All Comments on 'Mr. Basketball Ch. 04'
by betweenthesheets
- 11 Comments
Very good story one of the best I've read it's not all about the sex the story was excellent it's just a pity it's over
Seems likely the category will change if there is a part 5. Maybe skip ahead several years to where they are now married, he is coaching her younger sister, and she joins them?
Don't know.
I'm like so not into these characters. Bland they are.
But despite my feelings, good story. Just not as good as others elsewhere.
Keep going.
It just seems like you just finished the series off real quick with this last chapter. Either way it is or was a good series which ever way it goes
I have more. I have to wait until the site posts the stories before I submit the next chapter. I sent all my stories out at once one time and one of them got kicked back which made the whole thing a mess. I guess I am going to take my chances and post two chapters tonight.
Keep up the good work. Keep some mystery and reconcile the situation with Sam.
did read good deal ............. can't believe that `" thom "` gonna actually
allow his daughter `" teagan "` date `" jake "` ..... didn't you say somewhere
in story -> `" jake + thom "` went school same time &&& `" jake "` almost
actually fucked `" thom "` wife { in which } `" thom "` knew something was
going down { in which } `" jake + thom "` never ever have truly gotten along ....
now suddenly `" thom "` allows `" jake "` actually date daughter of his .......
huhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ................... guess that i'll have read the
whole thing so that i'll understand
Sweet! I think its awesome dad didnt turn out to be a douche, heh. Can't say as I would have told Tegan about the almost sex though, yeesh. Especially since its more complicated with it being his cousin. Honestly I'd be wracking my brain trying to figure out a way to keep my girlfriend and my cousin and make everyone happy together. He shoulda been pushing that harder! Marry the girl, cousin lives with you both.