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Click here"Fuck!" He groaned, leaning back as he finished eating, feeling her deepthroat his cock until it exploded with cum, and he felt her stroking him off as her lips wrapped around the head of his dick, sucking and swallowing every last drop.
"Did you like that, sir?" She asked, and Paul pushed back his chair, looking down at her, naked, her apron torn off as she rubbed and squeezed her tits.
"Yes, that was perfect," he said, standing up.
He walked off to the bathroom to clean up, and when he returned, Valerie was waiting for him on her knees, smiling at him.
"Sir-" she whimpered, biting her lip and turning away.
"Yes?" He asked, and she looked up at him, her eyes watering.
"I'm so sorry about earlier, about today, I won't ever act like that around you again, I promise, sir! I'm yours now, I belong to you," she swore, and Paul smiled.
"What about your husband?" He asked, and she smiled.
"What Roger doesn't know won't hurt him," she giggled, crawling towards him. "Will you, um, will you spend the night with me?"
Paul sighed, realizing his parents would need an excuse if he were to spend the night out, and he'd already made plans to meet up with a couple friends.
"Not tonight, pet, but tomorrow night I will, understand?" He asked, and though looking a little dejected, Valerie smiled and nodded.
"Yes sir!" She bounced.
"I've got to go, but I'll be back tomorrow, at noon, got it? I want you to leave your door unlocked and be ready for me, ok?"
"Yes! Sounds perfect! Thank you sir!" She smiled, and Paul walked up to her, kneeling down and kissing her.
She wrapped her arms around him, shoving her tongue inside his mouth, clinging to him and kissing him voraciously before he pried her off, pushing her down to the floor as she looked up at him with big, doe eyes, watching him walk out the door.
- COMMENTS
I loved it.
The story flowed well and stayed consistent and sexy. It made me hard reading how Valerie was forced to submit to Paul’s will and obey him as a good slut/ slave should.
I think she will enjoy being owned by Paul.
Excellent. I pictured Valerie As my high school friends red headed mom. She had fantastic boobs. That I still remember vividly. ( iam 60 now ). Oh how I would have to own her like this
Sexy, well told story. Love the colourful tongue in cheek characters DDD tits & 13 inch chop.....noice fantasy food! And to the commenters moaning about this, it's erotoc fantasy so I suppose you'd enjoy heavily acned far bitch with a flat ass & chest to much more... Fuck off, go read war & peace if you want realistic drama... Clearly you're on the wrong website.... Thanks to good author for letting us enjoy the fruits of his time and hard work FOR FREE! Merrijacob yr a star bud keep em cummin! 5/5
Just tell a story, like you would in normal conversation. Suspension of disbelief is a real thing.
Learn how to boil a frog.
The cruelty shown by Paul toward Valerie was hideous and unnecessary. The 14 inch dick was comical or stupid. Take your pick. The idea that a virgin boy would not cum on his first stroke into such a beautiful woman was laughable. It would be so much better to have Paul be normal in behavior with a realistic huge dick of 8 inches, and be a clumsy lover at first; who learns to be a great lover via several sessions with Valerie.
Foot long cock, decent looking guy, but he's a virgin, massive tits (OK I'll allow this since she is a trophy wife). Yeah, talk about ridiculous. Even the cock size alone is just stupid. And he says "I'm not that big". Oh come on, no one is that fucking stupid or naïve.
Could have done without the suggestion he was going to pimp her out at some point (why waste her on random morons) and why didn't he cum in her? What guy losing his virginity wouldn't cum in a hot babe? So many little things wrong with this story. Aside from those minor things, the plot itself is decent and has potential especially if he develops feelings for her since she seems to be into him, although that could just be her finally getting the fulfilment she has sought after for so long.
Unlike some comments I thought it was an amazing story, really well written. Can't wait to read the rest. Fantastic job !!!
Forceful is one thing, mindless arrogant violence is just an evil heart at work. Beyond that, the writing is mostly just kind of over the top and long-winded...
Ffs the husbands dick sounds better than some of these comments 🙄😂 I loved it, you've quickly become one of my favorite authors. Most stories I find are full of spelling issues or constant name mixups, some errors don't bug me but the constant ones... Very well written, yeah may not be truly realistic but what's wrong with some fantasy? For an erotic website this community can be so freaking judgy and depressing, go get laid or at least a removable showerhead. Hope to see more stories in the future
Seems a little OTT at the moment and a scenario unlikely to happen but still a well written erotic story.
It was... okay for the genre. The "nerd with the giant dick who magically is great at sex" is an overused trope, as is the clumsy blackmail (seriously, why do these women never call the police? It's just idiocy). Despite that and the unnecessary level of violence, the story wasn't poorly written, just a bit boring.
Jumped to the end after the first page. This is filthy, tasteless writing. Using violence on the girl, shoving his big cock in her mouth.... I wonder whether it can get any lower. It's mandatory to give at least one star, else I would have given zero. I will never again read any of your stories. Absolutely tasteless.
How'd he get such a sadistic streak at such a young age? Makes him as unpleasant as her husband as she's trying to please him....
As might be guessed at by my user name, I am mostly interested in stories of female dominance over males. The problem is there are so very few fem dom male sub stories that I think are good. Most seem to be some variation of; how miserable can we make the sub, and that's about it. Therefore, out of desperation, I sometimes look at other types of stories. I'm really glad I looked at this one. If you could switch Paul and Valerie's roles, this would be my idea of an almost perfect femdom story. Due to the author's skill in writing, however, I don't even care that it is male dom. I was hooked from the very beginning. It is true that Paul is quite harsh with Valerie, and has no problem with punishing her for even the smallest of missteps, but he is also kind and gentle when she pleases him. He has slapped her, spanked her, whipped her and pinched her nipples and been quite abusive verbally. He has also praised and complimented her, kissed her, held and stroked her and allowed her several orgasms. Exactly how a dominant should treat their slave. I have to agree with other commenters that a 13 to 14 inch cock and triple D cups are a little over the top and took me a little out of the story, but this is the only misstep the author has made. Some of the commenters have noted that it is a bit over the top that Paul, who is a virgin and has barely done anything with a girl, could jump in and handle Valerie this masterfully. (Pun intended.) I would agree, except for one thing. Paul has, in effect, read her diary. He knows about her porn habit and which kind of porn turns her on. He knows about her background and how lonely and starved for attention she is. He knows about her needs and fantasies, sexual and otherwise. He has, in effect, Valerie's owners manual which tells him everything he needs to get to her. Now, think about that concept for a minute. What if you had a girl's owners manual? What if you knew everything about her, her hopes and dreams, her fears, her sexual needs, wouldn't it give you the confidence to deal with her boldly as Paul has done. But Paul has more. He knows about her affair and this gives him power over her to enforce his will even if what she has written is relly just fantasies and she doesn't actually want it to happen. Even if things do not work out the way he wants them to, Paul has the leverage to insure that Valerie will say nothing to anyone else. No. Under the circumstances laid out in this story, I have very little trouble believing that, even as inexperienced as he is, Paup could pull this off. I can't wait to see what happens in part 2. 5 stars!
Bit of a wank story but well written with very good character descriptions and great sex, but as I said bit of just a wank for boy’s read.
So many anonymous critics. If you feel the need to hide behind the anonymous name then keep your mouths shut.
Its a good start, not perfect but good. Paul has amazing control for a virgin, but hey its fiction. Look forward to part two next!
I liked the story. There is something realy deep exciting when I gave up ALL control to a few my Lovers I learned was Doms and Masters. They just knew how to handle me and keep me right. Even when they punished me I knew what they was going to do to me after was going to be ok. And it got to a point where there wasnt nothing I wouldnt or didnt do for my Mens like them even if it was like her and letthing them Show me off to other Mens or letting them touch on me or Sharing me at times with other Mens or Doms.
Coming from a boy who hasn't got any real experience with women....kindof untrue.
so very non-consent - ok we got the idea she did not want to do it but you emphasize that part of the story so much sounds like he hates women. Well the reader does not hate women - so just spoils the whole story.