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Click hereThe waves gradually slowed and she was, eventually, able to catch her breath. She looked up as her eyes came back into focus and watched him catch his own breath. Still inside her, he rolled over with a sigh, taking her with him pressing their sweat slicked bodies together with his free arm.
Her head rested on his arm, her cheek pressed against the hard ridge of his chest. She slid a hand along the groove, trailing it down to his stomach and pressed her hand against it, exploring the firm lines of the knotted muscles with her finger tips. His free arm released her to smooth over the length of her side, caressing her waist and hip. She turned her face to his find his eyes closed.
She smiled softly and ran her fingers over his cheek and thick jaw. His lips curved under her hand. He wasn't asleep yet she thought.
"What's your name?" He didn't open his eyes, but his hand still moved over her.
"Caliope" she answered softly.
"Like the muse."
"Yes."
"That's lovely."
Her smile widened, those words seemed incongruous on his lips.
"Thank you."
He cracked an eye at her. "You're welcome."
"And yours?"
"Thelios. But don't tell anyone, I have a reputation to keep."
"Also lovely."
He had a warm reverberating laugh that made her curl her body tighter against his.
"You really have no fear of me do you?" He asked, nuzzling the top of her head.
"As I told you before, I'm terrified."
"I have trouble believing that."
"You'll just have to take my word for it I suppose."
"Hmm."
Her eyes lids felt weighted and she found herself unable to remain conscious and drifted off quickly into a deep sleep.
- COMMENTS
Beware: while long and AWESOME, this story was abandoned and it is rumored that the author may have died. I still couldn’t bring myself to give it less than 5* though.
Big fan of paranormal romance novels here, and this has everything I look for: excellent story telling, characters I'm drawn to and can relate to, and steamy sex scenes. Often I just scroll ahead to the sex, but this had me backing up to reread the entire thing.
Second time around and still a very good story. Sorry I can't give it another five stars, but there are more chapters to read and hopefully they will be just as good.
I am indeed an idiot. There is more! I feel like my wish came to true in an instant... I will read it in the evening, looking forward to it ♥
Lovely, indeed. I would also read more of their lives. What about the other girls. Will they be sent back? Wouldn't they be considered disgrace to their family if they would go back? How will they cope with their situation? I need to know more. More! 😂
For folks dismayed that the story ends abruptly, there are several more chapters! See the section that says "Read more of this series", or go to the author's page to see the full list.
Who would have thought that sacrificing oneself would end in such hot sex? Looking forward to see what other surprises lay in store for our now deflowered hero. Loved the story.
I love this story! I love the characters, and the erotic scenes are the best written of any on Lit!
The innocent joy of discovering Lit and the carefree rush through new territory until one discovers that it isn't so easy to rediscover favoured pieces.
So it is a joy to rediscover and read such a treasure of a story and now being logged on be able to favourite it, just as I should have done a long time ago.
I come back every year to see if the writer has taken pity on us readers, and continued the story 😭😭
God, I couldn’t put this one down and I’m so sad it was left unfinished.
An exceptionally well-written story. A little drag later on, but even the tedious bits are expertly penned, vibrantly descriptive and aren't a waste to read, I just get impatient with the way installment stories tend to draw out every chapter with endless description and attempts to incite readership with cliffhanger drama. However, my only complaint is that it was never finished.
This is my second time reading this story, I find a lot more in it now. Glad to have found it again.
I love the longer stories. Especially, if the storyline has more than just sex. This should be a movie. I would watch. 👍👏👌
Great story! (Well, Part 1 anyway. I haven't read the rest) Just one thing I want to point out to this and all authors reading this comment: Stop assuming all cultures across time and space have a thing for covering tits from the eyes of strangers. I mean, this is set in ancient mythological Greece, or ancient mythological pseudo-Greece. They really weren't that prissy about someone seeing their tits.
This is the best story I have ever read on this site. Amazing artwork.
Yes, its unfinished. Its been almost a decade now and it appears the author will not return. Someone has tried very hard to contact the author with no luck. . In my opinion it is 100% worth reading anyway
How about you DONT give away the ending??? Who tells people the ending of a book without adding a spoiler alert? Dont read the comment below mine if you dont want to know the ending.
SPOILER ALERT
As many chapters as this has, and as GOOD as it is, unless you like a cliffhanger, then STOP READING NOW!! The author stops writing to do real world shit and became ambivalent with writing, so you're left with a main and sub character fleeing to safety, other main character hunting the trouble and other side main character not knowing if he's dead or alive. Argh!!
OoOoh, this is delicious! ...and finally, a story where the guy (cough) doesn't pull out and roll over the second he cums! Always baffled me why guys wouldn't want to stay in till it shrank and slipped out.
Once started I had to read it in one rush, well done !
Still unfinished. I still try and contact the author to see if things are ok. Who knows...
Try and imagine your own ending...
I’ve re read this story multiple times because it’s well written and is entertaining on multiple levels. It’s just unfortunate that pandarus hasn’t finished it. I hope the author is okay and this is just horrific writers block.
Wonderful! Hot! Sexy!
So well written, so drawing! I can't write more just now, Chapter Two is calling me!
Probably the best deflowering scene I've read here on this site. Keep up the good work!
Please complete it or allow someone else to take it up. Please, it's just too good.
How would you leave us with such a cliffhanger?
This is probably the 9th or 10th time I've read this story knowing that it is incomplete. Why read it if I know i know it's not finished? Because it's the best story on literotica and I'll fight anyone who says differently.
This story was left unfinished...but still well worth the read. I can only hope it is being published and will one day be in a store and I can buy. I can dream can't i??
This story was finished... 5 years later - lost all hope that it will ever be. Probably suffering creative block.
Dying for more. This is my favorite story I pray for continuation of it one day.
I'm thankful that I didn't find this story until 2014 but am just as obsessed with this delicious story! I dream of the day Uncle P can put us out of our misery and continue the story.