by Ryeman
Good story! It was very clever and very well-written. It's not often I see "tackle" used to refer to a man's dick and I grinned at it. This was amusing, sexy, and creative. I hope to see more from you.
Nice little tale and easy to read. It was the sort of thing that could happen and easy to believe. It moved along quickly and happily with enough mystery to make it interesting.
I really get off on the 'watching and being watched' concept and you captured my interest. It wasn't exceptionally lurid but engrossing all the same.