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Click here"Welcome home, Jerry," said my mother. "We came over early before opening the store to take you out to breakfast. We thought Millie would want to come too but she must have stayed with one of her friends last night. She's going to be sorry she missed out on seeing you this morning."
About that time, I heard Millie yell out from the bedroom, "I found it, Jerry. I found the vibrator in your underwear drawer."
We all looked up and here came a smiling Millie wearing one of my button type shirts. She was smiling when she came into the room until she saw Mom and Dad standing there.
"Mom, Dad, what are you two doing here?" she asked, as she tried to hide the vibrator by holding it behind her.
It was too late, they saw it.
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Thank you for reading my story
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DG Hear
- COMMENTS
Epilogue: mum and dad were pissed but they accepted us fairly quickly once we pointed out that we weren't blood relatives and so it wasn't really incest. We all had a good a laugh about how stupid they were being. Fast forward 5 years and we're about to go out on our 5-year anniversary date, which is guaranteed to end in lots of hot kinky sex. Mum and dad are over the moon and are watching the girls (we had twin girls 3 years ago and they are the lights of our lives). Life couldn't be better.
Some of you might be wondering what happened to Marti and her husband. No surprise there; he cheated again. Shocker, I know. Marti wasn't as forgiving the second time around. Let's just say he won't be having any intercourse for the rest of his life. Not sure if she found someone else to make her happy. I hope so. She deserves to be happy.
This story was truncated; it is heavily incomplete. It badly needs a proper ending chapter and more details: for instance, what is the sister studying in? Any areas of special interest professionally, fun activities, etc. for her? Let's remember that she used his apartment for some fun loving times!
Let's also remember that he was adopted; so he and his sister are NOT biologically brother and sister or blood relatives. I loved the idea of their parents finding about them together after their first time as actual lovers and the finding out of her vibrator!!! That was really good.
5* for this story and I hope to be able to eventually give another 5* later on to the follow-up chapter.
BJ
I think the pacing was too fast to show as much emotion as the word "love" needs to convey. It's a good rough draft. That cliffhanger ending was actually hilarious I'd love to read a sequel once you've got one nailed down.
MICK WAS A REALLY STUPID SEX CRAZED BASTARD!! HIM BEING NEEDY OVER MARTI THEN BEATING HER HYSBAND WAS PATHETIC!!
Well, the story had a great start but as a reader I always become disappointed when the author takes you to a point or in this case a cliffhanger in the storyline the parents catch them together and now what happens? DG it really needs a finish. 4 stars would have been 5 stars if you had an ending on it.
, he had sex with his sister the whole night, but it's technically not a incest story, yeh right...
I enjoy reading sibling incest stories but sorry this isn't a very good one. The story just didn't flow for me the way the MC narrated the story as though he was writing it just didn't work and didn't feel natural.
But enjoyed the story. I thought the ending finished far too abrupt though. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Sort of a copout. They were not brother and sister and could legally get married.
So is it Millie or Minnie? Other than that distraction, it was a very good story. I can see where the conflict that Jerry felt would be genuine for someone whom he truly cares for rather than simply lusting. Since the story involved very little involvement by Millie/Minnie as an adult, I would have enjoyed seeing a bit more of the story to include her since she IS the sister in the title. I gave it 5 stars simply because they "found" each other. That's the touching part. Thanks DBH for the read.
-bern1965(pending)
talk about a cliff hanger.....that was a evil thing to do but if it wasn't a good story it wouldn't have mattered.
Come on man that is a total cliffhanger ending!!!!! What happens when they found out???
They make every brother who loves his sister to be some kind of sex maniac. and most sister bisexual and then the brother fuck her friends . in some story there is some brother who is loved by 2 even 3 girls including his sister . i dont know what those writers think they are
But we all have minds of our own -
They were not related by blood - so no laws were broken and few morals of import -
It would depend entirely on who the parents were - down deep -
I chose to think they smiled and every one had a good breeakfast -
This story is incomplete there is not a conclusion. The reader is left hanging at the end.
I think I would have had Mom go over to the stairs and call Sis down for breakfast. The parents should have seen it coming for years and been happy that it happened. After all, the kids were not related by blood. They wouldn't and didn't say anything before because the lovers should and did find out about each other by themselves. That is why they should have had the smiles on when they came into the store.
I really love this story! I love how the sister found. I'm glad she did find out. If you find the love, and they feel the same about you, go for it!
But seriously, you HAVE to continue this. What were the parents reaction? Will they approve (albeit right away or over time)? Will the siblings move together some where and live as husband and wife?
PLEASE CONTINUE!
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL at the ending!!! I FOUND THE VIBRATOR IN YOUR UNDERWEAR DRAWER
Bro/sis love stories are just the best. This wasn't incest in the purest since of the word, since they weren't blood relatives. But, I bet mom and dad didn't quite see it that way. I'm glad you let us imagine our own endings for the story. Thanks for another fine tale.
another useless writer that get us hooked then fails to finish the story i wish they would ban these wanabe writers and remove their unfinished stories