by VCDC
Not much of a story not much incest just granny starting it and then the bad guy shows up!! Hope you continue soon you just left us hanging!!!!! Just a 3 so far
Wow, so much happening my mind is in a whirl. Death takes away from the fucking. Please continue, you have so many places this story can go. Hopefully less death, and more fucking. 4 stars.
It's really difficult to follow the changes in POV of this story. It's also pretty unbelievable to me that someone could literally threaten to kill an accuser/witness at the arraignment and still be released on bail. I mean, suspension of disbelief and all that, but don't be ridiculous.
Liked the story but the ending sucks you can't leave us hanging ??????????????????????????????????????
All över the place. You couldn't tell who was saying what. About as sexy as bad day in hell. 1 ☆
sorry but no way in hell they would let him out of jail. with all that so you just get a 3 but I do like all the fucking going on never had my grannie
Really needs a good editing...and, the commentary flips around quite a bit...consider tagging who is talking each change-up!!??
Still, I could keep up with the moving around; the conversations were amusing. Grandma being a "slut" and "GILF" came as a surprise to Lincoln...I am glad he at least waited until Al left before succumbing to Grannie's s wiles!!
Captain...piece of gavnô (Hungarian for poop)...hope wherever the shot came from blew his brains out...dirty cops are the lowest!!
Five**5**Stars...even with the shortcomings!!! Yyyaaayyy!!!!!
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