All Comments on 'Spring Break Ch. 07: Sunday Afternoon'

Another good story Sun. It took a bit to get used to the name switching between real and fake, but I think you kept it together nicely.

Personally, I would like to see Dirk fuck Laura for a main meal, and take Sis for deserts. Sandra can be the cherry on top...

Can't wait for Chapter 8!

Good story. I think I should start at Chapter 1 and work my way through. I hope you're planning some interracial action while Dirk and Steve are on the farm - maybe get the daughter of the farmworker involved.

I would have loved it if you kept the identity of Sis and Sandra hidden for the reader until Steve discovered it. Still loved the story, 5 stars and favorite.

Thank you for all the positive comments. I'll see if I can work in some of the suggestions.