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by Bh76
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Yeah, sorry. There’s a missed you’re instead of your in there. Grammarly is stupid. My bad. In case it wasn’t as obvious as I thought it was, the box in the closet had the strap-on she wanted to try on her husband in it. Thanks for reading!
ah, I like it.
a couple who communicate in a story of Lowing Wives.
it's magic.
5⭐ for originality.
be careful, it's borderline neither credible nor realistic.
Well, that was different! In a creative way, I mean. I really do wonder how some authors come up with their ideas.
But a little off the deep end for my tastes or the loving wives category.
Loved it, and you put it exactly where it belongs. I missed the word play, but not the action. Fuck Greg.
Now that was different and I liked the little prick getting taught a lesson about not messing with married women. You have to admit the Loving Wives category is hard to stay out of.
Can't think of a better treatment of the bosses desire to fuck a married employee. The video would still be going out.
Tried to like it, and Lord knows the asshole deserved it, but something about it just seemed odd, maybe a bit juvenile.
I think the unbalance comes from the incompatible details. So the wife enjoyed working for this selfish arrogant oppressing asshole? How, why? And how could this professionally educated predator be so gullible as to let himself be tied up from the very beginning, especially given that even the asshole was surprised by the husband's ready agreement to fuck his wife?
And how about some physiology and sexual neurology. The guy is being raped in the ass, and he has an orgasm? If you think there's a button inside there somewhere that all you have to do is rub on and you get immediate sexual response then I guess you understand why so many men queers are promiscuous.
And the gun thing was really stupid. Unless they are prepared to shoot him to death, he goes to the hospital with a gunshot wound and evidence of anal rape and who do you think the police and DA are going to believe? They invited him into their house, tied him up, raped him, and shot him. I'm thinking they end up being the ones really fucked.
So again, I sympathize with wanting to teach a tyrannical bullying sexual predator a lesson, but this was kind of ridiculous. Give it another shot with more reality and plausibility.
And thanks for the effort.
Cute story though a little short! This one sorta tweaked one of my fantasies that one of you Literoica authors extraordinaire would write a "Burn the Prick" story along the lines of the typical BTB genre so popular on Loving Wives. Greg didn't exactly get burned just a few minutes of humiliation.
Good fantasy well written as usual. Still looking for that hard core BTP story.
Cheers
SAGE
Wheeeeeeee, a fun ride. Well, not for Greg, but he was such an asshole he practically begged to be pegged!
I saw the twist coming, but it was still a very entertaining read. Nicely done.
Nowhere to run to, Baby, nowhere to hide.
Also, not a good ending to whine about who did who and why. This story didn't seem adult enough. Too much of a space opera and not enough of a real story and we know very little of a plot
It is not Gay Male. It is not NonCon/Reluct. It is not really Group Sex. It is clearly not Romance. It sounds like it might be First Time, but we can’t be sure. And Sweetie is overpoweringly adventurous! Gotta be LW!
4*. only quibble is that there was little adjustment Hubby and Sweetie had to undertake in their marital relationship.
Whoa. You made my day. This is just so beautifully written.
Thank you so very much.
5 stars
Could kind of see it coming, nevertheless you did a fine job of telling the tale and it was a very enjoyable read.
the dick size shaming was also a bit gratuitous, and dislike the word "cuck" in any circumstance, but I like to support clever writing, especially in LW, where the trolls chew up everything, so I gave it a "5".
So funny I like it even though I think it was impossible for wife the insert that dildo with the dude lying on his back.
5/5 stars. for being funny
For some reason I imagined this happening to all the commentors that always cry cuck...
This was a humorous read and definitely should be the template used for all of the boss wants to fuck the wife stories.
I did not expect the direction this story went in but was pleasantly surprised that it did. Great story!
The asshole got the sex he wanted, only instead of him fucking, he got fucked!
I love this story, turn about is fair play😆. I hope he doesn't try that again or he might end up in a hole in the ground next time🤭
Thats funny!! I was trying to figure out the setup but I missed it this time
days ago
A handgun? In Oz? Great story, otherwise!!!
What, you think Auntie Em, didn't have a double barrel shotgun?
****Her husband and her really let him have it in the END!!!! Good read. Thanks for sharing.
Maybe a little weak on the credibility but still very enjoyable with the prick getting his just deserts. Liked the twist.
She didn't want to be called a bitch? Then call her a cunt. It's what that useless hole is and should be referred to as.
Innovative and entertaining. Though as her hubby, I wouldn't have let her fuck her boss's ass while she's wearing skimpy lingerie and heels... That's just begging for an unexpected reaction - for his wife...
Not a bad idea but the "doctor" character has been portrayed a bit too naïve/stupid and rather lowly. I understand that being veterinarian is not exactly being an Einstein but it is not a trailer park trash either. The veterinarians I know are serious and decent people. You tend to overdo your characters to the point that there is no subtlety at all.
Ah yes, this is a story I can enjoy. Love the wanna-be stud taking it up HIS ass since in the usual LovingWives stories it's hubby that gets "screwed". Nice change of pace .......
I overheard Abby my wife talking on the phone to a friend Jill. The things I heard I didn't like her boss was trying to have sex with her while threatening her about different things at work. What he didn't know was I already knew. My group of friends were tight and we watched out for each other. I had told them what I had heard. 3 said not to worry it's taken care of. That next night her boss was mugged. I knew different. With in a few weeks he transferred to another office in a different area.
Wise man - after this "thing" with the boss, it showed great wisdom in confirming who was doing who.
Thanks for the story!
It's a disgusting story, but it did make me smile. He deserved what he got.
Letting that piece of shit get his cum on his wife? Oh, hell no. And she needed to do more than apologize for touching that asshole's little dick, too. Fucked up. Close to amusing and funny, but too close to a line that no real marriage would want to even approach. Would have been far better to have some hooker come in to do the honors, after he was blindfolded and leave her out of it completely.
I laughed and shook my head at Greggie cumming while he took it up the chute. Good one!
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant, the best plot twist ever, very well done.
I loved it. Nice plot twist. So Greg thought he was going to be doing the driving huh? Guess someone forgot to tell hin Lois was going to be doing the driving. :-)
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I guess her boss didn't understand Sterling Archer's warning:
"Phrasing!"
11/10!!!!!