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Click hereI laid there with Karen curled into my chest like Traci used to do, breathing heavily, my face covered with Karen's juices. I stared at the ceiling, trying to figure out in my mind exactly why I did what I had just done. I'm sure part of it was revenge, but I know part of it was pure lust. I know in my heart that I still loved Traci -- at least somewhat -- and Karen was as close as I was going to get ... without all of the baggage. Oh, yeah, I know there was some baggage here -- I had just broken one of my personal codes by knowingly fucking another man's wife -- but I owed Dave less than nothing. And considering Karen was part of the unholy triumvirate, I didn't have any problem with doing her just for my own pleasure ... and hers as a byproduct.
I awoke Saturday morning spooned around Karen, my hard-on pressing firmly into her ass. I knew what my little brain wanted, but the big brain was conflicted and confused. The little brain won out when she reached back and slowly wrapped her fingers around my dick. This time we took things slowly, and we only had one orgasm apiece, but at least for me, it felt very satisfying.
"Traci always said you were a good, generous lover," Karen said as we lay side-by-side looking at each other, "But she never went into specifics. I'd say she undersold you by a lot.
"You know, I meant what I said last night. She was absolutely sure you'd let her have her way. Otherwise, there was no way she would have given up what you had to offer for just a couple of more inches of dick.
"But it also was about love, Roger. Seriously. The three of us just grew stronger in our love for each other. I knew we were shutting you out, but Dave and Traci said our love was different than what you two had, and it was OK for us to have that. She was so sure of your love for her. She was so sure you'd never go through with the divorce.
"Then when you let it go through, well, it was only right that we let her and the kids move in with us. She had given us so much. But I started feeling uneasy the longer she was with us. I knew she was developing feelings for him, and him for her, but I tried not to see it. She was bearing us children."
Karen and I continued to get together for sex night every few weeks until her divorce was final sixth months later. Then, when she and David got a regular visitation schedule worked out for the kids, she would spend the entire weekend with me at my apartment on the weekends David had the girls. It started out almost completely about sex for us both, but gradually developed into a real friendship. I had always gotten along with her when she was my sister-in-law, but spending weekends living with her gave me new insight into who she was. I know for her it started out as penance, but I think we both grew as friends, even though we knew it could never be more than that.
And then it got to be more than that.
About a year later, Karen had woken up before me on a Saturday morning after a big Friday night of sex and padded off to the bathroom. I was vaguely aware of her leaving my bed as I was half-awake at that point. Next thing I hear is rather loud vomiting, so I jumped out of bed and knocked on the door.
"You OK, Kar?" I asked.
She vomited a second time, then gathered her wits and answered. "Yeah, I'm OK. Be right out."
She looked a little pale when she came out and sat down on the edge of the bed.
"Maybe I've picked up a bug," she said. "That's the third time this week I've thrown up when I got up. It kinda reminds me of when Traci was pregnant with the girls and had morning ..."
She stopped talking and looked up at me with a look that bordered on fear and exultation, if there's such a thing. I didn't need to be a mind-reader to know where this was going.
"Wait. I thought you couldn't get pregnant, nor could you carry a child," I said in a somewhat shaky voice. "We've never used protection because of that."
The doctor never said I couldn't get pregnant; just that the odds of it happening were rather slim. He called it a million to one shot, and said the odds of me carrying the baby to birth were about the same."
"Wow," was all I could think to say.
We jumped in the shower, and for the first time since we started our fuck-buddy relationship, we didn't have sex in the shower. We were both preoccupied.
We were silent as we fixed coffee and toast. Coffee poured, toast buttered, we sat down at the kitchen table, instead of in front of the TV as usual.
"Look, I don't believe in abortion, except in emergencies, but I'm not the one who would have to carry this child," I started. "But I will be there for you in every way I can, and I will support this child with both love and money if you decide to have it and by some miracle can. I mean to be there always, even if one or both of us ends up getting married again."
Karen started to cry, and I got up, went to her and wrapped my arms around her tightly. Then she started to sob uncontrollably. I just let her go until she was cried out.
"Maybe this is God's way of evening the score, the ultimate way for me to pay you back for ruining your marriage," she finally said.
"If that's the case, then He certainly has a sense of humor."
She smiled at me, and suddenly the world seemed a little brighter. We got dressed and had a full day out, first visiting an art gallery, then a craft show, and then finally going to dinner. Throughout the day, we each thought of a bunch of little things we needed to do if Karen was pregnant.
We bought a home pregnancy test and it confirmed Karen was pregnant. Her OB-GYN visit a couple of weeks later was the final confirmation, and the doctor explained to both of us the risks of Karen carrying the baby. Karen didn't flinch a muscle when she told the doctor that not only would she carry the baby to term, but it would be a perfect, beautiful, healthy baby.
"I owe you that much," she said to me as the doctor looked confused.
Karen had never told any of her family about our relationship before, and considering the way my marriage had ended, that was more than fine with me, but she wanted to make a big splash with this news -- and she wanted me there. I sucked up my personal feelings and went with her to her parents' house for the "family meeting."
The meeting included her parents, Traci and Dave, who had gotten married since Karen and Dave's divorce, and a couple of other aunts and uncles. It was a cake and coffee kind of thing, with various kids running around outside the house. By design, we got to her parents' house last, and when I walked in after Karen the place went deathly quiet, at least until my former mother-in-law found her voice.
"What's he doing here?" she uttered with disdain practically dripping from her words.
"I would think that the father of your next grandchild should be here for the announcement," Karen said icily.
I just stood there with the biggest shit-eating grin I could muster.
The room practically exploded in a cacophony of shocked utterances.
My former mother-in-law went from bitch mode to grandma mode in the blink of an eye, bursting into what looked like happy tears. I spied shocked faces and smiles all around until I glanced over at Traci and Dave. Traci looked gobsmacked, while Dave was gritting his teeth and turning red in the face.
The next thing I knew my former father-in-law had his hand on my shoulder and was leading me into the kitchen. He didn't look happy.
"You son of a bitch! This is how you get your revenge on Traci?" he snarled.
"Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! Fuckhead!" I snapped back at him. "Traci and I have been divorced for over seven years. She's had three kids with Dickhead and married him. And Karen came to me, not the other way around!"
Jerry sat down in a kitchen chair, looking defeated, while the noise in the living room continued on at a good level.
"I'm not trying to be disrespectful, but Karen and I have been friends with benefits since she split from Dave. Since nobody thought Karen could get pregnant, we never used protection. This just happened.
"No, we're not getting married, but I care for Karen very much, and I intend to be every bit the father to this child that I am to Jeremy and Sandy."
"Then I guess I need to shut my stupid mouth and congratulate you two," he said as he stood up, shook my hand, and then pulled me in for a manly hug.
"Wait, I have the perfect way to celebrate this," he said, reaching up into his liquor cabinet above his refrigerator. He pulled out a bottle of 18-year-old single malt and poured each of us a shot. He led me back into the living room, and suddenly the room got quiet again. Everybody was looking at the two of us.
"L'chaim!" Jerry exclaimed.
The noise resumed. We clinked shot glasses softly, then sipped the scotch. You don't throw an 18-year-old single malt down your throat, regardless of the occasion.
It was amazing how fast my stock grew among the family. Despite the fact that Traci cheated on me, I was still the bad guy for not letting her do her "good deed" and getting the divorce all those years ago, but suddenly, I was a hero for accidentally knocking up Karen. The irony wasn't lost on me.
I saved up my vacation and admin times and used them for Karen's doctor appointments and stuff like that. And when they decided to do a C-section on her a little early at 34 weeks, I was in the room with her. Knowing that I was involved in a miracle buoyed my spirits, and I handled all the childbirth stuff as easily as I had in my 20s when Traci had our two.
Miracle Wyatt Platt was perfect, beautiful, and healthy when he came into the world on July 18, 2019, at 10:22 a.m. I didn't think about it at the time, but just before I closed my eyes and went to sleep that night, I wondered about what Dave had to be thinking about me having a son with Karen. Call me a cruel bastard, but I smiled inside as I drifted off.
Between my older two and the baby, life, in general, was pretty full and happy for me. Karen and I still spent our weekends together, although she went on the pill after Miracle was born. We both agreed one was enough.
Two more years passed by, and I was happy with my life as it was, but you know women; they just have to tinker in a man's life. At that point, I hadn't been out on an actual date since Karen and I became a duo almost four years ago, and I wasn't looking for a woman. Apparently, however, Karen was looking for a woman -- for me. Just before taking Miracle home on a Sunday evening, Karen said we needed to talk, so we sat down in the living room while Miracle played on the floor in front of us. She looked more than a little nervous, and I started to get a bad feeling that my happy life was about to change.
"I know we've gotten past the part I played in your divorce all those years ago, but I still feel like I owe you for that. So next Friday night, you're going on a date with a friend of mine -- a co-worker, actually."
I started to protest, but she gave me the stop sign hand, so I shut up and listened.
"Roger, you've become my absolute go-to person in the world -- my best friend, my lover, my child's father. I love you ... but I'm not in love with you, not in that way. But you are absolutely husband material for the right woman ... and after looking for the past few years, I think I've found her for you.
"I've looked long and hard, and I never wasted your time asking you to go on dates with women I thought might be good for you. But I've known this woman for 10 years. I've seen her deal with a lot of life's worst situations, including the death of her husband to cancer seven years ago, and she's shown me the same thing you've shown me -- a tremendous strength of character. She finally started dating again just last year, and I think the two of you would be a great fit. She knows about our relationship, but I've told her, like I am telling you now, that I would gladly step out of the way for you two ... providing I could still stay a part of both of your lives as a friend."
Karen had tears in her eyes as she finished speaking. I had tears in my eyes.
"I can't make you any promises, Babe, but I'll do my best," I whispered.
Sherry Langford was everything Karen said she was ... and more, much more. At 48, she was two years older than me, but I would have guessed she was five years younger than me. She had flawless mocha-colored skin, the result of an English father and an African-American mother, shoulder-length dark brown hair, a pretty face, and a toned hourglass figure that screamed out "gym rat."
I took her to a good Italian restaurant a couple of towns over. Over the three courses of the meal, she told me most of her story and I told her most of mine. She was incredibly easy to talk to and talked like a very smart person. Maybe because she knew me so well, Karen had somehow found what my soul had been missing since I left Traci.
Within three dates, I knew Sherry was right for me, and I think she felt that I was right for her. I explained to Karen that we needed to end the sexual part of our relationship, and she smiled back at me with a smug look that said, "I told you so." We still got together from time to time -- we were still great friends and shared a child -- but she no longer spent the night.
We were married a year later in a small ceremony. She was given away by her son, John, who not only became my stepson but also a trusted friend. And for my best man ... well, she was actually a woman. It just seemed right that Karen was by my side.
Sherry completely understood my friendship with Karen, considering she was another close friend of Karen's, and the three of us often did things together, especially kid things with Miracle. "Sherry-Mom" quickly became one of my son's favorite people.
I'm not saying life was perfect, but we were pretty happy and I had few complaints ... except with a certain Social Studies teacher of Miracle's in fifth grade, who gave my kid a failing grade on his genealogy project. Seems she had a little problem following Miracle's tree. Hell, I'm living it, and I have trouble following it.
- COMMENTS
Bit of a bullshit story. Who waits to serve the wife planning to make you a cuck. I know it’s a story and your rules etc. but come on…
Why didn't the dumb fuck have her served BEFORE she fucked Dave? Think that might have gotten her attention? Tired of stories that rely on flawed premises.
Seems like Traci got exactly what she wanted. Two sets of kids paid for by men and one set looked after by another woman, on top of that she got a husband with a big dick.
Karen got what she wanted, a child of her own, and a male one at that. So two big fingers to her big dicked ex.
I don't know what Dave got to smile about. 3 female children to pay for and a definite sense of shame and failure the likes of which drove King Henry VIII to have his wives executed.
The MC, well he got the shame of being a cuckold and for sets of child support payments. OH, and an older WIFE because you just know that's what every middle aged man is just desperate to have.
Miracles family tree sounds as complicated as my brothers family tree! His sperm donor is married to our stepfather's sister, his sperm donors sister was married to our mothers brother, lol! My brother and me don't share a sperm donor!
There are two parts I would have changed:
1) „… We want Karen and Dave's child to be conceived in love”
My change: “So you and Dave are already in love? I didn’t know you fell out of love with me and now are in love with Dave. Otherwise, how could this child be conceived in love if you don’t love him and it would be only sex?”
2) "I would think that the father of your next grandchild should be here for the announcement," Karen said icily.
My Change: “Well, it seems Traci can easily be breed by any male with a hard-on. Karen on the other hand needs a really loving man to be get pregnant. Dave seems to just stick his big tool in for an easy fuck and that was all that was necessary for Traci to get pregnant. However, I made love to Karen and that did the work pretty fast. So, dear MIL, you wanted the children conceived in love? It seems that Daves children were conceived by fucking and only my children are really conceived in love!”
3 stars - I know that after reading about 1000 LW stories on this website, you begin to notice how they all seem to blend together.
This one is a bit different, and it also stretched the credibility thread to its absolute limit - But I like it.
Traci and Dickhead didn't pay enough of a price. otherwise it was good as usual. Married into a clusterfuck of a family though.
5 Stars as I married a blind date . I am so glad that I divorced her for cheating on Me
Hey at least this time the protagonist ends up with a woman who is ONLY 2 years older than him. Maybe some day Hooked will write them at the same age, or god forbid, even younger. LOL.
What wife would throw away her marriagefor bullshit excuse baby conceived in love
Interesting story and lives. BUT, so silly as they could have done invitro with any woman or even taken 1 of Traci's eggs and his sperm and implanted it into anyone. However, Roger now has another son, Karen has a son and all involved are part-time parents. Also, why is Karen stuck with the other 3 girls? She isn't a biological parent to any of them, just leave them with Traci and dickhead.
His ex is pregnant with someone else’s baby and one night he ends up banging her because “Hey I’m human” I don’t think that’s the way you spell ‘moron’.
So then he’s starts banging the ex SIL? Conveniently forgetting she was one of the perpetrators of a conspiracy against him…no, just…NO.
Solid story. I thought the impregnating the ex-SIL was a bit cliché, but at least the relationship started as a drunken, one-time thing and not as intentional, premeditated revenge. Schadenfreude (man, German has some amazing words that cannot be done justice when directly translated to English) doesn’t require vengeance. They both took advantage of a situation that neither sought. That is the very definition of karmic justice as I interpret it. And since many believe that karma tends to pay back more than invested, the divorce made Roger’s actions karmically neutral, the sexual relationship with Karen made them “even”, the pregnancy and gender were the karmic “lessons”, with the gender hitting extra hard on Mike (I wish you had included a small bit from Karen’s, Mike’s, or Traci’s POV answering for us — the audience — the questions Mike wonders about at the end) since his family’s name (not the lineage, sorry but so many males still don’t get that. I am not saying that the author feels the way Mike does, but it is an attitude that still seems prevalent among many males, especially from those descended from areas where the separation of social classes were/are strongly enforced) would not continue through his offspring. Mike going 0 for 3 on children after his schadenfreude over Roger’s near-powerlessness to save his marriage, and the Roger going 1 for 1 with the woman Mike discarded after her unlucky draw regarding reproduction was the extra “lesson” — though I doubt he (Mike) learned it — the cheaters deserved. I also would have liked Traci and Karen to be a bit more realistic regarding Roger’s voiced concerns. Maybe even a companion piece from Traci’s POV involving her talking first to Karen, then the two of them approaching Mike who subsequently convinces them not to alter “the plan”, but somewhere in-between where Traci and/or Karen acknowledge Roger’s concerns. Then after talking with Mike, Traci coming back to Roger with Mike’s arguments and THEN putting her foot down. In a truly healthy and loving marriage — which is hinted at Traci and Mike enjoying before the story — both partners would at least hear out and give consideration to the other’s concerns and/or arguments.
- I have to disagree about Roger (the MC) or Karen (the SIL) being a “slut” — yes males can be sluts as much or more so than females, especially since males tend to get celebrated for their sexual conquests as opposed to being shunned or shamed like females tend to be. First, after her husband had unapproved extramarital sex with Traci (the ex-wife), he violated the spirit — not just the letter — of his (likely) vows. That voids the (verbal) contract and she is no longer bound to keep to her end, basically making her single awaiting government recognition. Second, having a sexual relationship outside of a romantic relationship doesn’t make one a “slut” either, especially since it was inferred that Roger and Karen were not only committed, but even monogamous. She was looking for a long-term romantic partner for him. He did not seem to be looking to “move on”. Many couples in their 40s, that have been married for long periods find themselves in similar circumstances where the all-consuming love paired with unabashed lust from early in the relationship has given way to love paired with the comfort that comes with unchanging familiarity. Third, we had no indication that ANY of the characters had “slut” periods that are not detailed here, where there are strings of anonymous partners or most other “slutty” behaviors.
Perfect way to handle the bitch wife in the “natural” insemination story. Having a son was the perfect slap in the face to the cheating wife and brother in law.
ah, "i love you but I'm not IN LOVE with you...but I'll let you bang me enough to knock me up, ex-brother-in-law..."
A family of sluts, plain and simple. And dumb at that. The gender of a child is based solely on whether the man provides the Y chromosome. Dude should know if he has that capability or not.
Moreover, I don't give a flying fuck if someone can't get pregnant on their own. Sucks to be you, is how I feel. There's adoption, foster kids, finding someone in the family who doesn't want, can't take care of one or more of theirs. Fucking my wife for a kid is not something I would accept. NOR would I want to compound my mistake by fucking a relative of that bitch. YUCK!!
Appreciate the gentle humour as I do those who fail to see it for what it is. Fice super stars.
Not sure what's funnier - that his friends would shun him for not wanting his wife to carry a full-term pregnancy for another guy (even in vitro), or that he would actually be thrilled to have a child with Karen and be dragged back into that psycho family.
Maybe he should have a negociated a one and done pre-nup. Where after she was pregnant the first time, if she ever had sex outside the marriage she would lose everything including custody of her kids. So they wouldn't get to play him like they had planned and eventually did.
Or maybe charge for his wife's services. :-)
He obviously didn't have a great divorce lawyer and was too wimpy to get the facts out there. Divorce for adultry and make it very public.
And why he would have started up with the sister after her betrayal too. Way too forgiving.
Hey, if they want to have a baby conceived in love, maybe all of the other males in the family should try to get Kathy pregnant.
After all, it's OK because it's to make a baby, right?
Or maybe should see about a nice human interest story. Wouldn't the local media just love to cover a story where Traci loves her sister so much she deigns to let Karen's husband fuck her repeatedly so she can give them a child...?
Oh, Traci's husband is against her doing that? Well, how insensitive can you be - after all, the whole rest of the family sees nothing wrong with it.
Karen must have a REALLY bad attorney to get stuck with custodyof all three daughters if she didn't want them!!
Upon reading the story a second time several singular thoughts stand out to me: how unbelievably stupid and ridiculous the story is and how incredibly stupid most of the readers are who give this story such a high score. I see all these comment s about “ good revenge “.
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What the fuck are you morons reading? There was NO revenge here at all. Getting a Divorce is the bare minimum thing to do here.
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After Traci is engaging in this false pregnancy but actual long-term sexual affair with Dave why does he have sex with her one more time? Tis makes no sense at all and actually increases the strength and resolve of Tracy because she is now thinking that husband is accepting this. THIS IS NEVER EXPLAINED… except perhaps well the husband has a dick and therefore like all men he simply incapable of controlling himself around tits and pussy,
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SECOND - The husband correctly deduces and Tracy later admits to this that she will continue Fuck Dave until a son is produced. This is the KEY POINT of the matter since it shows that this is really just a sexual Affair and has nothing to do with getting pregnant and producing a boy for Dave and karen
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Yet In the initial family meeting on page 1 all the adults are giving a husband hell for not allowing this . Yet h the husband never raises this key point - whether or not he is SUPPOSE to have a legitimate say in this decision? As a hypothetical and as a person married to Tracy Do the other adult members in the family think that the husband should he or should he not have a say before the decision was made?.
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Yes ort no. Simple question
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THIRD.-- after the divorce WHY is the Husband STILL letting Traci set the narrative? After all this time how is he not telling everybody including Tracy's friends what she actually did? why does it become a surprise that nobody else knows about the real truth until he finally says something ?
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FOURTH why doesn't this wimp pathetic pussy cuck ass loser husband say anything to other adults in the family when Traci keeps getting pregnant by Dave and NOT stopping and NOT producing any male offspring ?
This author remains completely off the wall……..no way the MC and Karen would not have bonded. Nothing magical about love…..always follows a deep friendship that includes sex with two people that respect one another and after many years together trust would complete the picture. But the author NEEDS diversity so brings in an African American………..so ridiculous an effort. R. H.
At a second read I still like this, the only thing I dislike is the ending, Karen setting him up ? No
I like this story but for me I would have had the kids living with me because the kids would have noticed their mother sleeping where they'll uncle that would be confusing for the children
Good story well written. What was Roger thinking having sex with Traci during her six (6) month of pregnancy. After all the hurt and bullshit he still couldn’t resist. But at least he stood his ground and divorced the piece of dog shit. What about Dave, no ass whipping. I guess Dave and Traci lived happily ever after. To be blunt, Traci’s entire family was fucked up. A total bunch of morons.
Where's the payback? He gets cuckold and Dave gets his wife. Further, he's pushed aside by the family for disagreeing. TERRIBLE! Yes, his having a bit is a small bit of karma, but nowhere near what should have occurred. Plus, what about his own kids feeling. No justice here!
Read it again! This is such a good story. It runs the range of emotions and leaves me very happy for him.
Why would he want anything to do with Karen? I don't care if Dave and Traci "broke her heart" she was one of the three people who betrayed him and fucked up his life. Just a terrible ending to the story.
Missing payback on Tracy & Dave. No regrets on their parts nor from the in-laws. Ending was very weak. Very disappointing.
I'm with Babalooie on this. Crazy stuff, but entertaining and well written.
Thanks.
This was not the author's finest hour. The MC is a weak, pathetic man who persistently enables his disgusting, loathsome wife to trample over him repeatedly then buy him off with pity sex because, apparently, no man can refuse sex when it's offered to him ( let's hope he never gets approached by a crack whore). The characters all lacked credibility as did the plot. This author is capable of so much better. Couldn't bring myself to bother awarding this any score.
Underdog makes a good point but what I've come to understand is there are those who are SO disappointed with their own lives that they have this need to tear down others. Sad isn't it.
Thank you for your story Hooked.
somewhere east of Omaha
4. I still hate the concept of the story but unlike the other two similar stories of the wife being a "surrogate" the old fashioned way I felt the ending was far FAR better especially for the MC. Still some problems with the story, the MC still got proverbially screwed for a time and accepted the arrangement his wife forced on him at first but still had a much more happy ending.
Holy shit, if you don't like the author why read the damn story and then throw stones at it. For fuck sakes read something else. Do you sit and bitch at the tv show or change the freakin channel?
The plot line was ok but our MC left a bit to be desired. Most us felt he should have stood up more, maybe filed for divorce before she left to screw the guy. Also all the families agreeing there was nothing wrong with his loaning out her body, I don't know. I think a few tweaks here and there and give the MC more balls would make a better story. Of course him giving the sister a boy child was great. 4 stars
I have always greatly enjoyed Hooked1957 stories. One of the best story writers out there and this one was again very well written. But, I did not enjoy the plot of this story, just a little to unbelievable. I started to become dismayed when Roger decided to have sex with his pregnant wife (Dave’s doing) and it went down hill from there.
Thanks to the author for yet again increasing the wimp cuck population of lw by one more. Mc is a total wuss, and fits right in with other produced here. Since the author is so good at this, it must come from the heart of personal lifestyle choice. Cucks unite and push the world back to the oron age. Drivel.
This is the second story I've read, by this author and once again, his MC is a pussy! Always confused, just letting things happen! There is a burst of showing he has balls( the divorce) and then we are back to letting things happen. Not my cup of tea. 3*s.
Not up to your usual standards. First the cuckold husband just left the scene and both ex-wife and her new main squeeze got off with no consequences whatsoever. Then the Deux ex Machina is employed with machine gun rapidity to repair the gaping plot holes and lack of viable logic in the metanarrative here. First here comes Karen....and here comes a male miracle child to rub Dave nose in the new reality of the male heir being fathered by the cuckold ex husband. Then we are hit with the new off the wall proposition that Karen and the cuckold can only be friends with benefits because they do not have sufficient "love" for each other to justify his being a real father to his bastard child. And if this is not sufficiently choice in terms of utter freak show....we get yet another Deux ex Machina where Karen finds the cuckold husband a true love for the Deux ex Machina happily ever after ending. Man this level of midway freak show would make P. T. Barnum jealous!!!
In short...this one needed some additional severe editorial review before publication,...it is simply awful,. Sorry Hooked1957 even Babe Ruth struck out at times.
Very weak payback. Dave need to have a stronger lesson. Didn't really see much in the way if regrets from Traci, family was ok with cheating. Not a very good story.
Again the weak white boys allow his white woman to shit on him and the she does it with to get away Scott free claiming some weak psychological thing as she had all girls…when she shouldn’t have any for the smuck…who in their wrong mind would allow this to happen without being on national news nation wide as having massacres that whole family on one of their so called get together…where is the reality writers at…maybe I should become one with the handle of #TheBLKDeath who take no prisoners… Literotica what ya think?
What a cuckold man. God, is there man like this in the real world. GOD what an idiot. What fuck up story. Definitely doesn't deserved even 1star
The men are always so stupid and the women stupid plus it seems like.Maybe if it had been more comical..
Why would Karen get custody of the girls her husband had with her sister? She should have been removed from the equation since she wasn't biologically involved. also, this sounds very similar to another story here with a Scottish royal having the same problem.
Re: Karen - Her relationship with her daughters was that she had custody. She only hooked up with Roger when her Dave had the kids.
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, Traci was just a surrogate, the girls were Karen and Dave's.
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I know it would kill the story, but Traci got off on the wrong foot by making Roger the last to know, when he should have been first. First you discuss with your husband what you want to do, BEFORE talking to Karen and Dave. Then method is discussed. THEN, Karen and Dave are offered the chance for Traci to be artificially inseminated, or IVF if they want to be sure of the sex.
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Re: "Good story" - Karen not only remained their mother, she had custody. From when she came into the bar: "If you would just gone along with the baby thing and not have divorced my bitch of a sister, Dave and I wouldn't be divorcing and I wouldn't be stuck with her three brats!"
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, Karen arranges visitation for Dave because SHE has the girls. Not sure of the real life legalities, I know that if they had a son and stopped there, Karen and Dave would have had custody, so it carried forth to all the kids. Again, irl things might be more complicated.
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& Anonymous "Gross", racist much?
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No knock on Sherry, but Jessica or Karen would have been better.
No husband except a cuck would wait to serve the bitch until after the fuckfest. The only way to have a chance of saving the marriage is to slap the bitch upside the head BEFORE she cheats. Any man knows that. Instead, "Roger" does nothing, which confirms in the slut's mind that he will eventually knuckle under. Because the author isn't intentionally writing "Roger" as a cuck, this makes the "Roger" character ridiculous and inconsistent.
to wildbill(douchebag)314, hey asshole, some of us asshats cant get thru the BS literotica wants to set up a "name acct" and ive never gotten a word back from literotica when ive asked for help. does that mean im too stupid to comment or be allowed to? you ratturd
so karen tell traci about her husbands 9-10in dick and finally traci whore sees a way to try it out. If she hadnt known about the big dick, I bet everyone would have been satisfied by in vitro. Such a cunt, took her husbands love for granted, thought he would take the disrespect and scorn cuz he loved her, while she placed her desire over his emotions? thats the problem w/ all women, when what they want comes up against love and respect for the husband, their wants always trump husbands wants and desires and they expect hubbys to concede. bitches.
Ex goes through 3 pregnancies later in life, with them apparently taking a toll on her body, while Karen’s was still taut. Dave, who’d been trying to get a boy, has 3 loos... I mean 3 girls (an old Bill Cosby joke), and Roger gets Karen pregnant AND it’s a boy.
Is it enough payback? Not in my opinion, but it’s definitely more than nothing. Dave could sure have used a beat down, but going to jail when you have kids is not really a good thing.
Terrible story .
Slut should have suffered , instead you rewarded her .
One star
Since Tracie married David, why didn’t Karen just give her three kids to Tracie and David to raise since they were their actual parents. Karen had her new baby to raise. I know Tracie would have hated to raise 3 new kids!
Also a women has a 6 day fertility period every cycle. Why did Karen screw DAVID FOR 9 DAYS EACH CYCLE.
the cunt was arrogant and narcissistic, and she figured that she wanted and was entitled to some big cock. Hubby was correct in divorcing her, she didnt give a shit about him, took him for granted and proved that her real motive was getting some big cock action, proved by going back for more. I wonder if big dick prefered cunt to wife cuz cunt was easier to get into after mult babies?
Too bad we can’t leave comments on other people’s comments. It also too bad that Literotica allows comments from anonymous asshats
Have to agree with Imhapless , please delete that post .... fucktards should not be published
I gave the story a 5 but I have a real question. Why have you not canceled the anonymous post from 2 days ago. There is no place for fucking bigots in the comments section. Please, please delete the post of someone too gutless to even have a profile.
don't believe in "interracial bonding". Since the beginning this country has gone straight to hell. Paint yore face black and say yas suh
Great series of twists and turns. Easy to hat the first wife. Interesting you didn’t have them engage each other after he knocked up the sister. Would have liked to explore that conversation. Fun time great contribution to the overall theme
Sorry, but I also couldn't suspend disbelief on this either as someone else stated. 1) Who would fuck their wife after she cheated (besides a cuck). That's why he divorced her. 2) Who would fuck someone who played a part in their divorce, beyond a hate/revenge fuck? If this actually happened, I wouldn't have any respect for the guy. I couldn't give more than 2 stars. On the other hand, I saw that a bigot wrote a comment about the interracial part. All I can say is that it's too bad that people like that are still around. I bet he voted for Trump also.
P.S. : I would nail Holly Berry in a heartbeat.
Would have been 5 stars, but the ending was weak.
This story should have ended with the birth of Miracle, Sherry added nothing to the story other than weakening the ending with superfluous details.
Even a short epilogue detailing what happened to David, Traci, Karen and Roger would have finished the story better.
Please add an interracial tag .
Totally ruined the story .
Brought. Four star story down to a well deserved one star .
Congrats
Thank you for a great and interesting read. Your stories always are improving and reflect a talented story teller.
Was about to give this story a "5" until the black woman was inserted in to the story. Nope.
Maybe next time Traci is 6 foot tall and a 34A, just for something different?
Doesn't fit.Why would Karen arrange visiting rights with Dave for the three kids,none of them are hers?.Why would she shack up with Roger all that time instead of lookng for a long time partner and then dump him when she has his child?.Also how did Dave and Traci manage with five kids,no mention of that.
Read some of the first page then went here. This is totally asanine. You are a tru pervert. Old people tuck like crazy and wife sharing and worse. I think you were mistreated as a child and worse. Ever read you again
Great writing and very good grammar makes this an easy and enjoyable read. Thank you, Hooked.
For those commenters with alternative plot ideas - thanks for the input, I suggest that you write that up into your own "Last Man" story.
Keep 'em comin'.
Interesting story line, but done before. Not sure why mattenw (07-20-20) thinks you’re an “Englishman” or that he thinks all Englishmen write cuck stories? I like your writing style, and don’t see you glamorizing the cuck lifestyle. Anyway four stars for this one.
Let husband and slut sister have them!
Revenge is for Karen and him to get married and have another boy.
Left with not enough punishment
I think in the end he should have married her and had four boys! The other woman at the end seemed superfluous to the story . True carma would be him fucking the ex wife and getting her pregnant with a little boy. And mr 9 inch finding them in bed. Now that would be great revenge.
This was a 4 star story for me. I felt it borrowed too much from George Anderson's story. Also, there really wasn't any tie in to '50 ways to leave your lover' as the title would suggest.
When Roger blurted out 'He's packing' I wondered, 'where did that come from'? Everyone had been talking about the baby and 'conceived in love' and all of a sudden Roger thinks it's really about Traci wanting to strap on Dave's 9 inches. Seemed out of left field to me. And the whole Karen scenario seemed manufactured to get the desired result, being her pregnant and with a son. What better revenge against Dave than for his ex wife (who wasn't supposed to be able to get pregnant) getting pregnant by Traci's ex husband and having it be a son to boot. IN YOUR FACE DAVE?
I was expecting in the end that Dave and Traci would be divorced. That would have been a little karmic justice.
I simply enjoyed the story overall . I didn't care for some parts but you wrote it and made choice of way the story went .
Good story, took an old plot and added a new twist to it. Two questions, 1. How do you get away without at least venting some aggression on Dave? 2. Are you ever going to tell your readers exactly who Traci is or was to you?
Interesting plot. It would have been nice to have Roger tell the whole family, that Dave could have had kids with Karen, if he really wanted. Then followed up with how they should read between the lines about him and Traci, and ask themselves who were the selfish ones... and whether it was wrong for a man to ask for his wife’s loyalty and respect.
A new low and pathetically stupid
why do authors constantly come up with these ridiculous stories about a wife who supposedly deeply loves her husband just past the have sex with another man but it won't affect us all and it won't affect on marriage?
The stories never work . Sure they draw a very highly But really these are just trolling stories by a author who simply wants to get it big reaction for a impossibly stupid story that can never actually exist in the real world
I’m making a sacrifice, it won’t change us. If you loved me you would understand.
Standard slut speak.
I wonder how many women are sitting alone thinking they have been wronged and misunderstood.
Well, for you mindless women looking for the answer. Here it is.
In vitro to help a sister have a family is a sacrifice. But, not discussing it prior to including others would most likely end the marriage anyway. That is a total lack of respect for your husband and don’t expect it to go well.
To say your going to sleep with your sisters husband to get pregnant instead of vitro.
“Because you want them to have the LOVE experience. Well that is just whore talk and unless you are married to a cuck, I.e. not a man. Divorce is a forgone conclusion.
You said yes, he said no, so you went and he had to go go go.
Don’t act shocked. It is never a good outcome for a slut.
"I won't share you with anyone, even family."
That would be ESPECIALLY with family, at least for me.
I recognize the inspiration for this story, and I am glad that in this version, the husband didn't choose to continue the craziness until the inevitable collapse of his marriage. The only thing I wished he would have done differently was to have the divorce papers served before his wife did the dirty deed. Just to give her the best chance to understand that he was serious. Of course, she couldn't have taken him by his word, because then the story would have been a 1-page deal. Except if the story was about how the couple dealt with and grew from her treachery, and about whether they still split up at the end.
But still, the best story here that is based on this trope, that I have seen.
some vile shit this one. not only the wife but pretty much all characters fall straight in the "too stupid to live" category. the main guy at least seemed to be normal but when he started fucking the other crazy sister... oh boy...
oh, and there's ZERO payback for anyone of these assholes.
1* This story is f-upped I don't even want to bother commenting much. Typical obtuse wimp cuck husband runs like a coward ... just like the author would.
A real man (real author) would have kicked bro-n-law a few times in the crotch when they were alone in the kitchen. I might have did that to someone years ago. And it sure did work. It also would have ended this rag story sooner.
of "Last Man: Brian's Tale" by George Anderson, which turned the screws on the angst and loss more (perhaps way too much), just swapped Hungarian royalty for a Scottish clan. Here it was just quick and clean BTB, and then nothing except the birth of a son, which would have been good revenge of they were still together. Would he have accepted a son that wasn't his? Never know now, as the one clever bit was muted/mooted by divorce.
Please also attribute your sources and influences, otherwise it just seems like you are a wilful copier passing off other's work as your own.
"Brian's Tale" itself was a derivative story, wholly acknowledged by its author, of Michael Fitzgerald's "Last Man".
Thanks for the story! Found it interesting and entertaining, if not in a Jerry Springer sort of way!
Killian
Was Roger responsible for the Tracy’s pregnancy on his insurance, did he have to feed her while she was carrying another mans baby? Tracy made the decision to have her sisters baby, wasn’t that decision made with love? Wouldn’t the baby have been considered to be conserved in love?
Stop leading your male character around by his dick in these types of stories. Just because you love someone doesn't mean all those other emotions just vanish, no self respecting man would touch a "wife" like that with a 10 foot pole. Traci disrespected her husband on a fundamental level and you have everyone acting like that is totally ok. No married man is gonna say just go with it and say you'll be a hero, stories like this have to have some basis in reality or they just become pure sci fi.
It was interesting, it was crazy, it was troubling. And the ending was so weird.
Somebody thought him fucking the pregnant Traci was cringe worthy, and it was.
But She had put a full court press on him, and knew his weakness. For her? a ploy to call off divorce. For him? A weak mistake never repeated again. Sure, the author didn't need to include it, but the purpose is served by showing the ups and downs of his roller coaster ride in separating from her.
I didn't like the Karen relationship, or even how it produced karmic revenge. From the start it was written as them using each other. Actually, my kudos to the author for not having it work out, because that wouldn't have happened anyway. But see, I feel that it was presented in an uncomfortable way, just like the pregnant seduction. This author seemed pre-occupied with cringe worthy relationships between ALL of the characters. Unfortunately, highlighting this makes imagining him as a decent father pretty difficult. Oh well. This story did achieve its goals, and I read it strait thru. I thank the author for the efforts, and am reminding myself that LW characters don't have to be people Id want to be friends with, to be entertained by their stories of complicated marital scenarios. This certainly was one of the more complicated ones!
Thanks again, and have a great day!
Well that was convoluted - and fun! I can't stop grinning. Kinda reminds me
of a JPB no holds (or holes) barred story. Thanks for the amusement. *****
Hooked1957 sure likes his wimps,
doesn't he?
1 out of 5 from me.
when fertility meets barren Mother Nature and karma takes charge. TK U MLJ LV NV
But you should have had him serve her as soon as she left to fuck Dave the first weekend. When she made that decision their marriage was over and he should have let her know right away.
This story had the most screwed up people I have ever heard of, I can't believe they are that many idiots in one family
Traci was presented by the MC as a loving, intelligent, and caring wife and mother. Karen towards the end was presented as a kind and loving person. Even his in-laws, while initially were presented as asses, even they were eventually presented as understanding people after he explained himself to them. So, I was left with how could seemingly intelligent, reasonable people not see that there was a major problem with her fucking Dave?
But even seemingly intelligent, and otherwise decent people, can make poor decisions. Traci obviously wanted to fuck Dave, and it wasn't completely out of altruism of having their baby. She also obviously felt that she had the power in the relationship. But, also, bottom line she may have loved her husband, but she didn't love him enough, because she wanted to experience the other man, and she was willing to hurt her husband to do it, and she was willing to risk her marriage to do it.
The MC has a responsibility in the failure of his marriage as well. You don't give another person so much power if you love them. Because that kind of power has the potential to corrupt that person (same with government officials, police, your boss, etc). And if you love someone sometimes you have to protect them from themselves and their more baser instincts. Traci may have still done it, as people without that kind of power in a relationship, still cheat. But at the least would have given her more pause and caused her to reflect more before doing it.
The one thing I thought missing in the story is more about Dave. The only thing we are told about him in the story is that the MC thinks he is an ass, and a dislikable person. Yet Traci wanted him badly enough to risk her marriage (cannot be just the 9 inch dick). He had Karen wrapped around his finger enough that she was willing to let him fuck her sister. Then Karen was willing to let Traci move in and share her sister with him. And the in-laws seemed to have liked him more than the MC. So, it's like sometimes when I find a woman especially hot or desirable, and my wife (and other women) say she's not all that or she is a bitch, or she is fake or whatever. It would have been nice to hear more about what made Dave so attractive to all these other people (besides his 9 inch dick) for it to make more sense why Traci was willing to risk so much (even though she obviously misestimated the level of risk) to get a piece of Dave. Because the only evaluation we have of Dave is the MC's, and that evaluation makes us scratch our heads why these seemingly, at least semi-intelligent people, found him so desirable.
Interesting well written story. 5 Stars.
Hooked, I enjoy your stories but I have a couple problems with this one. When Traci was pregnant with Dave's kid and the divorce was in process, why would he have sex with her? She ripped his heart out (possibly wanting a bigger dick), and he was not included in the discussions and decisions about creating that baby. No way would he get involved again with her. Considering the way her parents treated him, the way he acted when Karen announced her pregnancy made no sense. They don't like him and think he's not good enough - fine, then don't have anything to do with them - EVER! I wouldn't even piss on the mother-in-law if she was on fire and that was the only liquid available. As far as the school test for the kid - take a bottle of aspirin and schedule a conference with the teacher. They would need the aspirin once the relationships are explained.