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by DeliaGreen
- 60 Comments
The best thing that could happen is if he divorces the lieing cheating bitch.
guy's kid. That is about all this story lacks as you have fucked all those guys....
Kevin was porking some old gal while the slut was gone to San Diego.
If she has no use for her husband, then why not move to California and let Charles be her sugar daddy? Divorce old Kevin and let him find the girl of his dreams too. It was so wonderful of her to think of taking a gown home to model for Kevin.She is a cheap tramp anyway. She "loves" her husband so much. Hope the cheap assed bitch gets caught. Maybe Charlie will set her up as the corporate whore, and use her for his business. If it wasn't for seeing innocents killed, I'd like to see her fucking plane crash
Nope, no divorce, Kevin needs the services of "Blade", cut the cheating little whore into little pieces, but a little at a time. Slowly, painfully...............
It's a great sexy tale, loved it. Good ole sex, and even a bit romantic. Wo0od
I have enjoyed this story, but wish it was a little more realistic Angie lied to hubby was gone all week cheating and had no feelings of guilt. She must be the biggest slut yet to not feel something. And Kevin I know he has enjoyed his hot wife but this sure is grounds for divorce. Angie's lying game playing so she could cheat and not feel guilty. Hope in the next chapter you have Kevin fall in love with a new women and leave angie high and dry.
hello i enjoyed it but i really think yo uneed to help kevin out and find someone to really fuck him and have an affair with him so you can quit feeling guilty find him a real cutie that loves to fuck then youll be even andboth of you will be happy
I think it time that kevin lets on that he knows she a lying cheating slut and divorce her. Have him find someone special. She needs to see what she has given up just to get fucked.
Why is this pig even married?
Oh, that's right, if it hadn't been for her dumbass husband needing a 'date' for good ol Charles, then this part of the pig's life wouldn't have even happened.
However, a lying, cheating pig like this would have surely found someone else to cuckold dear old Kevin.
It is too bad, but I think that Kevin and Angie deserve each other - one a dim wit that can't smell the coffee, and the lying, cheating pig that he is married to.
If there was any justice, however, Kevin should contract HIV, pass it on to his pig of a wife, and THEN the slut gives it to all the pricks that fuck her - NOW that would be poetic justice. Where is this nasty virus when you need it?
....deserves to get punished. Very severely! He needs to either divorce her or make her watch him fuck other women for a while, and she can't do a thing about it.
It's been an interesting and sexy story so far but you can carry the cheating wife line only so far before it grows boring. It should require some resolution to the whole thing. Wheather a confrontation between them or acceptance by the husband. You need to bring this to a head. If a confrontation think of some unusual twist like maybe a cruel use of a wife by a betrayed husband who can't let go but can't stand her thinking she is getting away with something. Or perhaps she should get herself in over her head with this Charles character using her as a whore. Something to wake her up and slap her silly if you want to keep the character viable. Or if an acceptance by the husband let it lead to a slow cooling toward wife and eventual indifference toward wife as he becomes more interested in other women. But fore pete sakes stay away from the same old ending of them becoming an open marriage. That is so boring. In real life it is unrealistic to think no matter how expressed that there is no loss of repect under such conditions. Where love is strained it usually fades and the offended partner drifts away even if seduced into doing the same thing. They eventually read between the lines and find out they have been manipulated. Trust is doublely broken. You might still love someone like that but you would still pull back from them. Farther, farther, farther, and farther. Jim
These guys read these LOVING WIFE stories just so that they can have their wittle temper tantrums---Notice they are all anonymous.
Obvious why they fear their spouse might want another cock and/or tongue
...but remembering her rationalizations of why she is doing this is so out of this world...and not to forget her stupid husband Kevin.
very good story so far but i agree with another poster. time to move forward with the story. don't need continuous chapters of her adventures. time for some interaction with her husband that will eventually lead to some conclusion,one way or another.
a short note to the poster named Don: you need to quit whining about the other posters whining.you need to move on,too.
very good story so far but i agree with another poster. time to move forward with the story. don't need continuous chapters of her adventures. time for some interaction with her husband that will eventually lead to some conclusion,one way or another.
a short note to the poster named Don: you need to quit whining about the other posters whining.you need to move on,too.
Not a very interesting story. She lies to husband to be with Charles for week-end and spends most of her time sitting around waiting for Charles or talking to Richard. Hardly seems like it was worth the trip. I guess if you have enough money, you can buy woman for the week-end by just furnishing nice wardrobe and limo service. Seems like a regular hooker would be cheaper.----no erotic at all the Ct. Yankee
He wants her to be well fucked, but knows he can't perform well enough by himself. So he gets her as hot as possible by keeping her in suspense for a whole day, and then, at the party, gets her defenses - and perception - down with sensuous dancing, liquor and pot. And then she is blindfolded and well fucked - by Richard, by Peter, and at least one other guy - until Charles takes over and finishes off the night. Of course, she doesn't know all this, but the reader should realize straight off that she is being fucked by multiple lovers.
Very clever, and very erotic.
You have a great, teasing way of writing. I see not everyone agrees, but I truly enjoyed your story
She is, obviously, a slut. Her fucking around has nothing to do with Kevin? It is her infidelity, adultery that destroys the marriage vows. It has everything to do with Kevin. He is now, or maybe has been for some time, a cuckold.
Hope Kevin finds out, has proof, and throws her out. Her act isn't the accidental lapse into another bed. Hers is cold, calculated, planned adultery. To hell with Kevin.
Don't listen to the naysayers - I say this comedy has staying power - look there's still lots to do with a cock hungry loving wife thats so intelligent and dumbo as the husband - don't ruin it now as it's so erotic and sexy - a real two hander.
So whats up - gangbang (big cocked blacks of course) with dumbo videoing and sucking her cunt out between threesomes - some fine cuckolding possiblities youv'e just got to explore - oh well - just surprise us.
Just one thing tho - watch out for the other cuckolding authors - they will pretend to support you then - well it won't be pretty (Hint - they will suck out all your original ideas then where will you be - just a has been cuckolding author looking for someone to appreciate you for your many erotic talents) A mind is a terrible thing eh!!
What a bitch. She fucks around on her hsuband and doesn't even have any remorse. I hope Kevin found out she was at the wedding and throws the slut out. Then I hope Charles dumps her and she ends up selling her body and the street to the slimy men that rent a ho.
How about another chapter in which Kevin and Meredith fall in love - Kevin dumps Angie and moves in with Meredith and they live happily ever after? Angie contacts Charles, hoping she can get something permanent going with him but all he has to offer her is a position as his company's whore. Hmmmm
What a fine story. I have no idea why some people read Literotica and then complain about everything written. It's quite juvenile. In any event, this reminded me of a time when I visited a guy in San Francisco, a friend, and told my fiance I was going to a wedding. Yes I slept with him, not planned but did, and still I've been married to the guy I cheated on for five wonderful years.
Ugh, I guess I am worthless.
What a fine story. I have no idea why some people read Literotica and then complain about everything written. It's quite juvenile. In any event, this reminded me of a time when I visited a guy in San Francisco, a friend, and told my fiance I was going to a wedding. Yes I slept with him, not planned but did, and still I've been married to the guy I cheated on for five wonderful years.
Ugh, I guess I am worthless.
Well written I have love the story thus far and would love to see Kevin come out on top. Maybe falling in love with another women and leaving Angie. Then when she calls Charles she finds out he was only using her for a good time.
Well written I have love the story thus far and would love to see Kevin come out on top. Maybe falling in love with another women and leaving Angie. Then when she calls Charles she finds out he was only using her for a good time.
Well written I have love the story thus far and would love to see Kevin come out on top. Maybe falling in love with another women and leaving Angie. Then when she calls Charles she finds out he was only using her for a good time.
To all those who thik Kevin is a good guy... Remenber, he is the one that got Angie into this in the first place. If he didn't know that Angie was going to bed with Charles, at least on the second date, then he is a dumb ass!!!! Angie should let Kevin know what is going on and if he has no problems with it, the more power to her and he can join the fun!!
Not as good as the first one, but very very authentic. I'm having an affair with a married woman who's almost exactly like Angie- very sey, very hot, very sensual and loads of imagination and willingness to take risks. We're planning a threesome soon.
Guys - if you think Angie is just a fictional character, just look around a little carefully. There are SO many women out there who'd like to do what Angie's doing.
As for the writing, I love DeliaGreen's writing style. It's so absolutely feminine. Gets me hot every time. And my married friend, too!!
Except I like to read stories that sound like real people, ones I know, doing things I could believe they would do.
For the gal who commented below that she lied to her husband and then put the horns on him (any time a wife fucks around on her husband she cuckolds him. Forget this drivel on the webb that the husband has to know and condone it to be a cuckold) Of course she is a lying slut. By definition, sweatheart.
One thing rankles and is so far off base it is silly. The "loving wife" has been looking for men, seems like just about any man will do, and then lying to her husband from the first story. How can you have her seriously concerned about what her husband would feel. Unless she is worried about losing his economic support. And I can't imagine her lying there in a room provided by her favorite fucker and even thinking of her husband. Give me a break. If she enjoyed him sexually and liked the man she wouldn't be here.
But it was also confusing in other places. I can't give it a higher rating than 50 whe the story is unclear.
But it was also confusing in other places. I can't give it a higher rating than 50 when the story is unclear.
Unrealistic bullshit- typical of this author.
a woman who want her cake and eat too.i hope hubby when she get home have new locks on the door.
The woman is a mindless bareback whore. Her husband for all intents is virtually braindead. He needs to catch her in the lies, divorce her. Let her run to Charles and find out he likes her as a whore and slut but wants nothing to do with her in real life. She can move to a state out west where prostitution if legal, get her monthly STD/HIV checkups and do what she does best, fuck people for money. A fitting end for a worthless woman.
As much as I would like to fault wifey, and I know she is at fault for lying, fucking around and not caring enough about hubby to tell the truth. If she cared she could have at least said, "Oops honey, I was drunk at the wedding, got carried away and had sex with a stranger. I'm sorry. I love you. PLEASE get yourself checked for STD's." Something like that. However Kevin is no saint. He cheats on her. He has lost his moral high ground. When he had concerns for her, he never followed through on checking. When she mentioned the wedding and he knew something was amiss, his reaction is too quickly run and set up some screw time for himself. I wonder, if he hadn't been able to find a date, would he have used his spare time for anything constructive. I'm not convinced on who to root for. At least he is not whoring himself to any and all, but how about concern for health? They both need resolution.
where she returns from her weekend and finds the doors locked and her belongings outside, with a suitable note. they would include the words, thank you my soon to be ex-wife, for making me realize i no longer want to be be with you.
If there's any justice, you'll be served faster than you can blink.
to be everloving TRUE AND FAIR. TK U MLJ LV NV
..but again, cheaters are more often like this one than like the other depicted in the loving wives section. They cheat because they like being liked or just for sex and try to keep it secret from their husbands. But, back to the story, I expected the author finally put it in the clear, someway, that it was not a daydream but that she was actually fucked by her lover friends taking advantage of the blindfold trick. I also expected her finally discover (i.e. via a tape from her lover!?) that it was arranged for a live band performing live in the room while the guests admired the party girl being enjoyed in turn by the lucky guest.
Strange little story, kind of like a dream. Who fucked her while she was blindfolded? Did I miss something?
Surprised he didn't fuck her earlier in the weekend. Still good
Chilley
I kind of liked your story, the only thing I can say is that to much detail can kill the moment. listing item by item of what she? wearing and then listing them again as its being taken off almost made me log off. And to let him blindfold her? and tie her up? she sounds desperate for attention. Another thing is you don paint a very good picture of her husband here. If she? supposedly in love with her husband, why does she have to go cross country to fuck someone she barely knows? Is her husband that small or lousy in bed? liked your other stories but this one is going a bit down the wayward path. My late wife dated other men when on her girls night out sometimes. but she never left for a whole weekend. I paid real close attention to my wife so I would have known if she had gotten fucked even if she had tried to hide it from me. which she never did. Well I´ll start the next story and see if she finally comes to her senses. If not . you wont see me reading anymore of your stories.
But does not care what you do, now that his attorney has the divorce videos.
What a great story! It’s so hot, wonderful and exciting when a married woman starts dating another married man. And to all you people who don’t like this....screw off!
I hope poor Kevin can engineer a plane crash- except he wouldn't know it was his wife's aircraft, because it 's coming from cali. Small c. Oh, wait, he knows where she was. Good .BTB The Bear does NOT approve.
The BEAR
Where did she go when blindfolded? To a room or the ballroom with 200 people? Did Richard and Peter take her when she was tied to bed? Story just ended, or am I missing a page?
Downgraded this interesting but I felt a bit long story because there's nothing written about when she gets home then meets her husband. In the intro, it's noted that he knows... but how did he react? A bit less on the minute to minute writing, but.. the story needs finishing. 3 stars but almost gave it 2 due the above. Could almost have been a 4 -- Bob
Divorce is the only answer for these male and female sluts.
The story left far to many unanswered questions. The basis for a great story was all there but poor story telling cost a potential 5 to fall to a 1.
So many unanswered questions. It is difficult to score this story as it sits. The aloofness of Charles, the other men, the changing of rooms (which makes no sense without explanation), and of course her feelings and emotions of cheating on her faithful husband (of which she seems unconcerned). You don't pay for a woman to fly across the country for a one night stand without some underlying motivation. And what woman does this for a one shot per weekend lover.
Good story, yay for Kevin, she finally considered the man she is supposed to love at the very end, women like her should catch aids and die miserably.
What was the point of this part ? No confrontation, no emotions, no nothing. Literally a waste of my time reading. This had so much potential but it fizzled like a wet fuse. Get a good editor that can give constructive criticism before you post weak stories like this again. Only a 2.
Just another story of another nasty devious lying cheating slut who loves her husband soooo much......