecting to be disappointed when you got to the ice sirens, but you blew my expectations away completely with this chapter. I hope we get to see more of them someday, and more focus on other magical (sex) creatures in your works.
Ready for the next chapter. I can't wait to see what happens with Gwen.
Firstly, I want to say that I love your stories. I'm a big fan. I just wanted to ask this question. I'm not sure what is going to happen next. I'm hoping Dan and his daughter Gwen, but what about Dan, Frank, and Tim's father? In chapter 7 you mentioned him with the elf saying what a shame it was that he wasn't on the Naughty List. I think it'd be hot to have him corrupted as well
I really like that you seem to be leaning more into the supernatural element with the recent stories. I think it is a great setting for the kind of stories you write.
I wasn't expecting much from this chapter but holy fucking shit that was amazing. So much more rougher than usual and while you've been deep in mythical stuff before I don't believe you've done full blown monsters before but it was great. Hopefully you do more stuff like this in the future .
Loved it hope u do more monster girl stuff like. Loved the breeding element to it as more.
Ohhk not my type of story it weirded me out. Also pls limit the screaming when they're fucking where everything u read is aaaahhhhhhhhhh fuuuuucckk. It's dirtier if they have convo about how hot the slut more than the wife is and how the guy will cum so hard he will impregnate the slut. That's way sexier than just screaming
I was looking forward to what the Ice Sirens were gonna be when you name dropped them last chapter, and whatever I thought they could be you made them way better. As I say in most of my comments I love your stories when they are cruel women dominated men and this one may just take the cake in that regard now. It's making look forward to the "War" epic expecially if the esx scenes are as over-the-top as this. Great job Talkman!
God I think it's the subtlety of this one I love so much. How the man is lured and tricked into sex slowly before the slut reveals her true intentions. Also the guy never gives in like most of the other men in your stories, he complies but never fully gives in so this will be fun in the epilogue along with the results of his actions.
I actually rather enjoyed the Angel premise in the beginning, and I think it could be used and modified to your style of story of corruption rather than outright wholesome innocence. Angels could tempt a handsome, good man to being lovers with them and marrying them in holy empowerment, even create power children, and stop the dark forces from doing the same for their own side. The kicker would be the Angels have him cheat willingly on his wife, they see her as pathetic and weak to stop him from joining the dark side unless divine intervention. You have a theme of even what would be considered outright good to be just as corrupt and into filthy rough sex like their counterparts and sexy voluptuous Angels is too much to pass up in my opinion