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Click here"Look, I get that," Andy said, as the three of them descended the staircase back to the ground floor. "I just want to make sure that nobody's doing anything they don't want to do."
"I can assure you, Master Rook," a voice said from around the corner, "none of us is here unwillingly."
As the three of them walked around the corner, Andy could see Niko and Lauren standing in front of three women. The first woman was a Hispanic woman in overalls and a t-shirt, in her early thirties, with her black hair cut in a short bob. Next to her was a Midwestern looking woman around the same age, curvy with her hair in a bushy brown ponytail, dressed in a t-shirt and slacks, with an apron draped over the front, her eyes behind large circular glasses that almost dwarfed her face. And on the right was one of the most buxom women Andy had ever seen. She was in her early twenties, dressed in a French maid's costume, black and white, with a short skirt, white underfrills poking out the bottom, her legs in fishnet stockings, with a single black line running up the back of them. Her tits were huge, practically forming a shelf, as much of them exposed as covered. Her hair was blonde, long running down her back in massive curls that hung down to her waist. Unlike the other two women, who were wearing sneakers, the maid wore tall high heels.
"We're all aware what we signed up for, Master Rook," the voice continued. It emerged from the woman on the left, whom Andy assumed was Katie, the gardener. "And we will make sure the house is kept in perfect condition."
"Master Rook sounds so insanely overblown... Katie, was it?" Andy said, as he approached them, feeling Aisling moving in behind him.
"Yes, Master. I'm Katie, this is my partner Jennifer, and down at the end is Yvette." Jennifer bowed a little, while Yvette gave a curtsy that somehow even offered even more of a view of her cleavage than before. "And it's important we show deference and respect."
"Would 'sir' be an acceptable compromise?" Niko asked the women, which made Andy relax a little.
"I would have no problem with that, ma'am," Katie said.
"Nor I, madam," Jennifer followed.
"I must insist I refer to him as Master," Yvette said, her French accent practically oozing into every word. "I want to offer him his earned respect. And besides, it gives me a tingle saying it."
"You really are French, Yvette?" Aisling asked.
"Oui, madam."
"And it gives you a thrill to refer to him as Master?" Niko said.
"Oui, madam."
"How much of a thrill?"
"Madam, I am a natural submissive. I enjoy serving, being ordered around, and the idea of having a proper Master? That is exactly what I wanted."
"And the outfit?"
"Mon dieu, what man hasn't wanted an actual French maid at some point in his life?"
"The outfit's quite complete."
"In all the right ways," Yvette giggled, while tugging up the front of her skirt to reveal that while she was wearing fishnets, that was the only thing she had on beneath the skirt. And the woman's pussy was not only wet, it was practically dripping down her thighs. "Welcome to your new home, Master."
- COMMENTS
Shaggy: CP's response covered the bases quite well on your diversity concerns with his work. If his explanation still leaves you unsatisfied in your search for stories that address diversity as you think they should, I suggest you try this link:
//rosa-blanca.ru/desixxxphoto/c/interracial-erotic-stories
If you can't find stories that meet your standards there, man, I don't know what else to tell you.
ShaggyDogStory: Andy's harem makeup is, in many ways, a product of his area, i.e. the SF Bay Area. But, for the record, Andy has: an Australian woman, an Irish woman, Niko (who's part First Nations/Chinese/Mexican), a 2nd gen French/American, a 2nd generation Mexican/American, a blonde Midwesterner, a blonde Californian, a brunette from Florida, a half Indian/half French woman from London, a redhead from the Northeastern US, a posh British blonde, a Canadian acrobat, a half-Hawaiian/half-Japanese woman, an Iranian-American woman, a Californian blonde, a brunette from Illinois, Andy's college girlfriend (originally from Chicago), a Scottish woman, a Cuban-American, a New York/Israeli Jew, a Welsh woman, a Korean-American and one more (so far) in a chapter that's available on the Patreon (who is also Asian although not American), but hasn't been made public yet. An offer was extended to an African-American woman, but she declined (see 1:28).
That puts Andy's harem at around 47% Caucasian Americans, 17% Caucasian non-Americans, 17% Asian, 10% Latina, 8% Middle Eastern. Saying Niko's "one of the few non-white women in his harem" is both inaccurate and misleading, when if you add it up, Andy's harem consists of over 30% non-white women.
As for disability and neurodiversity, some of that has been addressed by the regenerations as part of the story. If you recall, Lexi showed up with quite a sizable amount of scarring damage, which was healed off. And while I haven't called attention to it, Whitney is on the spectrum, but I have been, as advised by those people I know on the spectrum, not to draw attention to it, but simply let it be reflected in her behavior and demeanor. But I can't reflect everything for everyone.
Anonymous: If you've read Phil's Tale, you'd know - Niko was lying about ever having been a data analyst. (Andy, of course, discovers this later in Book 1 anyway.) She's part of Air Force Security Services, also known as the Air Force's Military Police. Part of the reason the side stories exist is to provide additional context and perspectives to things, rather than just sticking with Andy's perspective (which is the prerogative of Book 1) the whole time.
feel_the_beast: As of 20th Nov 2024, Andy's harem still has no African/Caribbean women. I kept track. Niko is one of the few non-white women in his harem. I don't think it's intentional, but I see it again and again in harem stories here.
To Anon above - no, ethnic diversity is not a requirement for the story, a person's appearance doesn't have to be a plot point or a check box, but it's a strange thing how lacking it is given the author's proclaimed progressivism. I'd like more visibility of disability and neurodiversity too.
Posting this November 13th, 2024.
The politics aged fast.
How can Niko be 22 years old, a certified pilot, and have had sufficient training to be a data analyst? Should have made her older and tossed out one job line to make it less jarring.
Seconding the commenter who thought it racist for Lily to demand a non-white woman as #3 for Andy. Not her business anyway.
In response to a commenter a few comments back: no, a story does not need ethnic diversity to be a good read. At least to me, a LOT of the diversity gives the impression of being bolted on - it was not necessary given the setting, timeline, and overall story.
Finally: I see that there is an entire story universe, with over a dozen writers and over a hundred installments. Om top of that, lots of side tracks. I *might* have considered reading all of that if it were one writer, published as a single one-track series, and less political inserts along the way. As it is, reading all of this seems like an undertaking akin to reading each and every February sucks spinoff.
But then again, those aspects of the whole thing may make it the perfect balm for those who were traumatized by the 2024 presidential election.
Might have a look at the comments on some other installments, though - there should be some hoots there!