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Click here"Oh. You should do that."
"I will. But two things. First it's a secret and you can't tell Nanny Sarah about it. Second, I'm going to need your help.
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I was a nervous wreck. Sarah had definitely noticed something was up, but she hadn't said anything. And I was such a bad actress, several times running out of the room when my phone rang.
Finally it was the Saturday before Christmas and everything was ready. We drove up to Lauren and Rick's to drop of Heidi, just like a normal date night. We left my Escalade there and took an Uber into downtown to the Palomino, where our table was waiting.
The restaurant did little to calm my nerves, and I knew Sarah noticed, as she kept stifling giggles when she looked at me.
"Something's going on with you tonight." Sarah took a sip from her wine glass. "Wonder what it is?"
"Just excited for Christmas. Like every good girl." My hands fidgeted under the table.
"Uh-huh. Nothing special planned for me?" As she spoke she pulled her shoulders back slightly, emphasizing how her tight green turtleneck outlined her perfect breasts. The soft lighting made her auburn hair glow and emerald eyes sparkle, and for a moment I was lost.
I recovered, giving a passably innocent expression. "Whatever could you mean?"
Sarah chuckled and shook her head. "Darling, you are not a good liar. But it's okay. Just something I love about you."
From there Sarah mercifully let me steer the conversation away to calmer waters.
After a lovely meal I settled the bill while Sarah got our coats. This gave me a few precious seconds to ensure everything was in place.
I pulled my coat around me as we stepped out into the wintry air. It was chilly, but the lack of wind made it brisk without being biting. Very pleasant for a December evening.
"Darling, did you call the Uber?"
"Not yet. How 'bout a carriage ride first? We could take our time and see the lights." I nodded towards a horse and carriage stopped just off to our left. It was trimmed in blue and purple lights, while a man in an old-fashioned suit and top hat leaned against his dapple-grey partner.
Sarah grinned up at me and took my hand, and we walked towards it, but her face fell as we got close.
"Oh, it says it's reserved."
"So it does." I stepped up to the man, who met my gaze. "Are you waiting for Walker?"
"Yes Ma'am." He straightened smartly and opened the little half door, handing us inside.
Sarah's eyes were dancing. "You had this all planned out?"
"Maybe." In fact I'd given the carriage company detailed instructions as to not only the time and place but also the route to be taken.
Our driver climbed into position and with a gentle shake of the reins we were off. The little jolt at the start caused Sarah to fall back into me some, and I wrapped her in my arms. Her proximity was soothing, especially since my heart was beating a thousand miles a minute.
My anxiety lessened as we made the turn onto Meridian and headed north toward the circle. I glanced down at a text from Lauren while Sarah was looking at the lights. Everything was ready.
We trundled along, my heart beating faster and faster as we went. Sarah seemed oblivious, her eyes twinkling from the decorations along the way. My stare was locked on the right side of the road as we approached the circle, which was shining with Christmas cheer.
I found what I was looking for, giving a wave and receiving a thumbs-up in return. My co-conspirator hit a button on their phone and held up a sign."
I took a deep breath and nudged Sarah. Here goes nothing. "Hey, sweetie, look at that.
"Hmm?" Sarah shook herself out of her trance, following my pointing finger toward a sign about the size of a poster board. On it was a highly stylized representation of Sarah's name, in vibrant greens and reds. My love covered her mouth with her hand. "Oh, my." She looked back at me. "Darling, what did you do?"
I couldn't keep the smile off my face. "Keep watching." I pointed back at the sign.
Sarah turned back and the man holding the sign lowered it, revealing a bushy beard and broad shouldered physique. "Matthew!"
His big friendly grin shone back, but he just turned and motioned down the street. As Sarah looked up a woman stepped out with another sign. "The day I met you." Mindy and Benjamin waved next to their mother as we went past, and a stunned Auntie Sarah looked further down, where Lauren was holding another.
"My heart beat truly."
We continued around the circle. Megan was next. "For the very first time."
Rebecca held the next "I love you more."
Then Susie. "Every single day."
Rick's "I never want it to end."
We continued around the circle, tears were rolling down Sarah's cheeks. She leaned back into me and I kissed her gently on the temple.
Jonathan had the next. "I want it to last."
Then Michael and Sam. "For ever and ever."
We'd gone all around the circle, and drive crossed over to the middle, stopping in front of the granite stairs leading up to the central monument. He hopped out and opened the door, and I got out and helped my lady down.
One arm around her waist, the other holding her hand, I led her up the stairs to the landing at the top.
Everyone had crossed to the center, and they lined the stairs as we went up, where a final sign was unfolded. One side was held by Sarah's mother, and the other by a bouncing five-year-old with light, curly brown hair.
"Sarah, will you marry me?"
As she read the words I heard sobs break free, tears running freely from her eyes. My own began to roll down as she turned to me. To this day I'm not sure how I got the words out.
"From the first moment, a part of me knew. You're the one, Sarah, my one and only. You are my family, and I want to watch it grow with you. Only you. Marry me my love. Please."
I dropped to one knee and held out the ring. "Sarah Peters, will you marry me?"
Her voice was thick with emotion, but steady and strong as she answered. "Yes, oh, yes I will."
I slipped the ring on her finger and stood into her embrace. I was dimly aware of our family and friends cheering around us, along with a number of strangers. But it didn't matter. The woman in my arms was my whole world, her voice in my ear the only thing that mattered.
"I'm yours, Connie, yours forever, if you'll just be mine."
"I will. I am. Always. Always."
*****
TWENTY-FIVE YEARS LATER
I picked the photo up off the mantle, running my finger over the glass. Sarah beamed back at me from inside the frame, perfect and beautiful in her wedding dress. I remembered the day.
It was August, the exact day Sarah's two-year contract ended. We'd decided to replace it with a covenant. Some details were fuzzy, but I remember the doors to Agape Church's sanctuary opening, and Sarah began walking towards me. The Earth had stopped moving, and there was only her. I remembered holding her hand as the minister introduced Constance and Sarah Walker to the congregation. I'd told she didn't have to change from being a Peters, but she insisted, saying she wanted to share her daughter's last name.
A hand rested on my shoulder. "Hey, mom. Feeling nostalgic?"
"Do you remember it, Heidi?"
"Yeah, some. You both looked so beautiful. I couldn't wait for my own day."
"Oh, sweetheart, you were a beautiful bride, too." I looked over at Heidi's wedding picture, she and the young man next to her gazing radiantly into each other's eyes.
"Thanks, mom. But we have to get going, though."
"Yeah." I sighed, putting Sarah's picture back and gave myself a shake. "Is your brother ready?"
"I'll check." She went to the base of the stairs and hollered up. "Teddy! We've got to go!"
"Coming!" My son's quick step could be heard coming down the stairs. "I was talking to Tim. Hey buddy, I gotta get my shoes. Talk to mom."
He handed me the tablet, and my younger son's 3D image looked back. "Hi, mom."
"Hey sweetie, how's the tour going?"
"It's going great. Totally sold out. You got the tickets I sent for September, right?"
"Yes, thank you. Where are you now?"
"Portland, Oregon, then up to Seattle."
A petite blond waved from behind Tim's shoulder. "Hi, mom!"
"Hi, Annika! Keeping him in line?"
She put her hands on his shoulders and pecked him on the cheek. "Oh, yes, he is not a problem." Her crisp accent was kind, and Tim leaned back for a kiss. Tim had always been a kind, quiet boy. He reminded me most of Sarah. But he loved to perform. Both my boys did, really. Teddy had done it on a baseball field; Tim always preferred the stage.
I admit I'd wondered what Tim's preferences in a partner would end up being, and I worried about it a bit. Not as to him being gay, but what it would mean for him if he were. Sarah and I had faced a few things over the years. Luckily nothing we couldn't handle, but still.
During his second year at Julliard he'd called, asking if he could bring someone home for Thanksgiving. We waited with baited breath until he walked in with Annika, a tiny blonde Russian ballerina. The way he looked at her left nothing to doubt. The two of them were currently touring nationwide in a revival of South Pacific.
Heidi walked back into the room, putting in an earring. "Mark? Is Cole ready?"
"Yes, dear. Just waiting on you."
Cole toddled in with his father, looking very smart in a button down shirt and slacks. He'd inherited his mother's curly brown hair, but they kept it short on account of his preternatural ability to get sticky things in it.
""Where's Auntie Cece, grandma?"
"She's at the school already."
"Okay. Come on, let's go!"
I took a last look at the family portrait. Sarah and I, surrounded by our four children. It had been taken when Heidi had been a senior in high school, just before she'd gone off to culinary school. How'd it go by so fast?
I let my four-year-old grandson drag me out to his parents' minivan, and I climbed in the front seat. It was still cool so far in early June, but clear and bright.
We drove past the playground where Sarah and I always had taken the kids. So many memories there.
We'd started quickly. Sarah had wanted to carry my child, but I was insistent. She was already helping raise a daughter of mine. I wanted to do the same. So, an anonymous donor, and Teddy was born nine months later. We'd picked someone who favored me, right down to the eyes, and everyone thought he was my biological son. That was fine with me.
I let her have her way for our next. Matthew provided the seed, and me the egg, but Sarah still carried. I'd been right. She'd been born to be a mother.
It was about three years after Tim was born, and Sarah was starting to get that look in her eye, and I knew she wanted another.
In an act of providence, a week later our OB/GYN had called. A colleague of hers, a friend from med school, was involved in the first human same sex procreation trial. They were looking for committed lesbian couples that'd had success with IVF in the past. We flew to John's Hopkins for a consult, and were accepted into the trial.
They harvested from both of us, and after several attempts a viable embryo was produced, and the little warrior hung on to be our daughter Cecilia.
Luckily Sarah wasn't the first to give birth from the trial, that honor went to a couple in Florida, along with the media circus that went with it. All we got was a story on the nightly and a write-up in the paper. I didn't cry about that.
I do remember staring at her, ten perfect little fingers and toes. Sarah's and my daughter, in every way. I love all my children dearly, but that was special. And now she was graduating high school.
We arrived and piled out of the van and headed through the gathering crowd and into the stadium. Heidi put her arm around me.
"Last one of these."
"Yeah. Until that one grows up." I pointed at Cole, who was riding on his father's shoulders. "It goes so fast, sweetheart. Don't take it for granted."
"I know, mom. So where're we sitting?"
I looked around, my melancholy washing away as I saw the hand waving at me from down front.
"We're sitting down there." I pointed and headed down the stairs. I slid into the row and made my way to the middle.
"Hello, darling! You've no idea how hard I had to fight to keep these seats."
"You're my hero."
"I know." My wife tilted her chin up for her kiss, which I gladly provided, my insides fluttering as out lips touched. Our family sat around us, and Cole climbed into his Nana's lap.
Sarah put her arms around her grandson's middle as her green eyes looked into mine. "I think we did well, darling."
My hand slipped into hers. "Yeah. Time to celebrate."
"Mm-hm. That's why you're taking me to Europe in the fall." She grinned, her eyes glinting with mischief.
I laughed and shook my head. With all the ups and downs, it had been a wonderful life, but there was so much more coming. And I was going to get to share it with the love of my life.
THE END.
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Thank you for reading, rating and commenting on my stories. Writing for everyone here is such a joy. I know the sex in this story was more vanilla than my last, but it felt right for Connie and Sarah. The sex between any of my couples is organic, and often surprises even me. My next couple will be significantly different.
Just a note for anyone who doesn't know, there have been successful same sex reproduction trials in female rodents (Scientific American, Oct '18). It's definitely a pipe dream that it would be available to human parents so quickly, but let's keep praying.
- COMMENTS
A beautiful story. Truely amazing. And these aren’t tears, I just have something in my eyes!
Obviously, this is amazing and so so moving. Just as Connie can't believe how much deeper her love goes, you manage the same trick, making us feel that we can't cry more tears of joy until we do.
As moving as Connie and Sarah's journey is, I find the emotional journeys of the side characters just as touching. Maggie, obviously, with Heidi's easy, innocent acceptance a perfect juxtaposition to her initially bigoted, cynical stance. So glad she came round in the end to effectively mirror Heidi's view - my mother/daughter is happy, so nothing else matters. Also, Susie and Sam - thinking back to that first barbeque and contrasting that to their actions here. Neither had far to come, but the adjustments in their attitudes shows that it wasn't just Connie's life that was improved by Sarah: their love enhanced everyone's lives. As it has your readers.
Thank you.
A really great story! I loved it, certainly the best story I have ever read on Literotica, or possibly anywhere. Thank you so much for writing it!
Lovely, lovely job! I am an old contractor/fireman/sports loving straight Dude,,,,that was a beautiful, heart touching, sexy, story. Filled with courage, challenges and wonderfull intimacy. It touched this old romantic to the core. Awesome!
Thank you!
I have read it countless times, and I have loved it all of those times. I will likely read it again some time in the future.
Thank you again for the joy your stories have brought me over the years, and the efforts you have put forth in your rewrites has only enhanced the pleasure of reading them, again.
THANK YOU, The Swimnut
A wonderful story, warm and loving: one of my favourites.
Your comments on 'the vanilla sex' were not needed, I think it all fitted in perfectly with the characters and story.
This is a 3rd time reading this and it gets better all the time! I still cry at the end of the story.
FYI- made my wad into the house. I believe the word is WAY not wad (Chap 3 page 6)
My second time reading this from start to finish and I loved it as much as before. Great story, great characters and I was very moved by the whole thing. Thank you (again ) for writing this.
Loved it the second time as much as the first time. Still confused about the children though,something obviously didn't connect. My brain's problem, not yours. Lovely stories!
What an amazing story. It was the culmination of a life time of love. The only one little thing I would like to pick on is something that many authors do, that being the misuse of the word suckle. Suckling is a very specific act, that being the sucking of milk from the breast, and only that act. Everything else is sucking. Look it up.
Well written, good story. I found myself sped reading through the sex parts to get back to the main story. Imagine that? Usually the other way around. Made me cry a couple of times.
Thank you! Probably the best love story I've read on literotica and reduced this silly 68 year old CD to tears of love more than once! The sex wasn't vanilla but just the right amount of warm spiciness without the chili-like raw fire, your descriptions certainly aroused my libido and each time left me wanting more of C&S's love and life. By the end one truly knew these characters and was sad to part from them.
A truly beautiful story. I’ve never had so many tears from a love story. It surprised me. Such a gift you have given me. Thank you
Honestly, I don't think there are enough stars in the sky for your stories. I don't just read them, I live them.
I loved it it just was not about the lesbian sex it was about many things family love teasinf
It is some months since I last read this story. It is still enchanting and so well written . Thank you for taking the effort to do so.
When you find yourself skipping through the sex scenes to get on with the story, you know you've found a great one.
An amazing story. Thank you so much for sharing it. It had the perfect blend of drama, romance, and loving. Please keep up the great work!
Absolutely loved this beautiful love story. It has made me smile and brought tears to my eyes in equal measure.
Can’t stop my happy tears. This is the most beautiful story I’ve ever read on Literotica. My absolute favourite, which I’ve read so many times. JC, please make another story like this!
I laughed when they laughed, cried when they cried... and felt the depth of love and sensuality captered. Very well written and quite captivating!!
Thank you! I'll be back to read again!
You tell such wonderful love stories. I have loved love stories since puberty. Thank you for sharing your stories with us. Many many thanks. You brought back many wonderful memories of my beloved wife. Thanks for the wonderful memories.
Lingerienut
A truely touching well written story. Beautiful characters with beautiful love.
A story for the ages. This was my second reading and I enjoyed it even more the second time around, picking up details I had missed on my first read. The descriptions of the emotions, especially Connie, Sarah and Maggie, are remarkable. They must come from deep personal experience. Thank you for writing this story. It would make a wonderful mini-series on TV.
A story of hope that that resonates with Connie’s father’s advice about love and the work to love with the hope of enduring love. Thank you for sharing that resonating wisdom throughout this story.
Stunningly, beautifully written. Thankyou JC for such a wonderful and moving story, I shall never forget it.
I came across this series again after a year or two and it was as captivating as ever. Very nice work!!
There are a handful of authors whose stories I re read every so often. You are definitely on the list if not at the head of it, and this is the story almost guaranteed to bring tears. Every. Time.
5⭐s is not nearly enough.
I lovec your thorough detailed writing.
You made it sound so extremely realistic, it could well be the couple next door.
Truly amazing!
It was one of the best if not the best stories written well done, it had everything in great detail without being boring
A beautiful story. Been a long time since I cried this much. A good heart warming story about love. <3
Your ability to write a story and make the characters real is phenomenal. I'm treating myself to rereading all your works and as always they make me laugh and cry and just feel good. Thank you I wish I could rate your work at an appropriate level which is well above 5 stars. BardnotBard
I loved this story!!! I kept getting teary eyed at the prospects of Connie and Sarah. Loved all 3 chapters.
I'm a guy and I loved this story sooo much. I had to say something...
This story was one of the best i have ever read.it made me laugh,made me cry and made me smile.kudos to you on a job well done.
Loved it! It is beautifully written. To be honest, I sort of what happens on their journey towards old age… is that a parhetic wish?
I have read every one of your stories start to finish at least three times and discovered something new each time I read them. Well done and I cannot wait to see what you come up with next.
😊 hi thanks again i really liked the happy ever after best wishes
a fan shayne 🎈🎈🎈🎈
This was the perfect balance of sex, love & emotion. Thank you for sharing this !
This was one of the best sam sex stories I've read. Choked me up a few times
Satisfying conclusion!
Great in every way!
Thanks for this endearing story of mutual love!
Thank you for a truly wonderful story! So real, the fear early on, the building realization of how much they love each other, the family dramas!
This story is so, so good!
Your writing is a delight to read!
Please keep submitting your tales!
Definitely one of the best authors on the site!
Thank you again!
Nanny Sarah is the best thing I’ve read on Literotica. It was so enthralling, and I would’ve kept reading whether or not it had any sex parts. I was emotionally invested in Sarah and Connie becoming a family with Heidi. You did a great with Maggie and how she eventually came to not only accept their relationship, but finally coming around to loving how great they were together. I’d rate it 10 stars if that was possible. Great job!
Wonderful, wonderful story as always! It really says a lot about your writing when I am skipping over the sex parts because I am too engrossed in the story!
I stumbled across this story by accident. I AM SO HAPPY I DID! Boy, what an absolutely amazing and beautifully written tale. You made me feel the entire emotions as though I was there.
This really is an amazing, wonderfully written tale. The way you portrayed Heidi, Sarah and Connie was so beautiful and real that I couldn't get enough of. I actually cried reading this. So touching, such beautiful writing. You are truly an amazing author and I am going to read your other stories next.
Thank you, JCMcNeilly for this. I adored it very much. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Really loved the story, your writing and the way it all came together. You are able to capture, portray and share such feelings its wonderful. Loved it.
Another great story! You just keep knockin em outta the park! It’s funny, when I first found this site, l was in to it just for the eroticism. Knowing that the stories wouldn’t necessarily be well written by any means. They were just stories about people having sex, and I’ve read a lot of those stories here. Your stories are on a whole different level, they’re well written love stories with explicit sex scenes. Now I’m reading the stories for the context and basically scrolling past a lot of the sex parts. You know how to bring the characters to life and make them relatable to the reader. I’m glad I found your story page, I’ve really enjoyed your stories so far. Thank you
Absolutely loved the whole story. Brilliantly written and well put together in every context. Didn't want it to finish but I'm so glad you put together the ending and what happened later in life. Thank you.
I know a lesbian married couple. Pa generation younger than us. Somehow they navigated that coming out with their parents, combining the moral courage to come out with the emotional maturity to stay engaged with those they love. I especially love the way Connie and Sarah combine those character attributes in this story. Makes me want to be like them when I grow up.
As you will see if you examine the comment on your other stories, I am re-reading your entire catalogue. Now of course I wouldn't be doing that if I weren't delighted with your stories. I don't know what else I can say, except, I hope you are continuing to write and will delight us with others in the future. Thank you so much for the time and effort put into these stories, we all benefit from reading them.
Loved your story, read from start to finish, born in ‘59 and I am a G.O.B Grumpy Old Barst**d. My only regret was that I didn’t have the opportunity to read this in my early twenties.
I shared my admiration of your writing already in part two… what to say more…one of my all time favourite 😊 this is worth all the stars it can get and much more… ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
It's a beautiful story and I wouldn't change it for the world.
Keep writing!!!
That was amazing, heart warming story. So real feeling it was like the story you had lived. Thank you for such a wonderful story of love.
I am intrigued by the amount of work that goes into creating dialogue in writing. It must be fun and also laborious.
Would it be a challenge to write about a lesbian who falls for a straight male? Sort of the other side of the coin in terms of bigotry?
Regards,
Lass Lover
One of the best stories I have read! You had a poor old man with tears in his eyes loving the whole story. Please write more.
After all the times I've read this, why tonight did I connect the dots of Heidi going off to culinary school to mini-Heidi emulating cooking with Sarah in part 1? Just something new to enjoy, I guess....
My eyes have started to leak, I just can't think why.......
Beautiful story, thanks for sharing it !
Rapier
A lovely 'lump in the throat' story with an almost-cliffhanger of an ending (is she still alive?). I loved it. My only criticism is that this third part was perhaps a bit too long.
Oh! You were very naughty ...... as i read the 25 years later my heart fell because i thought Sarah had already died. So relieved to be wrong.
A lovely romantic story, as are all your works. Each story makes me smile and feel so good. Life needs goodness in it, there is more than enough difficulty and sadness out there, and you with your writing bring some happiness.
You should feel proud of your skill and of your good heart. I dont believe anyone could write such lovely stories unless they too are a lovely and happy person.
I loved this story. I love all your stories. Can't wait for the latest one to come out.
You are very talented and you write with love in your heart. It shows.
Great story!
Wonderful! and once again, an emotional roller-coaster. Sorry that the site does not allow one to vote again, you can change the vote, but not add stars when you have already awarded five, but I would very much have liked to!
On a side note: I was a bit surprised to read about a wedding rehearsal. I´m almost seventy now and with all the weddings that I have seen and been to, the idea of a rehearsal was new to me. But I suppose it´s a good reason to prolong the party.
Wow. So good. That proposal scene had me (a guy) in tears. You can write about the nerves of falling in love so well. And the sex was not so vanilla, edpecially in the context of the story.
A Girl Named Mitch is still your best work, but the distance between all your works is minimal. I look forward to more
second reading and i enjoyed it just as much as the first time, it would be a good story even without the sex scenes. never thought i would be into romance stories though
Your story of Connie and Sarah was heartwarming. Keep up the good work. True love is beautiful.
Timothy
JC, this is a wonderful story, I love the depth of character and the prejudice encountered but also the acceptance of the gay relationships. I have several gay friends and relatives and I love them all.
Thank you for a truely uplifting and beautiful story.
Chris.
Damn what a brilliant storey. hit the bull's eye, not a crying man but I was so happy it all worked out perfectly especially with the way the world is today. I will now read another of your stories and compare.
Another great story! You build good characters that give life to your writing! A great read!
Little different in the “Twenty Five Years Later” part you wrote it like we were to find that Nanny Sarah had died then to find out she was just holding seats. That and the fact that we were never treated to the moment where Heidi switched from calling her Nanny Sarah to mom or something more appropriate I’m starting to think Maggie was right, especially after she pointed out her incredible daughter was somewhat inferior to one Constance Walker. To me you ruined a great story, the two ladies are not equals.
Fifth time reading their story. Actually I’ve been re-reading all your stories since I finished Unrequited Love. You are definitely one of my most favorite authors here, and Nanny Sarah is easily in my top 3. Even though they have their struggles, overall it’s such a heartwarming love story. I’ll be reading it again
Beautiful story, thank you for sharing it. As good as Connie and Sarah's courtship was, I'm left wanting to know so much more about their married life and their extended family.
I love your writing, the conjuring of emotions you invoke make me wonder if there will be a happy ending. Fortunately you always come up trumps.
Agree, not enough stars to give! The love and tenderness of the “loving couple” described, is emotionally motivating, thank you for a fantastic story.
Where to start…truly amazing and hyper romantic story, with so much conviction and vibrant details about the main characters. Your elaborations around the characters emotions, joy, love and insecurities are just out of this world. Your story plot along with your incredible talent for story telling brings this story from part one through part 3, alive and unlocked a well of tears and emotions whilst reading. Thank you Thank you Thank you… not enough stars to give
Kind regards
Ri4f
I'm crying while writing this. I loved this story so much, thank you for writing it. <3
My word. What a truly wonderful and amazing story, JCMcNeilly! Simply beautiful! We would like more of this tale please. Well written and very good character development. Congratulations on writing and sharing this. Love it immensely. ❤️❤️❤️😘 5🌟☺️
Are you going to write anymore about connie and Sarah it’s a wonderful story
an amazing romance. I couldn't stop reading it.it's amazing how you can build a story that continues to capture one,If I could I would give at least 10 stars,thank you very very much
Read it Again today. Cried through parts AGAIN today. It is the most romantic piece I have ever read on Literotica. Thank you so much!
I have read this story before, and would like to add that this is one of the best love stories I have ever read. Thank you so much.
My favotite of all. I read it at lesst once every month. So very romantic. I love it. Keep it up, please!
Excellent writing. Could not stop reading had to get to the next part immediately. My eyes teared up so many times with so many emotional moments.
God, what an amazing romance. I couldn't stop reading it. This is one of those stories, that I wish was a full blown book. The epilogue was great, it did give us the after effects, but it you ever decide to continue this, I can see a ton of new chapters. Thank you for this beautiful story
I was captivated from the very first paragraph. With each page I felt more and more invested in this story. Every time I put my device down I couldn’t wait to pick it back up. Thank you for doing a phenomenal job of celebrating love. The bonus is I even learned a thing or two about being a better partner.
I have read this series seven times now and still love it. Please write more.
We haven’t seen anything from you this year. And writing as good as this deserves to continue. I also recommend publishing for wider audiences, but if you do, please update your profile here to say where else you’re publishing so we can follow you there, too.
Dear god...blubbering like a baby over a story on an online erotica site. This has to be one of the most heart-felt, loving, beautiful stories I've ever read. If this author isn't writing professionally I'm going to be very disappointed. The characters, their interactions, the emotions...wonderfully crafted and expressed.
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Heck, if Hallmark aired movies like this I would be an avid, eager viewer instead of the reluctant captive I normally am when the wife ropes me into them. Easiest 5 stars I've ever given.
This was fricking amazing! I just read all 3 parts its such a beautiful story it should be made into a short novel. I do wonder, in thr 25 years later part was maggie still alive to and got to meet her great grandchildren?
AWESOME story!!!! One of my favorites!!!! I definitely need to read your other works. This was soooo well done!!!!! Thank you!!!!
Reading this beautiful story again is always a joy. Thanks for writing such wonderful love stories. I reread them all but this is probably my favourite.
There are few authors who can make me cry and laugh out loud. You have joined this select list!
Thank you for a wonderful story. This story could easily be in the romance category, Very well done 5*
I’m sorry I just can’t read your stories a second time, they leave me so emotionally drained. Read The Tennis Star first, which I loved, now this wonderful love story. If the stories get better each time I’m going to be an absolute wreck by the end!
This is the seventh time I have read this series. Don't know how you do it but please keep writing.
I've reread all your stories recently, and one of the things that I was impressed by this time was the fact that the sex is different in each.
That was a beautiful story about the truth in love! Thanks for the pull on my heart!
I admit that while reading this story for the first time I felt some trepidation with each passing page, expecting some crushing conflict to tear them apart like so many stories on this site seem to rely on. I dont know if I could have handled anything causing a breakup or lessen the love the two main characters had for each other.
Luckily, the author chose to keep their love strong with only the mothers struggles of acceptance for them to weather.
A beautiful, touching story that I have read through twice now. My compliments to the author. Well done.
I don't know why I keep re-reading these stories, unless it's to wash out my eyes. The tears are happy tears, so thank you.
This is the best love story I,ve read. It had everything a good yarn should have fm the two girls meeting at the job interview & the slow cooker relationship that blossomed daily. Connie,s love for Heidi is a lesson for all Parents! It is just a beautiful relationship between Connie & Sarah & the whole time each was madly in live with the other. I liked the way Sarah's family supported her when she told them & I understand Maggie not accepting them as a couple, initially. I adore their love & their love making, Heidi asking why nanny Sarah was sleeping in her mums bed! Just a wonderful lesbian story! Look forward to another chapter.
Outstanding writing! Overtones of sex but without dwelling on it. I'm from the Grand Rapids, MI area (Rockford) and familiar with Calvin College et al! Let's see more stoories!
You brought an old man to tears.
You got me/have me completely connected to Connie, Sarah and Heidi WOW what a love story you created!!! You scared the hell out of me I'm sure by design the way you started PT3 it lead me to believe Sarah had died.
PLEASE!!! continue their love story and maybe add in some highlight of the past 25years maybe as thoughts as they are on their European trip as they continue to love each other.
Thank You for writing this story!
Doug
PS: Looking forward to reading your other stories
PSS: Also you mention in your Bio "‘Nanny Sarah’. Part four is up! Somehow the Ch04 got left off the title " but I don't see it?
The perfect end to the perfect story. Thank you so much. My eyes filled with joyful tears so many times.
So glad I reread this I had nearly forgotten how incredibly beautiful it was. Love all of your work. If the goddess was kinder all stories would warm the soul like yours.
I love all your stories but I think this is my favorite. In spite of all the grammar mistakes and missing words.
Loved this story, brought out the tears , heartwarming,,, love stories dosen't need the D/s theme running through them to make them great reading ( but I do like it 😊)..
Just absolutely beautiful, a mesmerizing and wonderful story, thanks for sharing the story and your talent, I truly enjoy your work!
Great story arc, good characters, writing and vocab were also pretty much on point. I thoroughly enjoyed it! As to the Anon naysayer, strangely enough, all sorts of people do fall in love, and sometimes readers on Lit enjoy reading a happy uplifting story about those people and their journey to happiness, sometimes when you’re wading through life’s sewage it’s good to remind yourself that there is happiness out there, tbh I’m not sure how anyone can complain after reading three separate episodes of the story, if you didn’t like it, stop and go find something else to read.
I don't know why everybody is slobbing all over this. It's melodramatic rubbish.
Wow…that was just…wow…what a journey. 5 stars as usual, can’t wait for your next one. ❤️
"That's just your mommy and I loving each other. You shouldn't listen, because it's private time, but if you do hear it just know that it means your mommy and I are making each other very happy, and love each other very much."
There is just an incredible amount of wisdom and insight in those two marvelous sentences. In the very best sense, this is a feel-good story that is so much more than "just" a feel-good story. Your ability to develop characters and wrap and enshrine them in words is breathtaking. Thank you for guiding us through this journey in this story and all your others as well.
Another love story and another ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️. I got to know Connie's personality very quickly. I lived through those anxieties myself. She was lucky to find her one and only so soon. Thanks for sharing.
Absolutely perfect. This story contained every element needed. Perfect presentation of all characters
Great timing. The sex was soft and sensual. This stories brought tears to my eyes more than once. Not to mention my own excitement
Fabulous. Expertly written, the pace and timing was perfect. Emotions of all characters where depicted so cleanly that feelings described I could feel! The emotion during intimate scenes focused physical intensity so much that any more than the "vanilla" (authors term never mind) could have went too far. While I enjoy the writing on this site for typical physical reasons. This story is one of maybe 3 that draw a committed, must finish, response. A true attachment, love, for the characters. BTW the other 2 aren't even close! Great work. I am hoping your well rewarded for your skilled artistry.
Exquisitely, almost painfully, adorable. I think this story gave me diabetes and I love it.
I have read this story four times now, and I don't think it will ever grow old for me. There us nothing like love that is whole and beautiful to make me believe that it can happen for me, too. I sometimes lose hope; that is why I read it over and over again. It renews me. Thank you for writing it.
Lovely story. My only issue is Connie’s apparent lack of awareness of her lesbianism and her sudden surprise at seeing Sarah at the door. By age thirty one, most individuals have a true sense of their sexual orientation.
I enjoyed the romantic side of the story together with the not quite knowing what was going to happen right until the event. The story was well composed and held the readers attention. It would be nice to have the missing 25 years filled in just to justify the ending. Beautiful story and beautifully told, loved it, Thanks. Even though it is fiction it still renews one's faith in human nature. Keep up the great work!
I have loved all three installments of this beautiful story! I have also enjoyed the careful editing that has been done. That leads to my one nit to pick: when Connie peeled the panties off Sarah, you slipped in the homophone, “pealed.” Pardon the poor pun, but that rang a bit jarrinly for me.
Nevertheless, I truly loved and teared at times over your tale.
The romance and love of these people in your story so makes my heart warm. . . And my eyes leak. Thank you for both. Thank you for a beautiful story.
I will have to sing your praises a little later. My heart and eyes are too full to attempt it at the moment. But I must, must at least thank you right now after finishing this valuable and uplifting story.
For some reason, this story makes me think of just three words: Amazing. Beautiful. Perfect. Even better on the second reading. Thank you for sharing it with us.
I thought there was going to be a final bit of drama but thank goodness I was wrong. A wonderful love story throughout. 5 stars.
Captivating love story with characters that come to life — I felt like I was part of their story. Have read 3 times now, and revision or not, beautifully romantic. Thank you — so creative.
I just finished reading the series for a third time. I look forward to reading more of your writing. 👍✌👌
I'm 81 and echo everything Anonymous said 17 days ago,
Wonderful story, well written and 5* all the way
Outstanding! Love your style and the character development makes it so easy to sink into your stories! This is at least the second time I have read it. Tears flowed again…please keep writing!
I always love your writing and this is my favourite story. I reread it often.
The whole of the Nanny Sarah stories were very well thought out and written with such passion and clarity.
Sad to see this beautiful series end. There was so much more I'd love to read about these two characters.
Hi.. Now I'm a straight guy, nearly 70 and married 40 years this September. I thought your story was exquisite, full of love and truly heart warming. And I shed a tear or two reading it. You have a gift, a way with words and a wonderful way of setting scenes. Thank you for your efforts. PS: I'm sending this from Britain, not that that matters.
Stay well, keep safe.
Hi, Rhetor again.
The "plain vanilla" was entirely appropriate. This was a romance, really, more than it was erotica, and so two people just saying "I love you" over and over while having affectionate sex was exactly what it needed.
This is a beautiful, beautiful story, and I choked up several times. I honestly wanted to scream during the first 2/3 of the last scene, because for all the world you were making it look as if Sarah had *died* sometime in the intervening 25 years, and I couldn't stand it. That was unfair. (I'm rhetor, by the way. For some reason the system isn't letting me log on now.)
Lovely story. Really pulled on the heartstrings. Thank you for the "...and they lived happily ever after" ending. I live for stories like this one.
Wonderful story and beautifully written. A few times, I had tears in my eyes. Thank you!!!!
Loved it. So heartfelt. Nearly died at the ending lol but such a warm and loving story.
Such an incredible, wonderful story. Loved every sentence of it.
We through many tissues, but feel so full of hope.
Thank you so much for sharing,
Very good, Thanksgiving with the football game on tv. Packers and the Lions, same every year.
One of the best stories I have read here, just loved the suspense, love and righting style. Thank you!
finished this for the second time! you amaze me with your beautiful words I am definitely not in tears ;-;
... the number of times I teared-up reading these three chapters. I wish everyone’s real-life stories worked out so well. Thank you! ❤️❤️❤️
While all JCMcNeilly's stories are excellent, the Nanny Sarah series is head an shoulders above the rest
God, that little bit near the end had my heart going a bit and then I immediately calmed down after reading the last few paragraphs :P Definitely looking forward to reading anything you post in the future :)
Thank you for such a wonderful poetry ..... Hopefully love can win such Drama more often ...... Love is not to judge is just for life ..... Fabulous writing
bravo nice story telling wonderful characters loved it thank you
You absolutely write the best stories! I just love the characters and how they develop. You have such a talent, I can officially say you are my favorite writer!
Your artistry has done it again. I've been enchanted by your storytelling and stayed up verrrry late reading your romantic and sexy story/series.
Once again, thank you for sharing your gifts.
Read every chapter on the edge of my seat wanting more. Fabulous story sooo moving!!! Beautiful love story.
Another story that would make an excellent movie. Loved every chapter of it
What a Great!! Story!! I can't tell how many times I cried, I do wish that ideally everyone's life can be like this!
Thank you for a wonderful story. I needed extra handkerchiefs - just so heart-warming xxxxx
Thank you for sharing this lovely story. It was not what I came looking for, but your telling was so engaging and enjoyable I'm grateful I stumbled on it!
Do you have stock in a paper company? If not get some because your stories bring so many happy tears that I have to use a lot of paper towels. Thanks a lot. And Merry Christmas.
This is a briliant story and so well told.I really enjoyed it thanks for submitting it.
as it was the first time.
I can't believe you're surprised by the positive response, JC McN! (I hope you're not still surprised!)
And just a little message for the spelling police: phlbbbt! If you're willing to knock off a star for that, then heaven bless you! You need it.
There will always be negative feedback or nasty comments but in this case, unfounded
This is about real people, real life, real situations with all the ingredients to make you laugh, cry, angry and i fell in love with all the caracters cos i could relate.
Please keep this up and spoil us again, this was one of if not THE best stories ive readnin a long time.
Thank you.
I love how you weave true love with all of life's challenges into a story of hope and redemption and I especially appreciate the display of Gods agape love through faithful followers of Jesus' words, who know that God is love, no exceptions.
In days like we have now trouble just around the corner everythere your storie is a blessing for heart and soul ...... Thank you for your talent and sharing this
I find an absolute gem of a story on this site. There are many good stories on here; quite a lot of great ones. But every so often an absolute top notch gem of a story comes along. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I laughed, cried, got turned on and didn't want it to end. Please write some more soon. J.A.C.
Wonderful story - nicely paced and written. Exploring many issues and answering with good values - love and kindness. Especially loved your last few paragraphs, they rounded out the story well and gave a sense of closure - we know what happened and it worked.
You are truly gifted, thank you for sharing this with the world. This story was beautiful and moving. Again thank you for sharing a part of your heart with us because that's what writing should be.
Congrats you are the first literotica writer to make me cry ;-) that means you captured me i your story. Fantastic work, thank you ;-)
Nothing new as in my comments have been made by others. This was not a good story. No, it was a GREAT story. Very moving, very touching. Fell in love w the characters. Maybe spotted a few typos but hey, 3 chapters each like 7 Lit pages, that's a lot of text. Never interfered with my reading. Thought the slow melting of Maggie was great and how your used the little girl to get her to realize her mistake was brilliant. Like many others I tended to skip the sex scenes just to get back to the story, though that one where Maggie was in the next room and Connie had to stay quiet was HOT.
I also would have liked to have a scene about their wedding. Like others have mentioned I feared the worst at the end. Cancer or a car accident I thought was coming. Really glad it ended well.
J
As others have commented, too many errors. Proofing needed.
The last half of chapter two and all of chapter three started to drag. I believe that with clean editing and a rewrite, a nicer, shorter story overall would have resulted.
Still a damn sight better than anything I could produce.
I am so sorry those things happened to you. If you’ve read my story The Tennis Star, you know that I am not insensitive to these issues. My next story will deal with this more firmly. The purpose of that scene was to show both Connie and, more significantly, Maggie, that not every person of faith is like that. They aren’t, although I know many are, and they are louder and scarier than those who support people like us. It is so easy for us to let our experience shape our world view to the point where we refuse to believe people can be different and better than we’ve experienced. But we can’t stop believing they can. We can, as people, be better than we are, be it homophobia or racism or sexism or the myriad other ways we judge each other. I have to believe that. I don’t know that we will, but we have to try. In my little little worlds I create, people need to be able to change, to grow. If they can’t, if we can’t, what’s the point of living?
JC
Nice story. Good to see tribbing making it too.
Not so impressed to see a story about lesbians involving religion. In a world where, in many countries, to be gay is in one way or another a death sentence due to bigoted views imposed by those insisting that their word is the word of their god, it is a little galling.
Maybe your experience with organised religion was good, but for others it will have been terrible. Take mine as an example.
My own grandmother was disgusted that I refused to be involved with her church as a young teenager, and I became an afterthought at family gatherings or just left out altogether, but when I came out she loudly demanded that I be confined in an institution and forcibly given corrective surgery if necessary, that my parents cut all ties with me until I saw the light, that sort of thing.
After a few months of being on my own, not quite 18 years old, I made the mistake of talking to a priest in the town where I had just started university who decided I needed an 'intervention', and he would have got away with it had he not brought five very suspicious looking men with him into a female halls of residence! The police became involved, a potential charge of the aggressive kidnapping of a minor dropped and he was let off with a few words of advice while I was warned to moderate my behaviour to not cause offence to 'right minded', god-fearing people.
These days I am still ignored by my father and siblings but have contact with some cousins who also rejected the church. Among my extended friend group today is a former vicar and an Italian ex nun, both gay and both hounded out of those professions for that reason (both are now social workers, amongst other things helping those who find themselves confused about their sexuality).
And still homosexuals are terrorised by religious maniacs, even in the apparently civilised west.
Lexi
A beautiful story. I'm straight (bi curious and I love love, and this story you shared. Im crying happy tears as I write. You give me hope after many years 7+ of being single of love finding me again.....as unexpectedly. Thank you or sharing this beautiful story with us all.