- Lesbian Sex
- Nanny Sarah Pt. 03
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All Comments on 'Nanny Sarah Pt. 03'
by JCMcNeilly
- 286 Comments
Lovely story. You had me going there for a while toward the end. Five stars!
.. Wow! Sitting here with the biggest smile ever. Loved every second of this story. Such a pleasure to read. I will be reading this amazing story over and over in the near future. definitely 5* Thank you :)
Part 3 was everything and much more. I loved their Love!! The storytelling was heartfelt and real with emotions. Get a tissue and just dive in. Warning: I realized Part 3 was available shortly after the 11p.m. News, and couldn't stop reading until done!!! Amazing writer, I am definitely a new fan! I will read her other stories....tomorrow!😁
I have never been close to shading a tear in joy from a story from literotica. This 3rd helping sure did that. I awoke this morning in the vain hope to see if this 3rd helping was ready and sure it was. I read each word glued to the story line. The whole 3 sections are brilliantly written and I wish that I could be so lucky too.
I am sorry it has ended now but what a lovely ending..... I wish it could continue.... Thank you
Great Story, Thank You
Looking forward to your next one, with bated breath.
The only time I have ever read a story, start to finish, on here. This was an incredible read! My only complaint is that it didn’t last longer lol
...you had me going for a few minutes---the story's ending could have gone either way with equal plausibility. I'm pleased it ended well, though. This has been an utterly charming tale all through, reinforcing the promise you showed with The Tennis Star. You came across very strongly with the sub-plot about Maggie and her attitude. At least here was one bigot who realised that she was hurting herself more than anyone else. A well-deserved five stars.
(There were quite a few typos throughout, nothing that spoiled the story but did make some places read a bit oddly. It might be an idea to ask someone else to proofread for you.)
lockdown is weird, I've never waited eagerly for a new episode on here before... thanks so much!
another great story you should write a book as i been reading book for 45 years so get on with it well done
I so wanted a happy ending.
I was really nervous towards the end as they all prepared for the graduation except Sarah. But your beautiful writing had a twist right at the end.
Thank you so much for three amazing stories.
5 stars from me.
This may be the story that I have enjoyed the most. It had everything and I was overjoyed by the end. Wonderful and even better than the Tennis Star. Please keep up the good work. Thank you.
"Romance and Love" written to perfection!!!
As Candy Cane54 noted, I was also becoming a bit worried in the final section of page-07, however was hugely overjoyed when Sarah, who had been holding the seats joined everyone. There have been many lovely "Lesbian Romance / Love" stories on this site, with Nanny Sarah being in the top 0.1%.
It was a joyous treat for me to journey with Connie-Sarah-Heidi as their lives intersected with family and friends. Just a fabulous love story and thanks for sharing with us.
Rated An Awesome 5-STARS!!!!!!
At home on location,
at home in your writing and storyline,
at home in my heart to choose as favorite author and story.
Thank you for a wonderful experience.
I really enjoyed this series. I got worried that you weren’t going to let them be together. But I am so glad you did. And I love that they made a family. You could have probably written more about their life together. I am sure I would just keep reading anything you wrote about them. Can’t wait to discover your next series! Keep writing.
I loved the story and the relationship, though the sex was almost superfluous
Thank you for sharing a captivating love story. Please continue to share your stories; you are a very fine writer. More, please.
I have been waiting patiently to find out how you were going to end this wonderful story and you haven't disappointed me at all.
I absolutely loved this story and your writing. I couldn’t put it down. Heart tugging and sexy at the same time. I’m sure writing this was no easy task. So very well written and engaging. I love how long it was and the quality was far beyond most other writing. I look forward to reading more from you JC. Thank you for the beautiful story.
I am pretty teary though. Your beautiful story got to this old straight-guy. 😎 ❤️
In all the years of reading stories here and on other sites (earlier days of the net), I’ve never read a story as touching as the story of Constance and Sarah. Your writing brought tears of joy and sadness, anger and hurt but mostly of love. I have never read a story here where I found myself hurrying through the sex scenes to get back to the personal story. Yours was the first (and btw, the sex scenes were still hot steamy and amazingly sexy). I applaud your skill and talent and courage to pour so much of yourself into telling their story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Just had to comment on this amazing story which I think I recall may have had a
true connection to the Author, JCMcNeilly! The sex in this story certainly did
escalate as time went on so the author should not have to apologize for it being
Vanilla. Please continue writing and thank you.
You an absolutely wonderful writer. Easy to read but full of love, feelings, romance and family. I'm a "mature" fellow and all but I got teary-eyed especially towards the end. I wish men in general were more invested the heart like Sarah and Connie. Please continue with your stories.
This was one of the greatest love stories I have ever read anywhere. A prior comment mentioned the sex being a little superfluous, I think I agree. The way chapter 2 started with the tragedy, and the way Maggie was so bigoted in her ways towards them, the ending could of gone both ways. A huge credit to your writing that you interweaved the Love amidst all the other emotions conjured up in these 3 chapters. I eagerly await any more submissions and thank you like everyone else here how well this one was presented.
It was a fantastic story I could not stop reading and then read it a couple of times since hope you will have more stories like this one you are talented writer thank you.xx
I loved the story. The sex was just an aside because the love expressed by all the people was so overwhelming. Ann Douglas has some of the same qualities in her writing. Keep writing and let us hear more from you. Love.
Without a doubt the most touching and well written story I have read at this site. The characters were so real and I am sorry the story had to end. You couldn’t have written a more perfect ending. Thank you.
I don’t believe I can add anymore quality comments that haven’t already been written. This was a well told romance, one of the best I’ve read. However, I don’t think I’ve read a last page to a story as fast as I did with this one. I’m so glad it ended the way it should have. Thank you for writing this a sharing. Look forward to your future posts.
Get a beta-reader. A really good story marred by too many disruptive typos. Very unfortunate.
Just perfectly written. Held my interest, kept me in suspense and ended wonderfully.
Keep them coming. And I have read many good stories on this site. Never commented; this one warranted comment and a thank you
Thank you for a wonderful story, never nasty, but uncomfortable at times with the relationship between Sarah and her mother, but made easier by the support of her siblings. How a love story should be written, and so believable. It was wonderful that Maggie came round in the end.
Only one slight criticism it was a shame that you glossed over the wedding, as I would have loved to know whether Maggie walked Sarah down the isle as I feel that it would have been complete closure between them. Also you never mentioned whether Maggie loved the number of grandchildren they produced for her, and whether she came to help just after the births of each of them.
But hey you would have probably needed another chapter for that.
Anyway thanks for making us believe that there are good things in life, even though the current times are very testing. Stay safe.
Rgds Al
This was awesome and I loved it! But I was waiting for a sweet conversation between Connie and Heidi about how she should stop calling her Nanny Sarah and call her mom instead.
Truly amazing! I love this story and how you've captured their love together! Thank you so much for sharing this story with us!
This was excellent. While I love explicit stories, a well-written romance is a gift and all three parts were very well done and a delight to read. Please, more stories.
A truly beautiful story. Such wonderfully believable and loveable characters. First story I actually, almost, found myself glossing over the sex to find out what was next for Connie and Sarah. That's NEVER happened before. Yours is a truly wonderful, God given gift. Thank you, from the bottom of my wife's and my heart, we've REALLY enjoyed this story (even more than your previous work. Even more than the Milly Scott saga, our FORMER favorite story on this site). Please continue to grace us with your beautiful, wonderous gifts.
PS, thanx for the nod to us churchy-types not ALL being bad, were not. God bless you and yours.
with a previous comment. This is a great story that deserves a good proofreading. I repeatedly found my immersion in the story being interrupted by too many typos. I just can't bring myself to give it 5 stars due to the somewhat sloppy presentation. And that's a real shame.
What a great way to spend in lockdown. I enjoyed reading all of it. Sad that its over but i know i will be rereading it again and again.
What a beautiful story. I loved how it all unfolded and was moved to tears on several occasions. Thank you.
It is unfortunate that several people are commenting and docking points because of a few spelling mistakes, letting that completely overshadow thousands of words of amazing storytelling.
While this is a great story, it is in fact flawed. Stories of this caliber deserve to be as perfect as possible. JCMcNeily if you're reading your feedback, please take the time(if you can) to polish this diamond. It has the potential to be one of the best in the genre.
This was a wonderful story and I really love how you created a story so unlike the previous one. Let me explain what I mean...Many authors on this site create stories without creating completely unique characters. For instance, I've seen that one author has submitted numerous stories, over the course of many years, where all of the main characters look and act the same. I get having a "type" or creating a main character that meets your own description, but I wish that there was a bit more imagination/creativity/versatility brought into those stories (the ones that were not a part of a series, of course). You did an absolutely fantastic job of creating a completely original feel to this story. The characters were unique in both their physical descriptions and in their personalities. The storyline was great and it was authentic. I am personally not into using the over-the-top, lovey-dovey endearments like "my beloved" but that is a personal thing in my part and has no bearing on the quality of this piece. Spelling issues happen but, in this particular case, they didn't take away from the story in any way. I would only focus on the positive comments after this story...plus, unless it's a positive/constructive critique, I wouldn't give a damn what any really negative Anonymous commenter has to say. If I take issue with anything in a story I read, I have the guts to comment on it and to do so with my name attached. You are fantastic and I absolutely look forward to anything else you share with us in the future.
What a beautiful story!! Everything you write just makes me smile .. thanks so much for this beautiful love story ❤️
I've been reading literotica for about 5 years and this is only the second review I've given. Your story is a wonderful present. The characters were so engaging and relatable, I fell in love with them as I read. The conflicts that effect same sex couples were written with such a deft hand and the resolutions felt organic. The pacing as they built their family was magnificent. I loved especially how Heidi brought Maggie, Connie and Sarah together as a family. The sex was very well depicted, but for me it became secondary to the blossoming of the relationship. In part 2 I was actually cheering Connie on as she came to acknowledge her love of Sarah. This story was beautiful and touching. Thank you
I really enjoyed this story as a whole. I liked the slow build up and the tension in the first part. I have one issue with the story though. As their relationship changed, it was a little jarring for me that they were still referred to her as Nanny Sarah. Heidi already made the shift to call Maggie grandma. So why still Nanny? All the way till the engagement she was still Nanny. At what point would that change?
I read and reread this story I cried every time. I faced the same thing with my wife's mother. She didn't learn my name until we were together for about 3 years. You are a amazing writer I can't wait to read what you write next. Please keep up the wonderful work.
I'm an ordinary heterosexual male and would never condone this particular type of coupling,this stoy, however rugged on my heartstrings. This was true love and it made me cry!!
You must be vigilant when checking spelling, grammar and missing words before posting!
Otherwise, this is a very well written piece of literature.
Well done.
I really like how you painted their struggles. It's not ever going to be a bed of roses if you ever dare to be different or 'unconventional'. And you not only showed us that but also gave us the promise that everything will be ok if we keep being and doing our best.
And yes. The sex scene were smoking hot. Wheww... Definitely what I needed this lockdown. You're an amazing writer. XOXO
I read this in less than 3hrs while I almost lost my bladder. What a good write up. Going to devour the rest of your page.
I really lost it in the end there where the writing seems to point towards the fact that Sarah has passed. Wow very intelligent writing, but delighted they are living a happy life. I am a sucker for happy endings.
I loved the way you told their story so I read Carrie and Iryna's as well. I'll be watching for everything you write.
Simply beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing Connie and Sarah’s story. You have a wonderful talent and I very much look forward to your next story! Please don’t keep us waiting too long. Much love and many thanks.
I really like how you didn't paint all the male characters in this story as scumbags. That's one thing most lesbian eroticas have in common; Like we are in some sort of battle against the male species.
I also really also like how Megan and Connie's children didn't all turn out as gay (no, am not a homophobe) though it was made obvious it wouldn't be a problem for their parents. It's a very common cliche among lesbian erotica, and stereotypes in general, that gay parents give birth to gay people. Which I think is a very dumb assumption anyway.
I guess it goes without saying your story defiles the norm in more ways than one. Which I think is really cool. You are Prolific Writer. Not just with this story but also with your other stories I've had the opportunity of reading.
Thank you very much and I really look forward to more of your stories. Am your biggest fan(*wink*).
well done look forward to more i really like believable characters ps the sex did not seem vanilla to me all the best shayne
You got me there.
Wonderful, wonderful story. Certainly one to hold onto for future rereading!
Wow, just wow. I loved this story from start to finish, and it will be on my short list of stories to re-read in the near future. Thank you for sharing this lovely creation with us!
Loved story from start to finish all 3 parts. One of best I have read. Great story lines well done.
It was quite obvious where this story was going but the route it took made for a beautiful story. I just wish there were more real life stories that have such a happy ending. Absolutely loved it ...more in the same vein please.
Loved this story!! you are very talented!! Thank you for sharing!
This was one of the best stories I have read on here, I was so invented in the people I didn’t want it to end. Just a great story thank you
Thank you for writing i loved reading it. Look forward to more of your stories and maybe a catch up with them.
I really enjoyed their relationship. They were just two women with lots of love to give. There were no such as a "masculine" role. Sometimes when I read this type of novels I feel that the writer is describing a man with a clit. But you manage to keep the escence of two women loving each other with tenderness. Great work!!
Very interesting fun fact at the end. I mean frogs self produce all the time so not surprised scientist would try to replica that for other creatures and hopefully human one day
Amazing trilogy
I thought there would be a little more drama, but at the end, it was just brilliant writing. Looking forward to reading more from you. Not often an author on this site makes my tears flow... And get an erection.
You are a tremendous writer, and I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Beautiful and passionate, and eloquently written. Hope to read more works from you in the future.
A beautiful story. I'm straight (bi curious and I love love, and this story you shared. Im crying happy tears as I write. You give me hope after many years 7+ of being single of love finding me again.....as unexpectedly. Thank you or sharing this beautiful story with us all.
Nice story. Good to see tribbing making it too.
Not so impressed to see a story about lesbians involving religion. In a world where, in many countries, to be gay is in one way or another a death sentence due to bigoted views imposed by those insisting that their word is the word of their god, it is a little galling.
Maybe your experience with organised religion was good, but for others it will have been terrible. Take mine as an example.
My own grandmother was disgusted that I refused to be involved with her church as a young teenager, and I became an afterthought at family gatherings or just left out altogether, but when I came out she loudly demanded that I be confined in an institution and forcibly given corrective surgery if necessary, that my parents cut all ties with me until I saw the light, that sort of thing.
After a few months of being on my own, not quite 18 years old, I made the mistake of talking to a priest in the town where I had just started university who decided I needed an 'intervention', and he would have got away with it had he not brought five very suspicious looking men with him into a female halls of residence! The police became involved, a potential charge of the aggressive kidnapping of a minor dropped and he was let off with a few words of advice while I was warned to moderate my behaviour to not cause offence to 'right minded', god-fearing people.
These days I am still ignored by my father and siblings but have contact with some cousins who also rejected the church. Among my extended friend group today is a former vicar and an Italian ex nun, both gay and both hounded out of those professions for that reason (both are now social workers, amongst other things helping those who find themselves confused about their sexuality).
And still homosexuals are terrorised by religious maniacs, even in the apparently civilised west.
Lexi
I am so sorry those things happened to you. If you’ve read my story The Tennis Star, you know that I am not insensitive to these issues. My next story will deal with this more firmly. The purpose of that scene was to show both Connie and, more significantly, Maggie, that not every person of faith is like that. They aren’t, although I know many are, and they are louder and scarier than those who support people like us. It is so easy for us to let our experience shape our world view to the point where we refuse to believe people can be different and better than we’ve experienced. But we can’t stop believing they can. We can, as people, be better than we are, be it homophobia or racism or sexism or the myriad other ways we judge each other. I have to believe that. I don’t know that we will, but we have to try. In my little little worlds I create, people need to be able to change, to grow. If they can’t, if we can’t, what’s the point of living?
JC
As others have commented, too many errors. Proofing needed.
The last half of chapter two and all of chapter three started to drag. I believe that with clean editing and a rewrite, a nicer, shorter story overall would have resulted.
Still a damn sight better than anything I could produce.
Nothing new as in my comments have been made by others. This was not a good story. No, it was a GREAT story. Very moving, very touching. Fell in love w the characters. Maybe spotted a few typos but hey, 3 chapters each like 7 Lit pages, that's a lot of text. Never interfered with my reading. Thought the slow melting of Maggie was great and how your used the little girl to get her to realize her mistake was brilliant. Like many others I tended to skip the sex scenes just to get back to the story, though that one where Maggie was in the next room and Connie had to stay quiet was HOT.
I also would have liked to have a scene about their wedding. Like others have mentioned I feared the worst at the end. Cancer or a car accident I thought was coming. Really glad it ended well.
J
Congrats you are the first literotica writer to make me cry ;-) that means you captured me i your story. Fantastic work, thank you ;-)
You are truly gifted, thank you for sharing this with the world. This story was beautiful and moving. Again thank you for sharing a part of your heart with us because that's what writing should be.
Wonderful story - nicely paced and written. Exploring many issues and answering with good values - love and kindness. Especially loved your last few paragraphs, they rounded out the story well and gave a sense of closure - we know what happened and it worked.
I find an absolute gem of a story on this site. There are many good stories on here; quite a lot of great ones. But every so often an absolute top notch gem of a story comes along. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I laughed, cried, got turned on and didn't want it to end. Please write some more soon. J.A.C.
In days like we have now trouble just around the corner everythere your storie is a blessing for heart and soul ...... Thank you for your talent and sharing this
I love how you weave true love with all of life's challenges into a story of hope and redemption and I especially appreciate the display of Gods agape love through faithful followers of Jesus' words, who know that God is love, no exceptions.
There will always be negative feedback or nasty comments but in this case, unfounded
This is about real people, real life, real situations with all the ingredients to make you laugh, cry, angry and i fell in love with all the caracters cos i could relate.
Please keep this up and spoil us again, this was one of if not THE best stories ive readnin a long time.
Thank you.
as it was the first time.
I can't believe you're surprised by the positive response, JC McN! (I hope you're not still surprised!)
And just a little message for the spelling police: phlbbbt! If you're willing to knock off a star for that, then heaven bless you! You need it.
This is a briliant story and so well told.I really enjoyed it thanks for submitting it.
Do you have stock in a paper company? If not get some because your stories bring so many happy tears that I have to use a lot of paper towels. Thanks a lot. And Merry Christmas.
Thank you for sharing this lovely story. It was not what I came looking for, but your telling was so engaging and enjoyable I'm grateful I stumbled on it!
Thank you for a wonderful story. I needed extra handkerchiefs - just so heart-warming xxxxx
What a Great!! Story!! I can't tell how many times I cried, I do wish that ideally everyone's life can be like this!
Another story that would make an excellent movie. Loved every chapter of it
Read every chapter on the edge of my seat wanting more. Fabulous story sooo moving!!! Beautiful love story.