All Comments on 'Mrs Harrison'

Very hot intro into what could be a very good series. I hope you are writing part 2 right now, very hot.

I agree with the last comment hot hot story. More plz

Story great but you have to proofread it not just use spell check.

A really hot story that leaves avenues open. As one commentor says we'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

Really well written piece..hope to see more of the same characters...great job...

Top story and great potential for lots of kinky adventures in the future. Agree that you should proof the work more but its only a small gripe compared to the quality of the work. Well done.

This first installment was all over the place, first one "thing" and then "another"! You did, however, cover everything quite nicely, thereby the 4 rating. I'll continue to read, but "try" to stay focused, if it's possible.

...are not my favorite. The fact that they are between mother and daughter make them more hot. I will read the next chapter where Mrs. Harrison gets into it with her son.

But all of the characters need a course in Anger Management.

Too messy. The basis was there for a really hot story but it just got going too many ways all at once.

It should have been left alone with mom being in the femdom role over both kids, the whole scene with Chris ruined the flow.