All Comments on 'Pam's Home'

You can't write for a hill of beans

Never pay attention to anyone 'anonymous' as they are usually chicken-shit cowards. Actually the writing isn't that bad for a setup ...but there are so many ways to go from that point, so why stop? If that was all that you intended, then I feel like I wasted my time in reading it.

Go for quality, not quantity Justin!!!

The usual garbage.

I really like the story. It touches on so many extreme fantasies and left me wanting for more. I hope Pam forces a humiliating breakup of the relationship and destroys the protagonists life for good.

Sometimes I write a story that is more of a set-up but still I try to turn people on. For instance "The New Arrangement" is a kind of set-up story, and I found that when I tried to write sequels, they really weren't that good. You have to write where you have spirit. That's the weird line between...am I writing for me, or for others? I began writing porn originally because I was in my apartment, horny, but couldn't jerk off because I had houseguests. I had this insane fantasy about a chick in my neighborhood, and so instead of jacking I wrote the story and posted it somewhere, and just continued doing that...been doing it since 2001

I throughly enjoyed your story. Nice plot. Ex comes back and although he doesn't want anything to do with her because of her abuse, still, craves it.

Not the best I've read ok story though