All Comments on 'Moving on'
by Iwroteathing
- 11 Comments
Good to have another story from you! Good premise here, had a few ups and downs in terms of enjoyment but overall a great addition to your library. I felt the ending was very sudden and not very impactful but aside from that, an excellent work. Thanks for writing :)
fuck yes, need more. Was worried we wouldnt get more of your work. Hopefully we see even more caught humiliation like this.
A good story. I adore the way you develop Elizabeth's need for humiliation like a junkie's craving for drugs grows with every high.
Hope to see more great tales soon.
Love your stories!! I love how much of the humiliation in your stories comes from the girl’s own decisions and isn’t completely forced on her against her wishes. I do like some external pressure to help, but I like when it’s mostly a result of an internal desire. You do a great job of that.
Nice story overall, but I have to say that the radio interview portion was top-tier
It's the best story ever!
The scene where she takes off her wig and shows her baldness is fantastic. Especially as Stevewoo609 said, I really like that she did all of this voluntarily.
It's curious that you have chosen this theme. A famous that doesn't want to be famous anymore and ends up being more famous for the wrong reasons. I cannot say I understand her reasoning because I've never been a child star in a sitcom, so she may be right.
-Onkana