by fidget1
This went in a different direction than I thought it would. I loved it all the more for where you took it!
That was an unusual story but in a good way. I like how you flipped the table on the norm although since it is a chapter 1, it makes me wonder if either he uses her to his advantage completely or maybe we deal with a completely different couple or more considering there had to be quite a few people who drank that stuff. I also wonder what happens if a guy drinks it. Might be another interesting concept.
Very well done. I really like how the girl figured this out and was able to use it to her advantage instead of the much more common theme of being turned into a mindless bimbo right away. A nice change to the story type.
you know if the dude who invented this juice actually thought f what it was capable of he would have invented the most useful and terrifying invention in existence. I mean If this Juice was tweaked so that someone would take a dose and become whatever the person said then you could make the world whatever you want it to be. Given that it works magically(more or less) one could have people secretly dosed in order to bend them to your will
regardless cant wait to see the next one
I was kind of looking for porn and I found feminism (mixed with lovely porn) and I liked it a lot. I read all the perfect girlfriend stories and I think you are a smart observer of the world rather than a fantasist (or maybe you are both). The idea of the potion doesn't seem to be so far from the truth to me.