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Click hereAva and I had more than fifty good years together. How many people get even a fraction of that?
Truth be told, I just needed to get some of this off my chest... get it out in the open. Ava and I hid our relationship, even from those closest to us, for most of our lives.
Oh, it's not as if these people were stupid, as if they didn't know.
But, it was never discussed or even acknowledged. At least not until late... very late in life.
Hell. We never even held hands in public until Ava was in her seventies and I was in my sixties.
This is a hard, bitter world, but I always, always, always had Ava to give me shelter.
And she always had me.
As far as I know, we were the two most fortunate people on the planet.
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I do love this story so; it's so caring and compassionate. I do like a writer that clearly cares about their characters. I really hope you find time to write more often.
Fantastic well written a great story thanks l could have quite believed it has true to life.
Great.Unusual multiracial twist.Very daring given the time the story is set.A really good read.
Um, to Lilkahuna, I did post "The Magic Bean" just this past November. Maybe you're not counting that one because it was in a different category than the others? I'd love to write more, but an exhausting schedule doesn't allow for many opportunities.
Magnificent. Complex, multi-dimensional characters, Terrific plot development, The writing is superb.
How can you not be writing still!!?? You are depriving us of some true writing talent. Such a good story and told so beautifully. Please come back.
One of the best stories I’ve ever read on this site. Certainly is a favorite of mine, definitely will come back to it whenever I need (cough) inspiration
An exquisitely sweet story, well-written, AND full of excitement for the birth of modern comics? I didn't know it was still Christmas XD.
You’ve done great with the build up. I am the type of reader that loves a story, not just sex scene after sex scene. Thank you for being so descriptive about the building of a relationship before this sex, it brings the characters in your stories to life.
The best I've read so far. And I have been reading extensively for quite some time now
Thank you for a wonderful journey
I wonder how one goes about bringing their attention to copyright violations.
This is a wonderfully entertaining and well written story! It's a crying shame if some talentless bastard stole it.
Great story, great development of the relationship, lovely sex.
You might be interested to know that it is so good that someone has plagiarised it, just changing a few minor details
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So well done! It's a beautiful story, thank you so much for sharing this with us!
I wouldn't ask for better story. I could read this story again and again and i did . Well it always give me hope in love and life it self. Thanks! Sorry I want to rate it 10 star but it wouldn't let me.
This is so well written, I almost felt I was there in the fifties with them. I have a fascination with that time, even though it was so repressed sexually and a girl like me wouldn't have had much fun then. I loved everything about this story. It even made me shed a tear at the end.
Flowing, beautiful prose, compelling narrative, lovable characters. Just excellent.
Love your writing,there are few writers on Lit that write as well as you do.
And I,ve just added your 100rth like.Love
I was so happy when I came across this story awhile back. It is beautifully written and told. Thank you for sharing.
What a beautiful story, beautifully written. I hope I'll also be fortunate enough to spend 5 decades or more with my one True love, she doesn't know it yet, but she sure will be mine soon.
Your words left me wanting, yearning for the same intimacy that you describe in such exemplary detail.
Fantastic! great storytelling, and what a fantastic love story.
Your stories should be made into a movie or something. Indeed breathtaking!
I'm a lifelong comic book fan, so it was a pleasant surprise to come across such a well-written story on one of my favorite subjects. I've read a bit about some of the artists and writers who worked in the field back then and it seems like you got all the details just right.
More importantly, you gave us characters we could care about and put them in a situation we could believe.
Romance, hot sex and comic books. A tough combination to beat. :)
Your story gave me chill bumps and brought me to tears. It reminded me of the days when I discovered my first lover, who was also my mentor, and I felt all of those feelings again. Thank you so much for sharing. What an amazing relationship you two had!
I love your story. You both will be remembered for my lifetime, I promise. How lucky of you to have had fifty years. Thank you.
This story had momentum. I loved the build up from the early story, to the relationship starting and the quick pace of the sex scenes. Or maybe I was just speed reading by that point? Their discovery of each other was exquisite and genuine. I remember well those early days of discovering how good another person could be and this story described it beautifully. The ending gave me tears. Thank you x
I felt the love these two had. I left their passion. This was brilliantly written! jumped a bit too quickly to the ending if you ask me, but this was wonderful! I'm making an account just to add it to favorites