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Click hereI pumped my hips and cock until we were both done. I collapsed backward pulling my cock from her pussy. She groaned again as I pulled the head out. We both just laid there for several minutes. I had my arms around her shoulder and she kissed my wrist.
After several minutes I pulled back and disentangled myself. She rolled onto her back as I stood up. My cock was bouncing in front of me and she was looking at it. I said, "Don't pay any attention to that. I think you are done and we are too. You are just so fucking sexy that my cock will never go down when you are around." She looked at me with a pleased look on her face.
I said, "Come on Noah. We have to get our stuff and get out of here." Noah leaned down toward Olivia and kissed her neck and shoulder before rolling back over and stood up. We both stopped to gaze down at the incredible beauty that was Olivia laying there on the bed.
I told her not to get up and we left the room. We went down the stairs and back out to the pool where we pulled on our shorts and gathered the cleaning equipment and carried it back to the van. We climbed into our seats and backed out of the driveway.
I pulled into Noah's driveway but he didn't get out right away. He turned to me and said, "Mother-fucker, Hunter. You've got in made in the shade. How many others are you fucking in that neighborhood anyway?"
I said, "Well today was unusual. I had never met any of those women before. There are two others besides Olivia and Emma. You don't need to know who they are unless they ask for me to bring in reinforcements. Thanks for helping out today. I would do anything for Olivia and she really got off big-time today. I'll find out if the others would like to include you or not. They are all terrified of what would happen to them if word got out. So, you can't say a word about today to anyone. Understand?" Noah nodded. I continued, "I'll kill you myself if you do." Noah grinned at me but he could tell from my fixed jaw and stern look on my face that this was serious. We shook hands and he pushed open his door and slid out. He slammed his door and was walking around the front as I backed out of his driveway and drove down the block to my folk's house.
I sat behind the wheel and reminisced about the day for a couple minutes. I was tired and my balls ached again. Tomorrow was Friday and I wasn't going near that neighborhood until I picked up Alexis for our date. My cock jumped in my shorts just thinking of Alexis.
[To be continued...]
Had to go with a 1 on this set. Didn’t care for him sharing his harem with another guy nor his harem sharing him with others outside the group. No emotional attachment to them. Still a little pitiful that he did nothing to stop those attacks against the two women nor to Emma.
Ain't Mr Anonymous a trimmer 😆
He loves your stories, absolutely loves them; as do I.
To spend all that time and energy pulling it apart line by line and getting all excited about this and that, tells me the clown spends more time reading your stories than anyone else on the planet. 😂
I think, secretly, he's your biggest fan.
It really is pretty pathetic, that with his consummate grammatical skills, he doesn't put his name to his diahorreah. Like mate, you should be publishing tomes on grammar. Get your name up in lights. Be the legend you're destined to be.
Pffffffttttt.
What a tosser.
What are you, a frustrated, under appreciated English teacher! I can find an error in EVERY story on this website (sorry - Website)! This is EROTIC WRITING!!!!!! You will not find a New York Best Seller on this site!!!!!!! Dunce head!!!!!! PLEASE - DO NOT READ ANY MORE OF THIS STORY!!!!! Even many of your 'corrections' are not correct! Many are your taste in writing or sentence construction versus the author's. Go to another Website and complain there!!!!!!
I mean what ass wipe reads a story and then list all the things he can find wrong? I gave this a 5 for making this annony fool do his English homework. All we need now is for him to find Waldo!!!!
The latest installment seemed forced, contrived, stale and unoriginal. And those were its positive aspects!!!! Too bad, such promise unfulfilled!!!! One more like this and I am going to willingly and anxiously forgo the remaining five episodes!!!!
Master Bedroom (master bedroom)
the closest of Alexis' nipples (nearer) (Alexis's) (4)
top pallet (palate)
lathed (laved) (2)
flagellated (licked)
my -(own) orgasm (WHO ELSE COULD EXPLODE AN ORGASM FROM HIS LOINS???? THE TOOTH FAIRY????) 4)
Fuck (fuck) (4)
FIRED FORWARD and then back. Her hips pulled back and then FIRED FORWARD (13 WORDS)
She took her tit that was in her mouth with her (A HIGHLY INFORMATIVE SENTENCE. WITHOUT THIS STARTLING REVELATION, I MAY HAVE THOUGHT THAT SHE LEFT HER TIT BEHIND!?!?!?!?)
guard house waved her through (guardhouse) (HOW MANY ARMS DOES A GUARDHOUSE HAVE I CAN NEVER REMEMBER????)
sleep-walked (sleepwalked)
eye-candy dangling on their arm (arm candy) (I PREFER THAT TO ARM CANDY DANGLING FROM MY EYE!!!!)
step-sister (stepsister)
step-father (stepfather)
flagellate (lick)
opened HER MOUTH to show me all the pearly white sperm in HER MOUTH (AND HERE I AM THINKING THAT IT WAS IN HER SHOE!!!! THANKS FOR THE CLARIFICATION!!!!)
next door to Olivia's.I pulled into Olivia's driveway a few minutes past 2:00 PM. I made a couple trips from the van to the pool (HE WAS NEXT DOOR SO HE LOADED UP HIS TRUCK, ONCE HE COMPLETED THE FIRST POOL, THE DROVE TO THE NEXT-DOOR HOUSE ANDUNLOADED HIS VAN FOR A SECOND TIME???? HARDLY AN EFFECTIVE USE OF HIS TIME, IS IT????)
blabber-mouths (blabbermouths)
flash-backs (flashbacks)
sun screen (sunscreen) (2)
sun bronzed (sun-bronzed)
six foot (six-foot)
setup (set up)
blood curdling (bloodcurdling)
G-Spot (G-spot)
finger-tip (fingertip) (2)
cannon-balled (cannonballed)
red-head (redhead)
role playing (role-playing)
tongue tied (tongue-tied)
planked himself (plunked)
full staff (full-staff)
MY COCK and as her hands wrapped around MY COCK (IT IS COMPLETELY UNCLEAR IF HIS COCK IS IN ANY WAY INVOLVED HERE!?!?!?!?)
pogo-ing (pogoing)
finger fucking (finger-fucking)
You (you)
g-spot (G-spot) (4)
taught as a bow-string (taut) (bowstring)
half dozen (half-dozen)
high pitched screech (high-pitched) (WHEN WAS THE LAST TIME YOU HEARD A LOW-PITCHED SCREECH????)
seethed air threw (through)
Aluminum (aluminum)
got in made (it)
Hunter keeps his dark hair cut short, but I'd like to imagine he has the beginnings of a bit of chest hair, which which appear a bit bleached by the sun, for the masculine muscular chest. Especially on a boy/young man of 19, a bit of chest hair, the beginnings in the middle of the chest, at the shirt collar line, and/or the treasure trail is a real turn-on for others!
Noah is a great addition. I do think there should be some female on male analingus like you had in Hot Summer Night Chapter 10.
It's a group post, I'm assuming h the author has some women readers also so this would be more enjoyable for them. To each his own, Im not a fan of DP myself but that doesn't mean it wasn't still a good read. Keep up the good work, lookin forward to chapter 5.