All Comments on 'New Life'
by 1DurtyMutha
- 6 Comments
AUUUUUUGHHHHH!!! You stop THERE?!
(BTW, worried people won't know this is the same story.)
Good chapter. Frustrated not to know who shot him. was it that bitch soleil? or was it claude? I'd think claude. poor neville! I felt you should have continued a bit further. It was a frustrating place to have you stop. Hopefully you will update soon.
look forward to more.
What happens next. Who is Brion. Where the hell did the bullets come from. These are not questions, so much as demands. I want to know. I'm hooked, dammit. BLAH I want answers! Lol
I probably should have put this at the beginning but I thought the description would be enough. My mistake. This is the beginning of the next installment of stories centered around the characters I introduced in the series "Fresh Out". It will be different. Bare with me. And thanks for reading.
But ppl overlook the simplest details. My writing grad classes ALWAYS has at least one person telling me info is missing from my stories when I do memtion them.
Anywhore, I'm glad you are showing what happens to Neville after "Fresh Out"..looking forward to reading more!?