All Comments on 'Mother-In-Law's Resistance Fades'
by oglerupnorthxx
- 14 Comments
Spelling needs a review "unbottoned" but other than that , it flows nicely. May I suggest in Chapter two....the wife discovers them, and it turns out she has been fucking her daddy....just a thought.
Although i really liked the story, grammar issues drive me nuts! I's -- what does that mean? I admit it's a bit difficult to express what you mean. You could simply have said . . "led her to the master bedroom."
I crank these out in one sitting, and i agree, the grammar is not perfect, but I am simply NOT going to pour over these stories making sure every last word is grammattically correct. I knew the I's thing was idiotic, but I was too hot and heavy by that time to correct it!
What was the Thanksgiving Day tryst? How did all this start? You need to set the ground work for a good story.
Just wonder why all of you readers fancy yourselves "grammar teachers"? It isn't a thesis so if you want to read for punctuation go read "War and Peace" otherwise shut up and enjoy the heat. Damn!!
Good job with Mother in law...
nice. having an affair with my own momma in law aswell... Her pussy is so much better than my wifes and it just feels insanely good when you are aware that the pussy you fuck is 30 years older than you are. As said, age does matter in bed.. the older it gets the better it gets.
This one begins telling us that something had happened before, but we have no idea what it was.
I have read several sizzling stories and enjoy a Mother-Son/n/law story!
Dad can't satisfy her and daughter not enough for him!
Why shouldn't they fuck...and fuck often?
Im trying to get my mother in law in my bed.. hopefully my wife travels overseas for work soon... then will ask my MIL over to make me my favourite dish of hers... a few bottles of wine later i will ask her to stay the night as she cant drive drunk... and we only have 1 bed.... let the fucking begin
That was too fast. And it started somewhere in the middle - after the turkey day fest. What happened then?
I usually don't complain about any story written but this one left out soooo much that would have taken it from too fast to way hot.
Why didn’t you ever Do a story describing the “Turkey day tryist”?
Short and sweet. As long as they can keep their affair a secret and it doesn't affect their marriages, why not.
Nice I loed my mother in law also. And we fucked every chance we go for a few years.