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- Primal Urges
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by FaeLina
- 31 Comments
Very good. I love the story line.. is there more to come?? Will they get together? You must let us know!!!
Love the story and would love to hear more of these two characters.
A well written imaginative story, can't wait for the next instalment.
Good luck with your writing!
I loved this story and would love to read more of it if there is more. Keep up the great work and put out the next chapter soon!
well this was one of the most amazing stories i have ever read. pls continue it. i loved this story very much. thanx to the author.
Oh my! That was terrific. It was so wonderfully written. I can't wait to read more. I hope you have more planned for these two. You did a superb job with this story.
Honestly? I had to skip some of the beginning, i found her background boring and predictable, but like i said i didn't actually read it. I liked the differences, that she was in his area, that she was prepared for him, that he could control himself enough to let her go, proving he was more than just an animal. By the end of it i was hooked, i want more, just not more of the intro. Don't be mad, it's just my opinion, started slow then was sizzlin
what a hot,kinky story.i loved it,it was one of my fantasy's put into words! i like that it wasn't a rape. that she was oh so willing to have the man-beast.can not wait to read more about these two,can they have a relationship?thanks so much for sharing your tale.gem
FANTASTIC STORY. READ ALL CHAPTERS TO-DATE & CANT WAIT FOR MORE&MORE. LOVE GROWING ROMANCE STORY,BUT THE SEX SCENES ARE EROTIC,MAGICAL & NAUGHTY AS HELL- I LOVE IT. PLS KEEP THE STORY GOING. LOVE THIS TO END UP AS NOVEL
You captured the fantasy unlike any other! Superbly well written, it was bestial, yet loving, wanton yet tender. Extrememly well done, kudos!
I loved it! Great story and man, oh man! If I could find a forest like that... Just what I needed during my afternoon break! ;) Back to the housework. Thanks again and I would love to read more!
xoxox
This piece is extremely well written. I loved your title. Parts of the story were so very primal they were almost uncomfortable, or perhaps it was discovering the resultant arousal they induced that was uncomfortable... Not sure on that score. I will definitely be looking for more work with your byline. Very impressive. Keep writing!
My goodness, never thought i would want to have sex with a half man/dog. Keep writing, you are........ HOT
Yummmmm. Thank you so much for writing this. More like this one? Please, please, please, please, please?
You I usually read on xnxx but this story by far beats any of the ones I had read there, I enjoy it how you don't spend the first 4 or 5 stories telling about the characters you just get right into it. Good job!
I hope that you come with more stories, because i loved this one=)
I don't usually comment on stories but this was perfectly written. And I came so deliciously hard for about thirty seconds whilst reading it. Thank you.
AbsolutelyCurious this was perfectly written. And I came so deliciously hard for about thirty seconds whilst reading it. Thank you.
AbsolutelyCurious
When I was very young, I too had a special spot like her. I Didnt do all that she did but it felt so nice and close to nature. I would always cum so deliciously hard.
Fantastic story, I love how she starts off reluctant but surrenders to her desire
I must say this is one of the best erotica's on this site that I have read.
I loved everything about this story! Your word flow, descriptions, and pace of the story kept it interesting and incredibly satisfying. By the end my pussy was tingling and I couldn’t keep my hands off my breasts. Also, I’ve never thought of riding a log before but now I must admit it might work it’s way into my fantasy world. Thank you for a sexy fun tale!!!!