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Click here"Fuck!" He groaned, leaning back as he finished eating, feeling her deepthroat his cock until it exploded with cum, and he felt her stroking him off as her lips wrapped around the head of his dick, sucking and swallowing every last drop.
"Did you like that, sir?" She asked, and Paul pushed back his chair, looking down at her, naked, her apron torn off as she rubbed and squeezed her tits.
"Yes, that was perfect," he said, standing up.
He walked off to the bathroom to clean up, and when he returned, Valerie was waiting for him on her knees, smiling at him.
"Sir-" she whimpered, biting her lip and turning away.
"Yes?" He asked, and she looked up at him, her eyes watering.
"I'm so sorry about earlier, about today, I won't ever act like that around you again, I promise, sir! I'm yours now, I belong to you," she swore, and Paul smiled.
"What about your husband?" He asked, and she smiled.
"What Roger doesn't know won't hurt him," she giggled, crawling towards him. "Will you, um, will you spend the night with me?"
Paul sighed, realizing his parents would need an excuse if he were to spend the night out, and he'd already made plans to meet up with a couple friends.
"Not tonight, pet, but tomorrow night I will, understand?" He asked, and though looking a little dejected, Valerie smiled and nodded.
"Yes sir!" She bounced.
"I've got to go, but I'll be back tomorrow, at noon, got it? I want you to leave your door unlocked and be ready for me, ok?"
"Yes! Sounds perfect! Thank you sir!" She smiled, and Paul walked up to her, kneeling down and kissing her.
She wrapped her arms around him, shoving her tongue inside his mouth, clinging to him and kissing him voraciously before he pried her off, pushing her down to the floor as she looked up at him with big, doe eyes, watching him walk out the door.
- COMMENTS
The cruelty shown by Paul toward Valerie was hideous and unnecessary. The 14 inch dick was comical or stupid. Take your pick. The idea that a virgin boy would not cum on his first stroke into such a beautiful woman was laughable. It would be so much better to have Paul be normal in behavior with a realistic huge dick of 8 inches, and be a clumsy lover at first; who learns to be a great lover via several sessions with Valerie.
Foot long cock, decent looking guy, but he's a virgin, massive tits (OK I'll allow this since she is a trophy wife). Yeah, talk about ridiculous. Even the cock size alone is just stupid. And he says "I'm not that big". Oh come on, no one is that fucking stupid or naïve.
Could have done without the suggestion he was going to pimp her out at some point (why waste her on random morons) and why didn't he cum in her? What guy losing his virginity wouldn't cum in a hot babe? So many little things wrong with this story. Aside from those minor things, the plot itself is decent and has potential especially if he develops feelings for her since she seems to be into him, although that could just be her finally getting the fulfilment she has sought after for so long.
Unlike some comments I thought it was an amazing story, really well written. Can't wait to read the rest. Fantastic job !!!
Forceful is one thing, mindless arrogant violence is just an evil heart at work. Beyond that, the writing is mostly just kind of over the top and long-winded...
Ffs the husbands dick sounds better than some of these comments 🙄😂 I loved it, you've quickly become one of my favorite authors. Most stories I find are full of spelling issues or constant name mixups, some errors don't bug me but the constant ones... Very well written, yeah may not be truly realistic but what's wrong with some fantasy? For an erotic website this community can be so freaking judgy and depressing, go get laid or at least a removable showerhead. Hope to see more stories in the future
Seems a little OTT at the moment and a scenario unlikely to happen but still a well written erotic story.
It was... okay for the genre. The "nerd with the giant dick who magically is great at sex" is an overused trope, as is the clumsy blackmail (seriously, why do these women never call the police? It's just idiocy). Despite that and the unnecessary level of violence, the story wasn't poorly written, just a bit boring.
Jumped to the end after the first page. This is filthy, tasteless writing. Using violence on the girl, shoving his big cock in her mouth.... I wonder whether it can get any lower. It's mandatory to give at least one star, else I would have given zero. I will never again read any of your stories. Absolutely tasteless.
How'd he get such a sadistic streak at such a young age? Makes him as unpleasant as her husband as she's trying to please him....