All Comments on 'Mrs. Batemann's Project'
by S3lwyncd0g
- 10 Comments
I really like how you got this going, I hope that this will continue and they get closer. Thank you!
But the sex was just blah.
No buildup. No significant foreplay. No teasing. Mostly it was just:
I'm gonna fuck you.
We're naked.
Big tits.
We're fucking.
We fucked.
It's over.
Really about as blah as it could get.
With extensive details it could have been great, but all I could give it was three stars.
Story says it is set in 77,but description in story list says summer of 61.
Missed my chance with my mother's friend out of fear of rejection and her telling my mother. Somehow my mother heard and that peaked her interest in me.
It was a good story and I think it would make a nice outline for a great story. A longer version with suspense, anticipation, and feelings would make this a great story. Thank you for sharing!
Horny older woman, young boy with big cock.
The first few paragraphs couldn't have been more boring.
It got better when Diane got into the action then it went downhill again.
There was no sensuality in any of his associations.
Just pure cold writing.
Some people can find fault with anything. I enjoyed the story as Todd went from the gifted introvert to the confident young man regarding sexuality and women. It would have been nice if he, or at least we, could have learned the back stories on the women that he serviced. Just curious. Thanks.
"I recognized it as a Rolleiflex." Therefore we know that the boy- whore was able to read.