by Wordy_1s
Seems in order...
Great story...but you can't leave that tease dangling and not flesh it out... lol
And drop the "it's true" bit. It does nothing for the story. You're on a porn site on the world wide web. No one believes a word coming out of your mouth. Then try to come up with something new. A bit of originality or cleverness wouldn't hurt either. This just made me laugh it was so bad.
A second chapter is in order. Maybe a continuation of Teed Off On also. Your call.
This story is frightening in the same sense that scary movies are. I keep coming back to your stories because they have enough realism to have actually happened. Intense, erotic, and, apparently, true.