All Comments on 'My Mother Owns Me Ch. 07'

I enjoy reading your stories. I hope Sheila gets Dave the Prince Albert, maybe on the 5th day so when Leah is looking forward to action she can’t have any till it heals. Little pay back. Slave boy should have his tongue pierced servicing those girls, it will be extra pleasure for them.

Good story - you have me hooked.

I can't agree with 's comment - I want Dave to learn but come out of this intact as Leah argued. I'm in Team Leah in this story.

The two mothers are nothing but a pair of incestuous whores and the sisters are not much better

Gamblnluck is a very good writer! This chapter advanced the story. The major story arc is to make Dave a better person via slavery and incest as parenting tools. Dave exhibited a little more maturity and self control.

The author gave his answers to so many of the comments about how Dave will be psychologically damaged when set free.

He used Leah to give societies view in this universe. She stated:

“mental abuse is really the point. The law and society WANT mental changes in slaves. Now of course they don't want rabid dogs running around, and if that happens, and a person goes off the range, they are either re-enslaved or put down depending on the crime. There are full courses in college on slave psychology. Studies galore done. They have half way houses and government sponsored programs to help slaves re-assimilate into society. For the most part they don't care if a released slave is a shadow of who he was as long as he does not commit another crime."

Hmm Government Programs have been so effective at solving individual and societal problems in our world, NOT!

Gamblnluck consistently reminds us readers of how Dave or any other slave deserves all punishment and abuse. The telling of how Dave used and abused slave girls with no mercy set the stage for him getting no sympathy from the reader.

Gamblnluck argued both sides of how Dave should or shouldn’t be humiliated in public. The fans of gay cock sucking will have to wait to know if the author wants Dave being used by men.

Leah’s character argued to limit the long term psychological damage to Dave by keeping his humiliation mostly private in the family. Leah quoted so many of the commentators predictions about what a broken Dave would do.

Amanda’s telling about her female boss a former slave used sexually by women she now has business with was not believable. Rape survivors just shrug it off and would do business with their rapist?

Author answered those that predicted Sheila would go totally psycho on Dave by having Leah rein her in then Sheila apologized. We’ll see what happens at the party. Will author use Sheila as Dave’s torturer or will he have her mature and develop tough love for Dave along the arc to produce a better more mature Dave as he is freed. Oh the warm and fuzzy parenting of Dave by Sandra along with Leah’s tough but fair slave owner/mentor along with Sheila as a part owner part friend and love interest. Oh the potentials for Dave being freed and submissive to his mother sister and Leah his wife. A slave to love. Poor Dave the best future for him is too horrible.

Sandra in her pursuit of “Mother of the Year” decides to limit Dave’s public humiliation and continue use of incest only in private. Wow so nice of her for now until author has Dave mess up. We know it is going to happen.

Gamblnluck is a good writer and I am certain he will continue to justify Dave being abused by his loving family. This is erotic fiction and the genre is non-consent so the author will continue to abuse Dave physically and psychologically with a great deal of incest.

These 7 chapters cover a little more than a week of Dave’s enslavement. At that pace four years of Dave’s slavery will require almost 1250 chapters. When author tires of this I predict Dave will die. I predict Bob will cause his death. He is the only character the author has not attempted to give any redeeming qualities. I suspect after many more chapters of Dave’s suffering and being broken the reader will welcome Dave’s passing.

At least we now know Mom has not thought things through (kind of like Dave and his crime and Leah and the collar recharging) and has figured the pit of gold would solve all Dave’s post slavery issues. Thankfully Leah has now clued her in. Interested to see if it causes ANY change in her choices, behavior and attitude. I’d bet not - successful businesswoman or not, she’s an immature idiot. Hoping the candy factory hits hard times and Bas has to invest money to bail it out. Money that also involves transferring ownership of Dave to him. He and Derek actually seem to care about their slaves, plan for their future (a future the slave actually wants) and gives the slaves some free time to just be - not constantly being harassed, humiliated, ridiculed and abused. Do these witches EVER let up?

My prediction

Shiela will abuse him for the week inc piercing, blow jobs etc as she knows she will have only one bite at the cherry before never having access to him again. Major fall out between Sandra and Amanda ensues.

Everything implodes 😂

I love the comments. I have written the end of the story. Well, how I plan to end it for now. I'll weave the arc back later. Many of the comments reflect what I and my beta readers have already concluded; every one of my main characters are assholes in one way or another. They are all self-serving. And nobody thinks they are the bad guy. I just need to edit and clan up the story a bit to make it 'flow'.

I have tried to keep my slave world consistent. I have gone back an re-read sections Slave Camp and Gotta Pay the Piper to keep characters, events and societal rules consistent. In some ways I have failed. I tend to be inconsistent in sentencing. But then if you look at our society, you have to wonder...

Thanks for reading and commenting. I did not realize this story would be the story readers love to hate.

Mr. Luck: Yes, this is a story I love to hate and can't keep myself from reading. The main characters (females) are psychopaths in my opinion. The "hate" comes from empathisizing with the protagonist and the vicious and unfair and undeserved sentence and treatment he receives.

I'm glad you let Leah understand the implications of what was being done - her character is developing. I envisioned the protagonist sinking into a zombie state with his personality totally repressed and becoming non-functional with the early direction of the story. I don't see how a human could be mentally (especially the incest with his mother given other aspects of his personality) and physically abused to that extent and be expected to function in a work environment every day.

Thanks for the story and at least some relief. You're an amazing writer (but I'm no expert).

Thanks for the time a d effort you and your team have put into this.

-jog

Really looking forward to more!

Thanks for your comment. Don't envy the task in trying to tie this up to a suitable ending so quick? Or stopping point? You've potentially developed and added even more interpersonal conflicts that I cannot see how you are going to resolve them. Will look forward to the next chapter(s) to see which way you take it. Will quit predicting or prognosticating cause everything so far has not been in your universe. Like to see what happens with Sheila and Dave Saturday night and the party Sunday and how you can end the story line. Know what I would like to see / read, hasn't happened yet but still hoping. Guess this is what you mean by a story readers love to hate. LOLOL. Keep it up. Always at least read stories from authors who write well.

Bob’s character was written as a POS. None of the comments have had sympathy on him. Before he was enslaved his wife cuckolded him with Amanda and possibly other women. After Bob returned from Slave Camp Sandra and Amanda take Bob on a trip and torture and humiliate him. He whines about Sandra threatening to bring other men or slave boys home and make Bob watch her have sex with them. Then Sandra apologized and promised no other men. Oh except slave Dave. Author has not revealed how Bob feels about that. This chapter Gamblnluck had Amanda put Bob in chastity during graduation. He is divorced and slavery is the ultimate cuck experience.

A little more than a week of time in the story Dave has made some progress towards his mother’s goal of becoming more mature wiser and able to think ahead about consequences of his decisions. We hear Dave’s inner thoughts so we know he has not changed only restrained by the collar and threat of punishment.

Amanda is correct for the wrong reason. She desires to dominate and break any man and a male slave is the perfect toy for her to play with. Unrestrained Amanda would break Dave if she could.

Dave needs more of his dignity and immaturity stripped away. Letting Sheila totally humiliate Dave at the party would be a good experience for Dave. The author’s society accepts slaves being sexually abused. And there are the wonderful government programs and therapists to help freed slaves reintegrate to society.

So an 18 years old woman changes her mind every 5 minutes. Sheila can be written to go forth with her plan at the party. Dave has 4 years to accept and deal with his slave life.

Sandra has not shown the ability to love Dave only punish him for mistakes.

An answer to the poster who said it would take 1250 more chapters: at the start, Dave thinks back that he's been enslaved for 3 weeks and four days already. Coupled with the week covered here, that means that it will only be about 320 chapters total. Which is still quite a lot, admittedly, especially if there's some kind of epilogue telling of Dave's first day of being manumitted.

I do wonder about the two or four years, though. Is there the possibility of early release, as in the other two story arcs is mentioned? If so, then he could be free in a year. If not, then the 4 years is the standard sentence he got, and the 2 years would be the possible (but by no means certain) early release. If he does only have to serve a year, then this could be finished in under 80 chapters, assuming the author skips a few days now and then. Plus, of course, the epilogue, which could consist of no more than: "Then I (ie. Dave) walked off into the sunset, leaving my former family behind forever."

Another question which I started wondering about while reading this is: what about pregnant slave girls? I know they can't be impregnated during their slavery because of plot armor (a convenient implant), but pregnancy can be a preexisting condition. Allegedly.

I found Leah's comment (mental abuse is really the point) to be thought provoking, and wonder what that means in-story (though we start to get some idea later in the chapter, and more in later chapters I'm sure).

But looking at fictional world perspective it makes sense some percentage of people believe that. Slavery is it replacement for prison, and IRL there are a significant chunk of the country who feel prison is all about punishment - full stop. They don't care about reform (often exaggerating failures), or making it more difficult to reintegrate the former felon into society. They are fine with long term solitary confinement, despite the mental damage it does. Punishment!!!

But it is the rare family member that wants pure punishment meted out to their own family and friends. Even when they have rage and feel betrayed. And that's the tension in this story. Family carrying out societal expectations with out properly thinking about the likely results.

I normally avoid going into politics on this site, but I have a couple of observations that seem on topic.

I grew up during the flowering of prison reform during 60/70s (with mixed results), and the backlash of the 80/00s (when no politician would suffer by being too tough on crime, and things like 3 strike laws becoming common). Personally I'm results oriented; pushing to reduce crime in the first place (beyond the "stick" of threatened hard sentences), and redivicism afterwards. I find the punishment-only focus to be determental to society when viewed in the big picture.

The other goes to empathy and the differences between typical liberal and conservative personalities (worldwide, this isn't specific the USA). Conservative tend to treat people outside the "tribe" with less empathy then liberals. If one of "us" does something bad, they are an exception (bad apple). If one of "them" does something bad, all the rest of "them" are suspect too. And then we get legal systems based on punishing "them", not one of "us". And we only realize how harsh the legal system can be when one of "us" gets subjected to it.

For a real life example, look at the people complaining about the treatment of Jan-6 prisoners in Washington DC prisons. They didn't care about the atrocious prisons when it was just "them" being maltreated. But when the same things happened to one of "us", the usual maltreatment turns into a conspiracy theory.

Leah is key in this episode. She foreshadows the effect that slavery has on society at large. And not just the slave. As for Shelia, as a reader I’d delight if she were caned. But a good old fashioned OTK spanking might be more appropriate. Still, five stars.